Zions
 

desimation.......


yo,yo aiight yo when everything crumbles...ill still stand,you cant break me like that...


yo these cats is crying out the names of the zions in order to claim a throne of triumph//
placement of a frail minded empire design,automate and observe the bloodlines'yo ass is mine'//
from this day forth your soul belongs to the cause of back peddle and retort,of course//
you could manage to escape the escapades of the innitiate only to be trampled by the zealot horde//
uranium pellets forced down the throats of headlight blinded deer,rabbits an cabbage patch urchins,dammit...
hold true to the name of the imperilistic monolithic skytower,its a show of power,we devour//
the populace and spit em out at an alarming rate,all in the name of the first inntiate,the creator//
casting spells on the slave labourers brainwashed into thinkin they gettin credit for makin vapours//
toil till they die,all the while whistlin an grinnin,from now back,back to the futile beginin//

in whos name? convince me of a single deity and maybe ill give you a dollar awww.

the skyscrapers loom over the landscape,like a watchhouse overlooking a future battleground//
perfect sounds of the trumpet play in the distance,a another phalanx raises banners by instinct//
bump it misfits,you know you want to...dont you...you love it...
your excelence i didnt mean to destroy the manifest but the pirates gave me their word theyd confess//
but they lied,how could i tell that they knew how to spell innocence regress,im actually impressed//
by their display of graceful caligraphy finess,its evenly propotioned,not one sign of ignorance//
deliverance...the existance of the inevitable distance of time is tickin by with every second//
ten steps a lesson seminar,confession announced from afar,to the pinnicle of authority,to where the bandits are...
theyll rob your carrae if youmanage to gain more wealtht en the average,coz they that savage,slit your throat//
like galleon pirate boats my hope floats in a barrel of tar,anticdotes,false prhophets popes,and a host//
of other elementary tactics,used unforgivingly bastard,im that angered god nammit.

haha...whattup...
i lost all hope...its like that...shits like that nahmean...
hope is the first step along the path to doubt(no doubt)wich is the ticket to that little overcapacitated vietnamese fishing vessle along the river of demise...aint going nowhere but down...

perpendicular paradise,i only got 5 dollars off the entry price,so ima have to work harder,strap a bomb to my chest//
press the button in the name allah,detonate the step ladder,to step farther,only to die in the hands of a matyr//
the skrimage starter,i be like hind abu ubtah in the battle for makkah weapons master,facet matter,down syphons//
poison vipers,i decifer the code of the oblivous to obtain the guest list of the limitless,scribe my name on the bottom//
so no matter how intricate complicate a problem,ill solve em,jsut as sure as the worlds revolvin on an axis of//
evil....beseech the feeble,send em eezles to demontrate the illegal catorgories of disease people,in labratories//
oh this is all for me?well erm thankyou,but yo got me thinking suspicously,if all this be for free...what do you want from me//
i dont care if you ill,thats nice,i dont wanna say that you ill,to be polite,i hate cats like you,you aint nice,ill kill a cat like you,goodnight...
honestly what type of abnormality did you receive durign your mothers pregnancy,it was obviously a severe one//
how many times do you need to be reminded,nothign you do will topple a tyrannt of giants with an overkill of silence//(resort to violence)
exude a slight vibrance administer the eclipse take a seat in this ditch,observe the deevoltion of mankind kid...
spiralization of the expectated declimitization of the planets atmosphere cot cats sramblin for shelter like apocalypse was near//
and they had advanced warning,hell ill wake you in the morning,if i dont,well then were dead dun,ill catch you down in hell son//
but i doubt it,see my steed remount it and claim my life back off the demons of my life,only to collapse in a heap the prior night//
we pickin up signatures of a heat failure,no wonder shits been gettin chilly in here, we speakin to the heat retainer//
it aint blazing its cold and way off topic,who ever said you need a topic anyway?sure the shit helps but it dont really matter coz the fact is i have to say//
what i gotta say,beleive you me i wouldnt have it any other way,the office of mouth stichery was foolish tot let me get away//
ill preach their witchery,crucify it alongside their biggotry,and bathe in the ray of light that reflect awkardly off the imagery//
but really youll say you are but you prolly aint feelin me?its ok you can tell me...honestly...its ok just be honest with me...



your god we reprobate
your god we rebroaite
for your god we loathe and hate...

hind abu ubtah...
bismillah

^^ Oh My God...yo dunny now i dont know what to say...hmmm shit was fuckin diseased shit namsayin...whoever doesnt readi this is fallen off like a rectal prolapse...shit dawg an honor to know a kat that can spit like this...if you need a beat for this one right here holler namsayin...DAMN DAMN DAMN...shit is hot...wahid

you like ahha im jus playin..ye rno doubt a beat would be nice nahmean...have to be long i think,but nothin like huge nahmean...ill speak to you abou tit some aiight

thanks for the comments

bismillah

by their display of graceful caligraphy finess,its evenly propotioned,not one sign of ignorance//
deliverance...the existance of the inevitable distance of time is tickin by with every second//
ten steps a lesson seminar,confession announced from afar,to the pinnicle of authority,to where the bandits are...


