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Rise 05-09-03 04:03 PM

lilsmokey vs Rise
 
rules:
10lines max, Not 2in 1 line, or 1bar equalls 2 lines, just 10 lines..OK
Explained and Poll votes will decide
No Crew/D.Ryding/or Hate votes
No Recycling...that means no bitting off each other verses either
No Prewrites...all keystyle, be honest with it
check in and we will have a 45 minutes keying limit....ready?

lilsmokey 05-09-03 04:09 PM

check in................................................ .................................................. .................................you Ready ??............................

Rise 05-09-03 04:12 PM

Yep
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Start Keying

lilsmokey 05-09-03 04:27 PM

imma rip out ya heart and lungs and replace them with ma verbal toxins /
im more deadlier than a group of water Mocasins /
i punch "lines" in ya chest to give you scoliosis /
i saw ya mom askin for creame fillin at hostes /
these brutal lyrics are gonna beat ya ass worse than a round trip to a prison /
the only way you'd flow looser than me is if you lost your tendons /
let me mention the suspension ya life has when ya clentchin /
on here rappin like some kind of minister /
my raw sensability is enough for a finisher /
i make you hotter than having scarlet fever..... im the only mutha fucka to become the lyrical sinister /

holla

had to hurry thunder storm is starting

Conflict 05-09-03 04:32 PM

yo i'ma hit up this shit when it's done, but can ya hit up mine
kerrdezzy vs. punk'd
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lilsmokey 05-09-03 04:35 PM

i cant poll vote sorry............................................. .................................................. .................................................. ................./.

Rise 05-09-03 04:48 PM

Read......set...go.....

**Nas beat drops**

**Gun Go's Off**
**they shootin**


its like all he pressed was the long key on his KeyBoard, the way this amauters got boards::
They "Blank"...cause we see threw you<--->My AVATAR SHOT YOURS::

Peep tha avatars...lol

He's more pussy than a 80's-Play::(cats)
dam his punches suck, even his "bites" dont connect like "Macy Grey::

smoke I'm splitting you, especially cause your in the N.othing B.ut S.oft L.yrics crew::
Dont worry you'll still be 4-0 after I win, cause even your loss dont want to stick with you::

LiL hopes we, dont see, how I leave his verse a "lil smokey"::
Pussy-cat wheres Josie?....I'm at the top NOW, while your like aids patients, your getting ill SLOWLY::

Rock your Bell..south, like I droped your Nokia::
after this, everyone will be glad your gone, just like that show"Cita"::

Anoying MuFukah........Rise

lilsmokey 05-09-03 04:57 PM

shit was hot but you callin me a mutha fucka ???....................................??
uppin for votes

Rise 05-09-03 08:05 PM

Lol.....yep..............................
J/k.............yes I am.............not........lol

Up this MuFuaka for votes.........

lilsmokey 05-09-03 11:31 PM

uppin for sum votes............................................. .................................................. .................................................. ...................holla

N4$A 05-09-03 11:38 PM

i say Rise coz he had some good punches like the avatar line...tight but smokey ur shit was a tight aswell i just think rise had the edge

lilsmokey 05-09-03 11:45 PM

vote doesnt count did not poll vote.........................REMEMBER TO POLL VOTE PEOPLE...................peace

lilsmokey 05-10-03 09:16 AM

need votes peeps............................................. ..........
remember to poll vote aswell

west 05-10-03 09:24 AM

tha aviator line took it for rise i'd say,liked both dudes flows,thought it was close but as i have to decide i'm goin rise.
Poll = Rise,return tha favor,peace.

lilsmokey 05-10-03 09:26 AM

1-0 your favur holla peeps and i'll return the favur............................................. .................................................. .................................................. ...................................peace

XTC 05-10-03 09:44 AM

im goin wit lilsmokey on this his punches connected better than rise's did...vote = lilsmokey.:.:.:.:.:.:.:.:.

lilsmokey 05-10-03 10:02 AM

aight thanx 1-1 uppin

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Rise 05-10-03 11:01 AM

More explained than that people..and more Poll Votes Plz

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Saladin 05-10-03 11:54 AM

Rise got this one with some nasty punchlines...the other dewd was just plain and simple..rise..just shined more..

Rise 05-10-03 12:26 PM

Up Plz

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Conflict 05-10-03 12:30 PM

i like rise for the harder punches, it was a good close battle
vote=rise
hit up my shit, kerrdezzy vs. irrelivance

Autistic 05-10-03 12:31 PM

my vote goes ta rise becuase of way better punchlines and flow
vote=rise
reurn tha favor and vote for my battlesw against newrapper and tha one against NH.

Rise 05-10-03 01:41 PM

Up Plz...........we need more Poll votes

CMon People...thanx

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Rise 05-10-03 02:35 PM

Uppin for more votes plz...........thanx

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Ripper 05-10-03 02:54 PM

Rise was better with punches and word play. like a few others said, his avatar line was good but then again his whole verse was. lilsmokey u was good just didnt have the creativity and flow that rise had. good battle though.

Vote = Rise

Rise 05-10-03 03:46 PM

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newrapper 05-10-03 04:07 PM

my vote goes to my nigga rise.




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slob on my knob like
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Rise 05-10-03 04:14 PM

need poll vote

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Rise 05-10-03 04:44 PM

[dam...up..need vote]

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.:FiorZ:. 05-10-03 05:45 PM

rise ripped this shit...
better punches and flow...
avator line killed this kid alone...
great spit as always dawg...
other dude was tight but rise took advantage of spittin second...
nice battle anyway...
peep my battle vs. pestilence...

Rise 05-10-03 05:45 PM

YO...ARE YALL THERE?....VOTE PLZ

ITS Simlpe....explain than POLL..thanx


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