Evolve vs. Rise
 

Rules:
10 Lines min – 30 lines max
Check in: Thursday
Verses by: Saturday
Votes End: sunday/monday


Good Luck

O ok.. .i get it.... i got two matches... LOL... aight.... i got this

Checkin In....GL
I'll Post SoOn.....

Yo I'm Bizzy So, this battle will be a 20 liner....just 20, so match me........Drop in a Min
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I am a Very Bizzy Person, So I will Make this weeks Murking very quik...Lets work, shall we...Oyea Use the links on the punches for maximum satisfaction...lol

Your Only 4 & Oh becuase of your opponents Wack Verses & No-Shows, What are you Lo-Co, We wouldnt be "Riding On the Same Level" if my Car Had "Low-Pro's"::.
OOOHHHhhhh NOOOooooo, You must fuck "J-D", your a "SoSo HoMo", & your punches are hitting nothing like Insane Pimps Swinging with "No-Ho's"::.

A.I??...yep I counted, its 76Herbs(76ers)...bitch yall Arent-Deadly....Yall-Mild::.
So I'm proceeding to "Rip Apart This lil Pussy", like the birth of R.Kellys-Love-Child::.
This "Softy is getting BEAT" like Master Blasters Profile,so Hes-No-Trouble-See::.
Becuase his Rymes Just "No Longer Blaze" like Snoopy-D-O-Double-G::.

Fa-Shizzle-My-Nizzle......lol......Proceed


Your SuperSoaker Making-Me-Wet, doesent mean that you can "Spray-with-the-best"::.
You'll Pay-for-your-threats, Like "Dolphins", I got Evolve Running-away-from-the-Net::.
"Chess, against Animal M.D's" is the Only time that you should "Play-with-a-Vet"::.
Go ahead, do 50 lines,my 20 still will make a Killing off ya 50, like I'm the Slim-Shady of Text::.

Will The Real Emcee Plz Stand UP...lol

**Rise Stands Up & Proceeds**

**Style Switch**

You cant cover this RISE, even with Shade Blinds, but folks....atleast "this ASS has Heart", Like Brave Dimes::
He wouldnt match rymes with me if he MADE MINES!!,cuase Hes Like a game of "FourSquare" with all those Played Lines::
I'm going "First", so Ev Go to File,then "Save As...",Put your Bullshit "Seconds" away & Save-Time::
You speaking & Getting Off of chain with it,wont happen Like Slave Mimes::
Cause Evolve is "Running Off Track", like He just Pulled a "Train Crime"::
His "Broken Bars" wont have HipHop Buzzing, if he went to jail, escaped and Saved Shyne::

Not even a little.........

Defeat, you've Often-Felt-It,cause your words arent put together right like Awful-Spellin::
I'm Holding "Court", So these "Net" shots,are getting your ass Swept, like "Boston Celtics"::

If you dont watch basketball....^^You Dont Get It^^....O well...Proceed..

He wont do "Big things" if he had a "Dick Pump", Confessing-his-Mind-State::.
Obviously, he never seen, who he's Messing with, like a Contestant-on-Blind-Date::.

Another Education in Elevation

Rise

I apologise to everyone for the link but i had to bring it down a couple of nothces and go back to a Newbie's mentality... Everyone take a look at this Loser in the first Line.... and dont delete or change the link

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=45875
^^first line speaks for its self, DONT DO DRUGS!!!.. its bad for your Health^^//
& the way he Looks, also bad for you Wealth.. Poor kid doesn't have Spare prayer
face it, you'd have a better chance being Felt while hugging a Care Bear//
Truth or Dare?? Truth... you aren't as nice as your think you might be
Dare.. you already look like you're on Dope, so I Dare you to Bite Me!!//
Flyweight Match & im taking you lightly, mad cause I Am what you thought you might be
a NICE MC, but your NOT.. so the best you can do, is just Lose Politely//
and trust, you will get bruised if you fight me.. hope you can handle the shock
if not, i'll take you off of Air and send you back to your home in Fraggle Rock//**see link on top** LOL
you just can't battle, STOP.......................... and go find a new profession
cause your like a straight - A- student & im guessing you want to be taught a lesson//
Well first off, get out of W.E.C trying to teach newbies & listen to your own clinics
cause any good MC knows you shouldn't use Quotes, Links, Bold Tricks & Gimmicks//
What Is This?? sounds like Kindergarden Business... he must be jus Kidding around
but its no Joke when i let my Children treat your mom's Mouth like a Playground//
Rise, then bow down.. please pay attention and learn.. then you Might win
maybe you'll actually earn some respect.. NEVERMIND, he still highlights his multi's w/ Hy-phens//LOL

so you see, i stooped to your level on the First line... and its really starting to bug me
but this kid is not only WACK!! **looks at his pic again** damn he's fucking Ugly!!//
trust me, those braids are crusty... you shoud be ashamed, you are hardly a dred

fuck it im out... someone tell this Rasta Imposta that Bob Marley is Dead!!//

still no votes??

