thatakeova vs. 13th disiple
 

10-16

yo imma vote on this when both a ya'll spit but for right now vote on mine battle with kerdezzy and ill do the same when i see your votes -1-


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aight desciple, jus spit wheneva u ready


i'll probaly spit in a couple of minutes bla blah blah blah blah blah blah blah blah blah blalh

.....Aiight.....Its Time TO Separate The Dick Ryders From The Tru Emcees........LEts Do It..........................

*yo.....yo........mic check 1......uh.....uh.....uh..........yo..yo....yo..... .*


I'ma 'Brand' U Wit My Lyrical 'Barcodes' An Example Of How I Handle 'Beef'/U Battlin A Verbal 'Dentist Adult' Wit Abilities Of
Extractin Ur Oral 'Baby Teeth'

U Gettin Hit Wit Multis Personals Punches And I'm Even Throwin In
Kicks/Leavin U Battered Raped And Abused Gettin Fu*ked By '13'
Disciple Dicks

I'll Rip OUt My Own 'Heart' Hand It 2 U So U Will Know Theres
Many Ways U Will Be 'Beat'/Theres No Possibility U Could Be
'Hotter' Than Me Even If U Was Miamis 'Heat'

I'll Even Drop Thirty Points..............................Alone U Will Lose By
My FIllers/After This Assault Ull Be Seekin Fifty Christian Evangelist
Healers

In THe End Of This Joust I'll Add Ur Name To A Part OF My Winnin
Fraction/U Anotha 'Outkast' But I'm A 'Disciple So.....'I'm SOrry Miss
Jackson'

But I'm Not Forreal Cuz My 'Intentions' Are Illmatically 'Cruel'/I'll
Pull Out My '44' One Minute Before THe Beginnin Of This Duel

A 'Pacemaker' Couldn't Even 'Chart' The Lyrics That I 'Stress'/After
This U Couldn't 'Holla Back Youngin' Cuz I'm Too 'F-A-B-O-L-O-U-S'



*blah......14lines keyed.......whateva...........good luck................1*

Why's It Taking About An Hour TO Spit........Thats WHy I Hate Droppin First........cats See What I Drop.....Prewrite.........Then Drop............Damn..........

this is a battle dog so stop bein a free writer//
throwin mad punches and missin like da hindu from street fighter//
im knockin my way through herbs so u could call me butterbean//
u anotha one in da way so like da clock im gonna skip rite past the 13//
the only way u get ya record up is to battle the daily news//(newbies)
but reporters cant help in elite when u get sunned worse than refugees in peru//
its funny how i'll merk u, nomatter wat set u claim//
download paint shop pro, look in my sig so u write ya own name//
noboy moms or pops like u as if u was nick cannon//
but they put the headphones on theyself cause nobody wanna here u jammin//(rappin)
u like 16 and neva had a bitch in ya bed//
dats only because nobody wants to be seen wit a egg head//
so i'll drain ya skull, so it'll be nothin but shellz u eatin//
put da rest in a cup for ya comfort, when its ya meat u beatin//
if dis was mk4 rite now da guy would 'finish' dis pussy//
but when ya verse drop, da guy would pop out and say dis was a 'ooopsy'//

hmm.... i seriously cant drop a vote on this one

was feelin both verses but both lacked a bar that could finish the deal.....

sorry ya'll, good battle and all but nobody took it

peep me vs unanswerable mc

aight good lookin for checkin it out though, and yo desciple good shit, i didnt think it would be dis competitive, but still uppin uppin uppin uppin uppin uppin uppin uppin uppin uppin uppin uppin uppin uppin uppin uppin uppin

close very close, i had to review all again, but i enjoyed 13ths wordplay...he didnt jus fit things in for it to rhyme, it all had a story flow behind it. but other guy was good 2, nice one guys

vote-13

yeh i agree wit everything that H4iKU said. his verse had more feeling put into it if u get me. it was a good verse by takeova but it wasn't as strong as 13th's.

Vote = 13th

imma have to go with thatakeova his street fighter line set up the rest of his flow both verses were nice but i feel thatakeova got this joint -1-

^^i liked that.........

13 ive seen better stuff from u though but u got this one....

i just wasnt feelin thetakeovas verse at all...

vote=13 Disciple

I give this one to my boy tha take over for better punches and better word play but this was a really close battle

vote: thatakeova

Need Poll Votes Yall.............................Good Lookin Tho'.............................................. ................................................1

yo dis is a close as battle

go shit d who knows wats gonna happen

pretty excitin lol we only need to more votes

Come On Yall...............Lets End This One Quick......................COuple More Votes Peeps.............Hopefully Emcees Who Come REal Wit THere Votes And Know What Too Look For Will Hit THis Up.........Not No.......I'm Goin Wit So And So Becuz His Line Made Me Giggle................

Takeova i consider you one of muh boys man but 13 brought his punches mad hard. You dropped some good lines like the street fighter one, but you have spit better shit than this. I just wasn't feelin you on it. 13 came with mad lines, his opener was tight and didnt slow down the whole way through...... 13 gets my vote... and guys check this one out, I need my herb ass to get some votes if i deserve em in this battle lol http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=45949 wait for the other guy to spit his lyrics...

Up Up Up..............I Want This One To Be CLosed Before I Start Another One..............COme On Peeps..................1

nice battle but ima have to go wit 13 had some nice shit the oral teath bar wuz nice and 13 lets go man set it up wit rules.