MYsterious vs. Franchise21
 

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aight here i go.........

if i had to change my name ill change it to suicide cuz my ryhmes is suicidal/
you aint no rapper ur a singer from american idol/
talk shit and you'll get sprayed,im like playstation three ive never been played/
i spit acid rain to burn the skin right off ur dome/
now ur name just went from franchise21 to MR.FUNNY BONE/
u just mad cause ur dick is as skinny as a noodle/
ur ryhmes is playschool like a magna doodle/
my ryhmes is so sick i should live inside the hospital/
niggas like u recite my shit like it came out the gospels/
i won this battle cause i got all of rapbattles clappin/
ur career is offically now over,so stop rappin/

are u gonna spit or what im waitin......aight one............................................... .................................................. .................................................. .................................................. .................................................. .................................................. .................................................. .................................................. .................................................. .................................................. ......................

A yo u talkin bout im a singer in american idol//
nigga ima wup ya ass cause you know how i do//
Im like tyson ill knock u out wit one blow//
you like going to jail just ta drop da soap, n at night get poked//
Matta fact u deader dan then somebody wit aids, ima play u like spades hang ya ass like dreads or braids//
U don't want it, cause if you did den ya ass be a fool, ima hit u so hard u bout to log of rapbattles//
Yo wat type of name is mysterious, my lines hittin u so hard u gettin delirious//
Lookin like 50 cent before he hit da weightroom, ima merk u and ya whole crew, cause u know how i do, dont get mad cause a dominican just merked u//

BOTH VERSES WERE VERY WEAK....ONE RHYME LINES..SOFT PUNCHES NO WORD PLAY MULTIS NADA....BUT I HAVE TO GIVE THIS TO MYSTEROUS DUE TO THA FACK HE HAD AT LEAST ONE FUCKIN PUNCH.....

well thanx on that but can u poll vote cause that would make it alot better ok so good look........aight one ..............holla back at ur boy

neither verse was too strong but Mysterious took it with a couple of punches. the other cat didn't even spit one decent punch ..............

VOTE-MYSTERIOUS

return the favor and check out my battle with Punk'D (and remember to poll vote)

yo my bad i dont have enough posts to poll vote if i did i would but can u do me the favor to poll vote mine...thanx......aight one holla back

Vote= Mysterious...because he had much better punches, a good flow, and his structure was much better..., franchise you need to work on your punches a lil....

hey return the favor and vote on my battle with Carson jet
heres the link:
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=44847

aight thanx buts thats three votes and only one poll vote so can ya do me the favor of pollin aight thanx......aight one holla back

ayo i did poll mines vote in....its prolly other votez...ayo return the favor on my battle....

peace out....
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killa

aight good look on that, and come on peepz im still uppin 4 votes ......dont forget to poll...aight one holla back

lol, this was a aight battle, but i think mysterious took it cause he had harder punchlines and franchise verses wasnt all dat great, they were 2 short

aight good look, but can u poll that would be whole lot better....aight than one .......holla back uppin 4 more votes

aight still uppin for them votes .......and dont forget to poll vote...so far im up1-0........aight one holla back

this was a close one because both of these was on the lower grade, but i'll have to give it to mysterious cuz his shit flowed the seem the whole time. Some of the otha kats was too long, he shoulda chopped dem up. Vote is Mysterious, flow tipped it to his favor.

ill hit this vote shit up if u hit this up
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=45116

come on peepz just need two more poll votes and this battle is fuckin over..........i voted in alot of battles do me the favor and vote aight thanx...........aight one holla back

vote Myst.....shit flowed betta, he had some nice punches that hit iight

fran needs work......make ya disses betta, add some punches and tighten ya flow

aight good look on that vote......still uppin 4 votes come on people one more and this shit over u know who won so poll...............aight thanx holla back at ur boy