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13th Disciple 05-10-03 05:20 PM

13th Disciple vs Jaypana
 
16linez max.......I'll Drop First....blah blah blah......okay..........1

13th Disciple 05-10-03 06:05 PM

*anotha MOD huh?*

.......aiight.....uh......uh........uh......yo..yo ..yo.........yo......yo.........

I'ma 'Throw' Ur Verses In The Air Start 'Buckin' Wit Some Lyrical 'Skeet Shootin'/Infectin Ur 'Harddrive' Spittin Venomous
'Germs' Double CLick Start 'Rebootin'

'REstrainin' This Battle On 'Lock' Each Of My Lines Is Ur Verbal
'Miranda'/Ur Just Anotha 'Female' I'm Crushin Ur Name Is A
'Bitch' In Itself 'Ana'

*lets play wit' this 'MoD' a little*

U Couldn't 'Rise' If U Pulled A 'Dirty Shank' My Verbal
'ButtersWorth' More Than A Priceless Friend/Disciple Stays
'Synikal' Dwells In The 'Knightshade' Remainin Victorious In
'The End'

After This Beatin RB Watch How Mysteriously The System Goes
Down For Anotha Eight Hours/Jaypana I'm Keepin U 'Weak' U
Couldn't 'Heal' From This If U Was Austin 'Powers'

I'm Goin Down The 'Middle' When The Polls Arrive Anotha Win I
Will 'Collect'/If U Call Me A 'Bitch' When U Drop Then I'm 'Aretha
Franklin' Cuz I'm Gainin 'R.E.S.P.E.C.T'

*12 lines..........fuck it.....................deal wit it.............1*

13th Disciple 05-10-03 06:12 PM

My Bad About The Delivery.......................When I Submitted IT Just Came Out Like That...................Whatever Though........1

Tiberius 05-10-03 06:13 PM

the both of yous suck cock........
same ol' shit again i assume.............
same old same old same old same old same old same old same old same old same old same old same old same old same old same old same old same old same old same old same old same old same old same old same old same old same old same old same old same old same old same old same old same old same old same old same old same old same old same old same old same old same old same old same old same old same old same old same old same old same old same old same old same old same old same old same old same old same old same old same old same old same old same old same old same old same old same old same old same old same old same old same old same old same old same old same old same old same old same old same old same old same old same old same old same old same old same old same old same old same old


SHIT

13th Disciple 05-10-03 07:03 PM

Don't FReepost On THis Thread.............Where u At Jay............It's Been Over An Hour B................................Waitin........... ....1

Jay Pana 05-10-03 07:03 PM

my turn, quick key...

I'm Merkin This 'Disciple' So I Can Be '13th' On Hiz List...
I Thought You Wuz A Challenge, Damn Now I'm Pissed...
I Should Get Knightshade To Sticky This So You Can Stay-With-Me...
Like Bulliez In Recess I'm Pushin You Out Tha Sandbox, You Can't Play-With-Me...
Like Men Of Honor You're Not On My Level Cookie!...
After Readin Hiz Punchez You'd Think He Bit Off Rookiez...
This Iz My Competition? I Should've Stayed Retired From Text...
Hiz Post Count Iz Tha Only Way People Would Consider Him A Vet...
This Battle Iz Gettin Ugly Like Tha Second Half Of Floetry...
I Would Say You Have Skill But Apparently They're Not Known-To-Me...

blah fuck it start tha votez

Chrit 05-10-03 07:06 PM

damn... good drop from 13 but after reading jay's yeah....

jay was consistently hot...

he just took this one in all categories

nothing against 13 but jay took this hands down

ldo me a favor and peep me vs firesquadgangsta

and the thread called 4 chrit
just to shut that kid up

Ghostie 05-10-03 07:06 PM

vote=jay
better punches and elivation, liked it better. but gl to both let the best spits win
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13th Disciple 05-10-03 07:18 PM

Good Response......MuCH Respect............................Uppin For Votes Yall..............................................

Jay Pana 05-10-03 07:19 PM

my bad 13th for tha lateness...i got preoccupied with other shit.............1-0 my way...........uppin fo votez

Mad Man 05-10-03 08:05 PM

Whoa, I think your all wrong 13th took this, I liked Pana's opening line, but nothing else and I liked all of 13's except when he tried to use all the mod's names, that was wack, but 13th pulled it out in my opinion.