^Diseased Lines , , , , this shit was cancer , , it would be an ill audio , wit a fast beat ,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,, Hot shit dawg

Wow..Daaiiimm Son..lol...this was sick..straight up hardcore, but at the same time spreadin the deen...this was a classic..needs to be archived..

peace
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thankyou saladin,maybe if the stopped upin eachotehr with whackshit in that forum id try to up it myslef
thanks for the ocmments though...im working on audio no doubt....
and a beat yer ....

ima up it coz cats are on now...dont sleep

up up up...

sick of cats sleeping.....

dawg im UPPIN this piece like crazy...what i bet fools are all scared cuz they gonna get their drawls soaked and stolen and used as trophies if they miss with this shit namsayin...bunch of ignorant kats that dont recognize illness when they see it...UPPIN this piece cuz its a fuckin classic

^^lmao...i dunno if theres much point to this anymore...
and i guess a mod would actally have to open and read this to decide if its a classic or not...but yer i dont know why that would happen neither....

cats all got hit with fairy dust...their gay,and asleep...

woah dawg...
shit was hotter than the earths core...
you a fuckin genius man...
givin you total props...
like everyone else has said would sound ill as fuck with a beat...
that shit is close to death man...
props to you for such talent...

thanks fiori,its good to know not everyone sleeps,no matter how much i peep other cats shit,som ejsu tseem to sit around....thanks fiori.

Shit is tight

...thanks

this was some sick work ... good job

thanks for the comments blze....

aaahhh, another FANTASTIC piece. man i swear, i've never seen anythin thats even just decent from you. they all hott.i'll admit though, i somewhat had trouble findin the topic. but lyrics were fuckin ill. keep spittin man

to add my two cents i'm gonna critique this constructively.

there was some crazy imagery in here, which didnt make sense in places. the vocab was good but occasionally over the top, some really good individual lines here

by their display of graceful caligraphy finess,its evenly propotioned,not one sign of ignorance//
deliverance...the existance of the inevitable distance of time is tickin by with every second//

nice^^ but try and put this work in lines like to make it easier to read, i had trouble catching the rhythm to this piece.you refine your style a little and you got the potential to be just plain ill.#

keep posting.

thanks lunk...

and johnny no doubt its all about elevation....yaknow ive only been doing this for a short while,so i guess im aiight at it...thi si sonly the rough draft not finished so yer id have to schange shit to go with th eaudio(wich is on the way yall no doubt)...thanks for the pointers dun...my rythm i still aint found it ahahha...im searchin but..again thanks for the comments all...

im sick of constantly getting like getting ten hundred fucking veiws and 2 actual replies...what the fucks going on....lazy

up,i wanna see som emore cats lseep on thi sfor my own amusement....dafuck is wrong with yall

Woah! I felt the earth tremble...that's what I'm talking about...show them that we not only understand their game but that we have their play book...I love this deen man...Hey peep my new joint : Do you want the truth? peace to the believers

thanks lines,no doubt ill check it out now,or soon wich ever comes first ahha...but i will you know i will...thanks for checkin it out....cats is sleepin on this im gettin tired of it...read it ,youll feel better after you do cats....or mayb eyou wont,thats what i want to know................blah to yall who sleepin...expect me to peep you r shit,wich i do constantly and then sleep on mine....dafucks the problem....

damn ate, this was sick! intense vocab and a crazy rhyme scheme, and the flow kept well. Whne it got to the last verse I wasn't sure of your topic anymore, and I think you had a bar talking about how you were off topic...well, it was ill none the less, good work, not that I expect any less from you.
Check out my new piece, the link is in my sig.
One

no doubt will do...

yer i noticed i was going off topic,whatever the topic actuLLY WAS,IM NOT SURE ,BUT I HAD IT IN MY MIND AT THE TIME.fucking caps button...anyways,thanks for the comments dun,and the fact you actually read it made me happier about this shit haha...

bismillah

Nicely written bro--I think you've heard this all before

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ay atetrack, do me a favor and hit me up on AIM my s/n is Visionary3030, theres something i gotta ask u about i tryed pming u but ut box is full so hit me up, thanx

peace

i have a full pm box???whats going on......i must have pm`s!thats a first,haha...aiight no doubt ill get to you somehow...ima get this aim thing seeing how most yall seem to use it aiight...ill send you a message when my box is emptied aiight....

bismillah

yo this hsit was mad ill man, the imagery was out of control, it was long as fuck tho man...good shit tho

thanks synopsist....its long...coz i would spit that in a couple of minutes less nahmean....

thakns for the comments....

up up up

lmao i get more veiws then sticky posts,maybe yall aint asleep,maybe you just all lazy....

aint much i can sy that the otha ctas hav'nt I see a lot of femcee's aint peeped it yet but uh like everybody said this is a classic, aint too many cats can chop like that, nice work
*~Holler~*

thanks bacardi...they sayin its classic,but they wont nominate the shi tin the forum of the legends nahmean...but its all good
im glad you liked it...

the skyscrapers loom over the landscape,like a watchhouse overlooking a future battleground//
perfect sounds of the trumpet play in the distance,a another phalanx raises banners by instinct//
bump it misfits,you know you want to...dont you...you love it...
your excelence i didnt mean to destroy the manifest but the pirates gave me their word theyd confess//
but they lied,how could i tell that they knew how to spell innocence regress,im actually impressed

Very hot thread here Atetrack one of your best...this should be archived in RB's...i was feelin this all the way

yo up it in the rb legends forum if you thinkin the same!...lots of them comments now,but no action taken haha....

up up up it

Re: Zions
 

damn this was nice one of the best that i have read lyrcis, vocab, imagry, wordplay. everything was on point. this deserves to be in RB legends.

the populace and spit em out at an alarming rate,all in the name of the first inntiate,the creator//
casting spells on the slave labourers brainwashed into thinkin they gettin credit for makin vapours//
toil till they die,all the while whistlin an grinnin,from now back,back to the futile beginin//

^^^i like this part, it original it had a real message and it flowed nice.

and the whole 2nd verse has to many nice lines to quote.

this was nice keep elevating theres always room for improvement.

no doubt,i aint been doin it for as long as some,so im guessin itll get only better ahha,not to sound bostful or nothin ahha ;)...thanks for hte comments flu...your avatar scares the shit out of me,that chinese man....shiver

up again for all the real heads in here tha taint asleep...