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13th Disciple vs Jaypana
16linez max.......I'll Drop First....blah blah blah......okay..........1
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*anotha MOD huh?*
.......aiight.....uh......uh........uh......yo..yo ..yo.........yo......yo......... I'ma 'Throw' Ur Verses In The Air Start 'Buckin' Wit Some Lyrical 'Skeet Shootin'/Infectin Ur 'Harddrive' Spittin Venomous 'Germs' Double CLick Start 'Rebootin' 'REstrainin' This Battle On 'Lock' Each Of My Lines Is Ur Verbal 'Miranda'/Ur Just Anotha 'Female' I'm Crushin Ur Name Is A 'Bitch' In Itself 'Ana' *lets play wit' this 'MoD' a little* U Couldn't 'Rise' If U Pulled A 'Dirty Shank' My Verbal 'ButtersWorth' More Than A Priceless Friend/Disciple Stays 'Synikal' Dwells In The 'Knightshade' Remainin Victorious In 'The End' After This Beatin RB Watch How Mysteriously The System Goes Down For Anotha Eight Hours/Jaypana I'm Keepin U 'Weak' U Couldn't 'Heal' From This If U Was Austin 'Powers' I'm Goin Down The 'Middle' When The Polls Arrive Anotha Win I Will 'Collect'/If U Call Me A 'Bitch' When U Drop Then I'm 'Aretha Franklin' Cuz I'm Gainin 'R.E.S.P.E.C.T' *12 lines..........fuck it.....................deal wit it.............1* |
My Bad About The Delivery.......................When I Submitted IT Just Came Out Like That...................Whatever Though........1
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the both of yous suck cock........
same ol' shit again i assume............. same old same old same old same old same old same old same old same old same old same old same old same old same old same old same old same old same old same old same old same old same old same old same old same old same old same old same old same old same old same old same old same old same old same old same old same old same old same old same old same old same old same old same old same old same old same old same old same old same old same old same old same old same old same old same old same old same old same old same old same old same old same old same old same old same old same old same old same old same old same old same old same old same old same old same old same old same old same old same old same old same old same old same old same old same old same old same old same old same old SHIT |
Don't FReepost On THis Thread.............Where u At Jay............It's Been Over An Hour B................................Waitin........... ....1
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my turn, quick key...
I'm Merkin This 'Disciple' So I Can Be '13th' On Hiz List... I Thought You Wuz A Challenge, Damn Now I'm Pissed... I Should Get Knightshade To Sticky This So You Can Stay-With-Me... Like Bulliez In Recess I'm Pushin You Out Tha Sandbox, You Can't Play-With-Me... Like Men Of Honor You're Not On My Level Cookie!... After Readin Hiz Punchez You'd Think He Bit Off Rookiez... This Iz My Competition? I Should've Stayed Retired From Text... Hiz Post Count Iz Tha Only Way People Would Consider Him A Vet... This Battle Iz Gettin Ugly Like Tha Second Half Of Floetry... I Would Say You Have Skill But Apparently They're Not Known-To-Me... blah fuck it start tha votez |
damn... good drop from 13 but after reading jay's yeah....
jay was consistently hot... he just took this one in all categories nothing against 13 but jay took this hands down ldo me a favor and peep me vs firesquadgangsta and the thread called 4 chrit just to shut that kid up |
vote=jay
better punches and elivation, liked it better. but gl to both let the best spits win -------------------------------------\ -------------------------------------/ |
Good Response......MuCH Respect............................Uppin For Votes Yall..............................................
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my bad 13th for tha lateness...i got preoccupied with other shit.............1-0 my way...........uppin fo votez
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Whoa, I think your all wrong 13th took this, I liked Pana's opening line, but nothing else and I liked all of 13's except when he tried to use all the mod's names, that was wack, but 13th pulled it out in my opinion.
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yo my vote goes to jay his punches hit a lot harder and he just overall took this one hey do me a favor and vote on mine and street smartz battle
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was a close battle but thirteen won my vote but I want yall to go check out my battle and return the favor
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...8652#post418652 |
..........Up........Up.............Poll Votes Yo...............Uppin............................ ...............................1
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Come ON Now yall.......DOn't Start Sleepin On THis.......Hit It Up................................................ ........1
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MAN AT FIRST I WASNT SURE AFTER I READ BOTH VERSES
THEN I THAUGHT ABOUT IT... 13TH WAS MORE COMPLEX I FEEL JAY'S PUNCHES HIT MORE, BUT THEY WERE SIMPLE VOTE: 13, CHEAK OUT MY BATTLE ALOOF V TRIX |
i thought punchez iz tha most important thing in a battle...i haven't battled in a while but i'm sure that'z tha most important thing...oh well...uppin fo votez
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WTF? i may not know much about rapping, but i know when someone wins. tho the battle shouldve had more lines, well anyway, my votes goin to 13. other guys didnt flow, plus the fact that it felt like...dare i say...a lil newb........hmm well anyway i wouldnt know, no offense to the other guy. but my votes to 13.
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GOTTA GIVE IT UP ta 13. He came with awesome lyrics and was really creative.
'REstrainin' This Battle On 'Lock' Each Of My Lines Is Ur Verbal 'Miranda'/Ur Just Anotha 'Female' I'm Crushin Ur Name Is A 'Bitch' In Itself 'Ana' that was a nice drop. Jay was also really good. but vote = 13 Stay up Playaz |
This Is Gettin Too Close TO THe Bottom So I'm Gonna Have TO Up It................................................ ...................................Uppin......
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This is pretty close, both good drops...Jay had some dope lines but then he would have a filler, 13th's was pretty good but yeah was't a fan of that mod bit...anyway....Best line from 13th..Were his opening and his closing bars, they were good but I in between it didn't really hit...I think Jay just got this, not by much thought, he jsut got a bit more personal and I felt his a little more...Good battle....Peace....
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^^^^^^^^^^^^ditto on the man above me
nice opener 13 but then you fell off yo JAY I loved the sandbox shit was funny as hell but Jay took this battle close but 13 didnt go personal just started talkin about mods? well theres my two cents. |
5 to 5 in explained.............4 to 3 in poll votes u................come on peoples uppin this.............................................. ......................1
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hmmm.. good verse from both yallll but wut i really liked
"U Couldn't 'Rise' If U Pulled A 'Dirty Shank' My Verbal 'ButtersWorth' More Than A Priceless Friend/Disciple Stays 'Synikal' Dwells In The 'Knightshade' Remainin Victorious In 'The End'" ^^^ that got the battel for me.. i especially liked the way he use soo many ppls names n still ended up dissin u thats wen u know a mc is good... nice battle JayPana here ill break ur shit down too I'm Merkin This 'Disciple' So I Can Be '13th' On Hiz List... I Thought You Wuz A Challenge, Damn Now I'm Pissed... ^^^ good opener ur first line was dope second line.. seems kinda forced the rest of ur verse was tite... but only one can come on top close battle vote - 13 desciple can yall vote on Conspiracy vs Morphoine tnx |
im guna have to go with Jaypana on this one, i just thought his flow had a better ....flow.... to it. better punches. i just liked it more
no disrespect , just my thoughts |
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