HellRaizor 05-10-03 08:08 PM

yo my vote goes to jay his punches hit a lot harder and he just overall took this one hey do me a favor and vote on mine and street smartz battle

MC KILLA-T 05-10-03 08:27 PM

was a close battle but thirteen won my vote but I want yall to go check out my battle and return the favor

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...8652#post418652

13th Disciple 05-10-03 09:10 PM

..........Up........Up.............Poll Votes Yo...............Uppin............................ ...............................1

13th Disciple 05-10-03 10:27 PM

Come ON Now yall.......DOn't Start Sleepin On THis.......Hit It Up................................................ ........1

TriX 05-10-03 10:59 PM

MAN AT FIRST I WASNT SURE AFTER I READ BOTH VERSES
THEN I THAUGHT ABOUT IT...
13TH WAS MORE COMPLEX I FEEL
JAY'S PUNCHES HIT MORE, BUT THEY WERE SIMPLE
VOTE: 13, CHEAK OUT MY BATTLE ALOOF V TRIX

Jay Pana 05-10-03 11:11 PM

i thought punchez iz tha most important thing in a battle...i haven't battled in a while but i'm sure that'z tha most important thing...oh well...uppin fo votez

H4iKU 05-11-03 12:20 AM

WTF? i may not know much about rapping, but i know when someone wins. tho the battle shouldve had more lines, well anyway, my votes goin to 13. other guys didnt flow, plus the fact that it felt like...dare i say...a lil newb........hmm well anyway i wouldnt know, no offense to the other guy. but my votes to 13.

Evil_SoLo 05-11-03 12:50 AM

GOTTA GIVE IT UP ta 13. He came with awesome lyrics and was really creative.
'REstrainin' This Battle On 'Lock' Each Of My Lines Is Ur Verbal
'Miranda'/Ur Just Anotha 'Female' I'm Crushin Ur Name Is A
'Bitch' In Itself 'Ana'
that was a nice drop.
Jay was also really good.
but vote = 13
Stay up Playaz

13th Disciple 05-11-03 01:21 AM

This Is Gettin Too Close TO THe Bottom So I'm Gonna Have TO Up It................................................ ...................................Uppin......

Orikle 05-11-03 02:35 AM

This is pretty close, both good drops...Jay had some dope lines but then he would have a filler, 13th's was pretty good but yeah was't a fan of that mod bit...anyway....Best line from 13th..Were his opening and his closing bars, they were good but I in between it didn't really hit...I think Jay just got this, not by much thought, he jsut got a bit more personal and I felt his a little more...Good battle....Peace....

J.T. KNUCKLES 05-11-03 03:18 AM

^^^^^^^^^^^^ditto on the man above me

nice opener 13 but then you fell off

yo JAY I loved the sandbox shit was funny as hell but Jay took this battle close but 13 didnt go personal just started talkin about mods? well theres my two cents.

13th Disciple 05-11-03 03:50 AM

5 to 5 in explained.............4 to 3 in poll votes u................come on peoples uppin this.............................................. ......................1

TeraRhymes 05-11-03 03:57 AM

hmmm.. good verse from both yallll but wut i really liked



"U Couldn't 'Rise' If U Pulled A 'Dirty Shank' My Verbal
'ButtersWorth' More Than A Priceless Friend/Disciple Stays
'Synikal' Dwells In The 'Knightshade' Remainin Victorious In
'The End'"


^^^ that got the battel for me.. i especially liked the way he use soo many ppls names n still ended up dissin u thats wen u know a mc is good... nice battle


JayPana here ill break ur shit down too

I'm Merkin This 'Disciple' So I Can Be '13th' On Hiz List...
I Thought You Wuz A Challenge, Damn Now I'm Pissed...


^^^ good opener ur first line was dope second line.. seems kinda forced

the rest of ur verse was tite... but only one can come on top close battle


vote - 13 desciple


can yall vote on Conspiracy vs Morphoine tnx

Sureal 05-11-03 04:02 AM

im guna have to go with Jaypana on this one, i just thought his flow had a better ....flow.... to it. better punches. i just liked it more
no disrespect , just my thoughts


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