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StreeTLegenD VS Wh1T3Ch0cOLaTe
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10 linez max (quik battle) no crew, hate or d/r votes due: 45 mins afta check in u spit 1st... i'll spit shortly afta... ...check in.... |
Check in Good luck, hey if i say ne thing bad u noe it cuz the rap game dont mean ne of it. Aight lets go................................................ ...................
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Street Legend? You an Amateur in this game.
You rap "fly" wit "die" you think thats goin earn you buckets of fame? The only bucket you got was a bucket of KFC wings You clueless about bein defensive just like Yao Ming You stutter, shake, almost lose your grip My rhymes got a firm hold, yours about to slip 10 lines? I know why you dont wanna it long That gives you a moment, to sneak away to your bong You must be laces cuz you just got tied in a knot 3-0 (Winning streak) you cant beat me my ass is hot Just kiddin wit you , spit it |
Your some boot-legged white chocolate that poses as milk chocolate//
This kat's got tha whole site 'cravin' fo him but still in votes, he's not 'toppin it'// White's name could be Aaliyah nd he still wudn't be 'rockin-it'// (Rock The Boat) Tonite this whack emcee gets served fresh; there's no time fo him ta crop-his-shit// This joka is hard on tha outside nd soft on tha inside sorta like an apple pit// Juss like he's bout ta 'fall in one', dug deep; it'll leave you wit a 'lyrical zit'// Imma bout ta wreck that winnin streak of urs, leavin you crushed nd inna fit// iigh...my verse...kinda whack..force this but oh well..lets get some votes.. |
yea street legend killed him, white's verse was pretty generic as always but i can see improvement in his verses, but street took dis shit no doubt, but white should keep workin on his shit and make an improvement
streetlegend took it |
it looked to me like both your verses took little to no time to think up
both very elementary and no real punch lines white yours was mainly a bunch of filler lines compiled to make a verse streetlegend at least you have some punches, alltough soft they were vote=streetlegend |
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1-0 me keep em commin .................................................. .......................................... |
Aight thx ne ways... lol i made it in 2 minutes ppl w/e keep them comin............................................. ..............................................
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yo mah vote goes to white i liked his spit it was tight nice punches
vote = whitechocolate^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ |
iigh, 2-1...
uppin fa more votes. .................................................. .......................................... |
i think whitechocalte had funnyier metaphors and better punches in his versealothough legand was very creative im votin for whitey cuz he came harder, if legend wouldve tryed harder he wouldve killed
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Im gonna have to vote for White
He came harder, with some okay punchlines I battled him and he had nothing this is a HUGE improvement.... .... .... |
Thx trix aight 2-3 uppin for votes............................................. .........................................
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aite as i said before i like comedy so whitechocolate won this, streets verse was hot too but whites punches came a lil harder
VOTE=WhiteChocolate |
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yo...to tell yall tha truth...i didnt like either of them that much.. u both need to start usin some werdplay. but just to finish off this thang...ima give my vote to whitechocolate. he had like 3 good lines so ill go wit that. but word to tha wise...u both need to elevate.
vote=white chocolate |
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