Nuclear Weaponz vs. DETONATA
 

Rules:
10 Lines min – 30 lines max
Check in: Thursday
Verses by: Saturday

Voting is all done by poll now!

Good Luck

Checkin in. I hope he's better then last weeks lunch lol. Hurry up n check in so i can rip da shit out chu.
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Im doin' 10 Lines, i'll be here. .
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Fish Licker...

Kid your a fake, tupac wannabe who's style needs to change
this kids from L Town, i might as well just hand him the state!
you made the mistake of shit taking, cause now ima wreck ya
and RB'll see me take out Nuclear Weapons. .like UN Inspectors!
fuck a lecture, im postin 10 max cause your wack, get ghost kid -
i'll make ya record 2-1. .so it fits what you finish every post with!
im not boasting, but im iller than you, quit crying and pleeding
beating you? im good at Arcades, - only a Quarter efforts needed!
ur hairs receeding, been doin this text shit too long, but screw ya,
i'll fuck you up in so many ways, alldig'll rename me Karma Sutra!

WTF, and your crew is calllin me wack haha. Wow, this is too easy.
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Ayo....

Vortexes verse contains more fruity filler than pop-tarts //
There'll always be beef on tha road ahead, like the amish riding ox-carts //
The only reason ya even obsessed with the army is cuz ya wishing that ya are~me //
Retire, cuz ya career is going nowhere fast like non wheeled car-G //
Your a down trodden sole...under foot like rubber laid-in-shoes //
I employ superior battle tactics, so as a fair boss I gotta pay-you-dues //
It's be a bloody spectacle when this wearer of glasses gets shot in da eye//
Tha only time Vortex gets close to a win is when his shoes walk around tied//
You got the hardware to battle, but forgot the tools on the bench//
Battling me you screwed yourself, I just handed you the L n wrench//
You're outta ya mind...voters are sayin what was this kid thinking//
Like milli vanilli's mouth performing on da titanic ya find ya lips-sinking//

About fifteen minutes and i still ripped your ass. And i believe your exact words where " your wack, get out this forum before i KICK YOU OUT ". Eat your words bitch.
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nuclear took this one......

here it is, better punches and wordplay definately...

not a whole lot to quote from either verse so I wont

and be sure to hit up my battle with lilsmokey
and remember to poll vote, thats how this is anymore

^ learn how to fucking read a battle you stupid ignorant fuck, i dont care what you say, that was bullshit.

vortex wins.

the karma sutra lien was hot..
same with the arcade...

close tho.. next time dont under estimate your opponent...

Im giving this to nuc. His was more original. I was feelin it more. He actually backed up his shit talkin. Nice

Vote: Nuc

WHy cant I fuckin poll vote! Someone needs a new fuckin programmer!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!

i thought vortex won this

had better punches

beating you? im good at Arcades, - only a Quarter efforts needed!
ur hairs receeding, been doin this text shit too long, but screw ya,
i'll fuck you up in so many ways, alldig'll rename me Karma Sutra
^that was good

best shit from nuclear

It's be a bloody spectacle when this wearer of glasses gets shot in da eye//
Tha only time Vortex gets close to a win is when his shoes walk around tied

tight one to call but i thought vortex edged it.....

man...i think vortex's shit was wack/dun get me wrong tho..nuclear wasnt ne thing spectacular either/i think u both deserve losses/kinda like the bulls playin the cavaliers...somebody's gotta win/ I VOTE NUCLEAR strictly on wordplay.......ELEVATE...

Iight uppin for votes. I dont know how you got that many votes because that was wack except for a few good punches. But nice battle, waitin to see who wins.
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People with under 1k posts shouldnt be allowed to vote in my battles because most of the time, their newbies who think shit and cum lines are dope, lmao. .

notice who the vets voted for? Yeah. That sums this battle up for me.

Votes?

vote - vorten/detonata

style looks fimiliar.. good direct punches.. un inspectors was ok.. arcade line was nice.. and karma sutra was a little played but cool.. nuclear never really brought anything good to the battle.. just some played and very simple punches.. flo wasn;t spectacular either

Lol. How is my shit played. No one has used my shit b4. But who fuckin cares. If tha polls would work then it'd be tied. It dont matter if tha vets voted b/c they gonna vote for you before they vote for me. I get be littled cuz of my posts.
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yo tis was a close match but i think vorte got tis one wit tha arcade and karma sutra line nuclear u couldve gotten it if u would have added an extra pnch in there but u just lacked in tha ucnhes so my vote goes to nuclear

vote nuc.....i thought he came harder...tha otha guy wus aite..but nuc had better punches...

Vortexes verse contains more fruity filler than pop-tarts //
There'll always be beef on tha road ahead, like the amish riding ox-carts //


You're outta ya mind...voters are sayin what was this kid thinking//
Like milli vanilli's mouth performing on da titanic ya find ya lips-sinking//

doze 2 bars i think got it for him..

i dunno if ive not been up on these text battles in a while but this one of the hotter ones. no doubt, anyone who sed this shit was wack doesnt kno what their talkin about.

you made the mistake of shit taking, cause now ima wreck ya
and RB'll see me take out Nuclear Weapons. .like UN Inspectors!

dat shit was sick, you kno why it was sick? it was sick cuz it made a direct attack on his name, nice an specific, not no general shit.

yea both of yall shit was sick tho, nuclear weapons had some nice lines too.

There'll always be beef on tha road ahead, like the amish riding ox-carts //

my vote goes to vortex tho.

who gives a fuck about flo and wordplay in a battle, as long as it isnt garbage, its the punches that in the end count.

^^That Wuz The Best Punch In The Whole Verse

I Didn't Quote none Of THe OTher Cats Becuz I DIdn't Feel As Though His Punches Were Even strong Enuff......Okay There It Is.....Vote =THe Second Cat WHo Dropped

my vote goes to nuclear weaponz on this one. the other guys shit was wack, made me not even want to read it and shit. it didnt flow like nukes did either

vote = NUKE

ooooooooooook, you guys can hate all you like man, the vets voted for me - remember that, you won by newbie votes man. .
thats nothin to be proud of.

this battle came down to punches.id say that Nuclear wins this one.even tho both verse had some wak punches Nuclear's were a lil more clever.neither of the two had any praiseworthy wordplay but Nuclear's opening and ending were nice.

vote-Nuclear

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yeah, but all his shit was general, most of my verse was personal like how he types '21' each time he replies and his record, and the UN inspectors line,m his was just generic punches that could be used against anybody.

Shits gay dogg. .

UPPIN for tha last voter to have a privelage to break tha tie. Vortex think what you want but i do not d/r, i dont even ask anyone to vote on my battles lol. I just let them see it for theirselves and wait n see who votes.
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Yo this wus a tie but i read it again Nuke had some creative punches

so Vote Nuke....shit wus close fosho nice shit both ya'll impressive

Nuclear Weaponz wins
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