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~~Napping Thru Reality~~
i dont awake from sleep cause im asleep while awake
a never ending dream state that i cant seem to shake changes to make, but those are risks not easy to take routines to break, but im just a fiend for mistake pain stakenly fake, i cant believe my own thoughts a long line of bullshit thats always coming up short lie to myself for sport cause the ball is rarely in my court cant handle reality at all, so i just let it go & abort my mind's a resort, taking vacation from the everyday in each & every way i cant reach the place im destined to stay im dressed for success only to let stress & regret stain away any hopes for today, anyway.. tommorow is not a given as the world turns my head never stops spinnin from start to begining, im sitting amid harsh critisism & constant riticule is so habitual, its become a bitch ritual for some people who, consider it cool to mark Rich a fool What, When, Where & Who gave you the permission too? that, in addition to, all this bull im forced to listen to its just sick and pitiful, these rules are set up just to limit you its dispicable, its become an issue to make life less hospitable thats it, my eyes are full... and these lies are true so what's a mixed up crooked mind to do? go back, first line, peep... sleep and keep rewinding........ through!!!! |
IF YOU READ THEN REPLY... ITS NOT HARD TO FIGURE OUT!!!!
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that was some ill shit...i loved the word play on this, it had complexity and good vocab...nice topic too...keep spittin that ill shit namsayin...wahid
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damn, this was raw....
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The Beginning started out dope THen You continued on will illness to end it up with my fav. lines Quote:
Love this piece... they need to not sleep on this... one |
damn, that had some ill flow, good vocab.. not too much wordplay but I liked what wordplay was in there.. multies were sick..
for some people who, consider it cool to mark Rich a fool What, When, Where & Who gave you the permission too?"... I like that.. it sounded real smooth when I tried it myself.. nice work as usual.. |
ALL FEEDBACK IS APPRECIATED
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dope...mind state was on point on this shit...content was nice as well...flow was off the wall...but what i was feeling the most was the word play...nice drop...keep blessing the board
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thanks J... Peace
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This was dopeness Rich...tha begginin' was nice...But U juss went raw on this part...
"& constant riticule is so habitual, its become a bitch ritual for some people who, consider it cool to mark Rich a fool What, When, Where & Who gave you the permission too? that, in addition to, all this bull im forced to listen to its just sick and pitiful, these rules are set up just to limit you its dispicable, its become an issue to make life less hospitable" From tha begginin' of that to tha end of that part was juss raw as fucc...Keep it up man and get at me 'bout our collab...Peace |
thanks Mentill... I will get back to you
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nice spit dun,i liked howyou rewind to the start an shit,was clever...i know exactly how you feel sometimes nahmean...
changes to make, but those are risks not easy to take routines to break, but im just a fiend for mistake a feind for mistakes...god damn cat i know exactly how you feel...shit was nice evolve propz... bismillah |
Good looks... comments appreciated
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Forget Napping On Reality... You Are Really Napping On This!!!!!!!!
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no doubt,mes an narc get it all the time...cats aint willin to read nothing that aint there own it seems...and when they do they jsut pretendin they read it,nahmean,shits a down...
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You People Dont Know A Nice Peice When You Read It!!!!
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Im Sick Of This Shit.... I Dont Think Im Gonna Post Anymore Open Mics On Here
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Lmfao at you making this a sticky..
make my verse a sticky. bitch.... it was obviously very nice. wordplay was coo'. you could have upped the multis...just kidding...multis where there too..content was great. overall just a very safe piece. not too amazing..definatly not bad... good job... |
lol
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Even as a sticky i get slept on... this sucks
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lmao....me too
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evolve that was a Ill Drop Dawg, i loved it
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How can people sleep on this shit??
and it's a sticky...... the Open Mics are dead |
damn, this was dope... the flow was off the hook and the lyrics were amazing. All the contradicting sentences were ill and the sentences that seem contradicting but went together at the end were mind boggling... It's awesome to see you switch styles from battle to open mic and keep it dope in each category... you deserved this sticky
pz oh... and my 1000th post... :D |
i dont know why cats sleep in here,its buggin me...
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lol at Domain... Congradulations on your 1000th post...lol...
But i do appreciate the feedback... even though alot of people sleep, the real heads recognize... PEACE |
yo that shit was crazy nigga loved the word play kid
keep it commin |
YO FOO THAT SHIT WAS OFF THE HOOK YOUR VERSE, WORDPLAY, AND HOW YOU MADE IT ALL FIT WAS DOPE KEEP THIS SHIT UP YO
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damn you got 2 page's why you still bitchin
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x-signals blah
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Very nice man.....very nice......I was definetly feeling this......Id give it a 9/10.......I loved the rewind line....that was just sick
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Yo your an emcee that needs to be more reconized i look up to u has a emcee, mad respect for this ill shyt
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fuckin sick.......serious.......damn you killed that shit.....nuff said.....thread closed....lol....good wordplay everything was sick but yeah you got nuff cats hangin on ya balls already....lol
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Yah
Was really felling this one
nice word play dawg keep it up -1- Infumuz |
THAT WAS ILL AS FUCK YO
KEEP POSTIN SHIT LIKE THIS |
Thanks for all Feedback... Appreciated.... this is the Last Up
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This drop was Tight
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i read it again ... and i still love it .... sick drop
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lmao...rich you get a lot of
replies. of one lines..i dont even get those. it sucks... |
That was legendary material!
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