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Destrukxion VS A-g
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first to 5 wins or 3-0 KO No dr, hata, or crew votes |
look nigga this is not the matrix. lol j/p im a do my shit right now but its gonna take a long ass time cause my shit aint written like some dudes up in herrrr that i probly could name aight~1n~
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i spit rhymes that explode while your bust-in//
conduct-en your skeleton causen destruction// look dawg this sure aint joe and the volcano// even bullet time hits you while there slow// eentualy we inspected that youv been a hoe// how many times have you sucked dick fo dough//? you get more played out then sesame street man// arnt you that groutch that lives in garbage cans// rhymes melt and dissinagrate wit your hands// you can never be able to come close to my heat// your rhymes are nothin but deep throat to beats// my god ask for forgivnes becuaes your weak// il say maby your rhymes are just in to deep// you beatin me is like a crack head wit no sleep// after this battle your body is sliced into meat// |
Its gonna be like 50, murda ya in eight bars, transfix this verse to leave you in awe/
Going against me dawg, is like a servant going against royalty/ I hold the power so bow down before me and show your loyalty/ Blast this pussy back to his knees, for stepping past his fuckin boundaries/ I’ma fuck up ur immune system and leave you with infliction, as if I was the full blown A.I.D.S disease/ Infect your “speech” cause an “impediment”, as if you had a delayed reaction to speak/ They gonna play my verse over and over, like Dominique Wilkins-“The Human Highlight Film”/ While this geek is at home playin wit “Tickle me Elmo, and watchin re-runs of “Mr. Rogers”/ This lil infant needs to take his shit on, cuz its time he submit/ Say what you want, you’re the “Idiot” I’m the “Savant”/ Its time you show some fuckin gratitude, cuz I display remarkable aptitude, by lyrically assassinating bitches/ Your shit was no where near fascinating, that shit was weak, just like ya “Hits from tha street”, "playedout'/ We gonna be lucky if anyone reads this thread, Cuz this pussys spittin bullshit, as if he had “Turret’s Syndrome”/ I’m getting irritated, so fuck this verbal phrase/ Its time to let me glock blaze……click, click- that’s two to tha dome..... |
Aight sorry bout that, i had to work, but lets gohead and let the voting commence. Explain your answer and then poll vote.
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man all yall cats need to stop sleeping and vote!!!! foreals im tryin to get this over wit yah feel me so we now who one~1n~
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Destruction took this away...
It flowed better, hit harder, and the spelling didn't make me reread every other line to make sure I pronounced some shit right. Vote: Destruction |
VOTE = DESTRUCTION..
REASON: He had betta punches...more flow...a-g's linez were too short but he did have pretty flow... ^^an ok battle |
Thanx Born to kill. Now we need some more votes ppl. come on dont sleep on it, vote... 1-0 uppin votes
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aight dang son you got this im preety sure of this cause i told you im just startin to battle. you 1 me 0. good spit by da way.
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There we go Legend. Come on ppl lets get some more votes 2-0
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Thanx man, i respect that, you need to make you lines a lil bit long and come with more punches thanx again..................
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hit me up on this & ill vote
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=46181 .................................................. ................ |
tell me what i can do alot better so i can deffinatly prepare for my next battle cause i want to elevate. so wit votes tell me what i can do bettah~1n~
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Vote = Destrukxion
Reason = had better punches and flow. a-g ur shit was aight, just work on more direct and harder hittin punches. lengthen ur lines aswell and use sum wordplay and shit 2 direct a better punch. |
aight this is a ko. yo good shit and good luck on your next battle aight you got this son. some one close this ~1n~
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Hey lets get a cuple more votes on this so they can close this up,
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yo nice 1 destrukxion hun first time iv actually read ya shit n im impressed your talented but a-g i recon u will get better coz ya flow aint too bad
take it easy catch ya laterz |
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