"Renegades and Soldiers"ft. Tha Rhymer DO NOT SLEEP ON THIS!!!
 

*Hope you're awake cuz my verse is long*

"Renegades and Soldiers"

{Verse 1: Withersman}
How many renegades and soldiers go through the wasting//
people goin'' against you and people always instigating//
but you try to be optimist and make it work//
but a nigga always comes around and makes that shit hurt//
well I'm tired of it, it's time to make these niggas pay//
make all those mutha fuckas see the holy gates//
the gateways of heaven is what you need to learn//
I've done too much sinning so in hell I wait to burn//
no matter how coarse the trail is I won't be quitting//
I'm a renegade I gotta keep those revolvers spinning//
reluctant niggas always try to hate//
which resulted in Don Killuminati's 7 day//
day theory, these niggas seeming extremely Erie//
too many people in this world wanna kill me//
I got all you vigilantes stumbling over my bars//
admit it nigga I'm as deadly as the disease called SARS//
My furor is intimidating all these consinplaters//
if they come up in my face, I'll put blood all over their body and counterfeit gators//
why are you missing a few vertebrae from your spine//
that megalomania got you not feeling so fine//
quit commiting all that mutha fuckin meddlesome//
don't be proud cuz Medusa think you handsome//
When my friend was shoot in front of me//
the only way to get the bullet out was through tracheotomy//
my words come out outstandigly exuberant//
and that results into lyricst to become exulant//
I got all my guns loaded and saluting me//
when I give them a command they reply, "Yes your majesty"//
regulating niggas is what I gotta deal with//
next up is Tha Rhymer to finish this//

{Hook}
Renegades and Soldiers//
Harder than boulders//
will seperate your arms and shoulders//
never insitutionalize all the times I broke ya//
we told ya, we told ya//
Renegades and Soldiers//
Harder than boulders//
will seperate your arms and shoulders//
never insitutionalize all the times I broke ya//
we told ya, we told ya//

[Verse 2: Tha Rhymer}
i've been paiently waitn to get this off my chest,//
now i got to put punk niggas to rest//
Yall bitch asses know who u are...//
Now i gots to raise tha bar...//
Yall niggas are a sick piece of trash, //
get on ur knees an kiss my ass//
You think what u say is the past//
Shit don't work that way,//
thats what i got to say,//
Nigga, i'm Marylands only bad guy//
ya bitch ass live in a pig sty//
theres these white boys around me sayin "NIGGA"//
dont u know im friends wit X, Nas, and Jigga//
dont play ya luck//
when u see me, duck//
Ya moms owe me money, when she see me she yell FUCK!//
Bitch, u done broke "THA RHYMER'S" law//
Ima have to fuck u up, and break ya dog's paw//
A yo, Renegades & Soldiers is just to warn//
Don't say shit when im jackin off to ya moms porn.//
Withersman and Tha Rhymer, who can be betta?//
we just rap to pull in our 6 mill. chedda, //
yo, this is Tha Rhymer up in this plan//
My nigga bout to take this shit, right Withersman?//

{Hook}
Renegades and Soldiers//
Harder than boulders//
will seperate your arms and shoulders//
never insitutionalize all the times I broke ya//
we told ya, we told ya//
Renegades and Soldiers//
Harder than boulders//
will seperate your arms and shoulders//
never insitutionalize all the times I broke ya//
we told ya, we told ya//
Renegades and Soldiers//
Harder than boulders//
will seperate your arms and shoulders//
never insitutionalize all the times I broke ya//
we told ya, we told ya//
Renegades and Soldiers//
Harder than boulders//
will seperate your arms and shoulders//
never insitutionalize all the times I broke ya//
we told ya, we told ya//

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Nice collab , , ,, , both emcees dropped it like its hot

...i agree u both represented yo fo real...keep it up....peace

both emcees came with nice drops.....

have similar styles and it fit well together...

this was a nice collab...

the hook was a little long though

would sound nice in audio

Aight Thanx Yall.
Uppin on opinions

DO NOT SLEEP ON!!!!!!

If any of yall wanna collab with me just PM me.

tight drop both of youse!
Withers: came out tops for me, but both were tight!

can you return do favour? http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=44992

if anybody wanna do a song, hit me up, man

Come on people dont sleep on this

yo tight lyrics man. Tha Rhymer? he was tight. Keep reppin' man
i should do a rap wit him man

Thanx yall. UPPIN FOR VIEWS DONT SLEEP ON THIS!!!!!!

Come on people dont sleep on this

i liked it withersman...yall both had similar styleskinda fast and shit im pickin up off wha tive read...do an audio itd be ok...meta was right the hook was a bit long but...


peep my shit zions and the uick spit i did tell me wha tyou think...
bismillah

Aight thanx DONT SLEEP ON THIS!!!!!!!

COME ON PEOPLE READ THIS!!!!!!!

hey, i liked it ok i guess, i donno a bit of a played topic ya know
withersman ur shit started a bit simple but u hauled some good ass vocab out late in ur verse i liked

tha rhymer ur lines were a bit short for couplets i thought, i donno maybe its ur style id just need to hear it ya know
either way it was a pretty decent drop had some good shit in it

return tha favour hit up my drop

Aight thanx dawg

YO PEOPLE COME ON AND VIEW THIS PLEZ DONT SLEEP ON THIS!!!

COME ONE PEOPLE READ THIS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

COME ON PEOPLE PEEP THIS!!!!!


oh yea............."Renegades and Soldiers'' REMIX COMING SOON!!!!

COME ON PEOPLE!!!!!!!

tight flow liked it a whole lata......

Yo...not to sound like a bad guy.....I thought it was so-so at best.......the rhymes was basic....the metas was basic...cept in the hook.........Rhymer's lines....they rhymed....but they had no chemistry........felt forced.....I dunno man....I just read Sand, and Evolve's verses.......so I just looked at excellence...and I wasn't feeling it........but.....I could hear it in audio.......and it does sound like a rap song played on commercial radio.......take that as a compliment....if you want to.....no hate though.....just telling you what I thought

aight thanx dawg