aight...
this was a damned nice battle

was feeling the punches from both emcees

gotta go with rise on this one however.... just like he never let up on this one....

almost as if evolve held back just slightly in preparation for his heavy weight bout...

for those reasons I vote rise

return the favor and peep min vs lilsmokey

What Is This?? sounds like Kindergarden Business... he must be jus Kidding around
but its no Joke when i let my Children treat your mom's Mouth like a Playground//



Ha ha ha ha ha this was sickly ill....Evolve gets my vote

no fucking way! Rise, even tho you do look like a fuckfaced homo you DID have the better verse and thats all the matters.... Rise's verse had me reading it and not getting bored.... half way thru Evolve's verse i was bored.... plus Rise' s verse made me laugh... the only thing that made me laugh in Evolve's verse was Rise's pic...lol

vote= Rise

Man....THis Battle Was Nice...No Doubt......Rise U Came Sicc WIt It....The WOrdPlay And Punches Were Lethal........BUt Evolve Just THrough Punch After Punch And Was Goin WIt Mad Personals.....I Mean He Just Came Better Thats How I See IT.......Good Battle Tho...Vote=Evolve

Man this is hard
Both of you ripped it
But ... I read Rises battle and then read Evolves
And it was close yo....
But Rise through it a little harder...
Rise you won my vote.....
Good battle~~~~~~~~~~>

Yea.....both ya'll had good verses.......but Rise go this in my mind...every line the kid was knockin punch after punch.....

Vote - Rise

We wouldnt be "Riding On the Same Level" if my Car Had "Low-Pro's"::.

Becuase his Rymes Just "No Longer Blaze" like Snoopy-D-O-Double-G::.

Your SuperSoaker Making-Me-Wet, doesent mean that you can "Spray-with-the-best"::.
You'll Pay-for-your-threats, Like "Dolphins", I got Evolve Running-away-from-the-Net::.

"Chess, against Animal M.D's" is the Only time that you should "Play-with-a-Vet"::.

He wouldnt match rymes with me if he MADE MINES!!,cuase Hes Like a game of "FourSquare" with all those Played Lines

Cause Evolve is "Running Off Track", like He just Pulled a "Train Crime"::

Nice lines.....

cause your like a straight - A- student & im guessing you want to be taught a lesson//

What Is This?? sounds like Kindergarden Business... he must be jus Kidding around
but its no Joke when i let my Children treat your mom's Mouth like a Playground//


Descent.......

Its Obvious Who Won....Rise Definately Had Better Punches.....

Evolve Came Tight But Rise Came Out On Top.......

Vote Rise......

better personals and punches came from evolve. Rise had nice shit but evolve was more direct and the Hyphens n shit is newb shit Rise. U should cut that out.

vote - evolve

Well first off, get out of W.E.C trying to teach newbies & listen to your own clinics
cause any good MC knows you shouldn't use Quotes, Links, Bold Tricks & Gimmicks//

Vote: Rise

Overall he came much harder in my opinion

And I don't see whats wrong with bolds and shit: even if not expressing wordplay or punches it adds to the effect, using TEXT to his advantage

its 3-6 Rise... & UN its no surprise that you voted for Rise considering you changed the rules to allow all the bullshit quotes & bold & lins after i said something to about it..... fuck it

uppin for votes

**i guess since 3 of the Merk Squad affiliates have voted, it is ok if A.I. votes on the battle too. Unless UN wants to go and change the RULES .......... AGAIN**

DONT FUCKING EDIT MY THREADS.... AND THE ONLY REASON I SENT THAT PM IS BECAUSE I KNEW YOU WERE GONNA ALLOW IT...

lmao at the supersoaker line,i dunno if it has somethign to do with mine and narcs sigs but people think ai have supersoakers now...lmao...

but yeah to the voting...rise your shit was tight you had some good punches in it but the mis use of hypens and the little dots and shit everywhere made it hard for me to process what you wer esaying the shit is a distraction,and the links i dunno,its clever but it aint battling....ai dont have 76 people in it???lmao....evolves verse was alot harder hittin gthen rise,the fraggle rock line made me laugh....

you just can't battle, STOP.......................... and go find a new profession
cause your like a straight - A- student & im guessing you want to be taught a lesson <<<<ahha niceness...

the line about the care bear was also fuckin funny....

all round it was a tight battle fom both sides and hard to vote for,but the icons and hypens in an shit in rises was a losing factor,and the punches werent direct,i mean you dissed the crew nahmean,not just evolve...where as evolve was more to the point and direct with his blows.....

vote- Evolve


Flyweight Match & im taking you lightly, mad cause I Am what you thought you might be
a NICE MC, but your NOT.. so the best you can do, is just Lose Politely

^^lmao

Your SuperSoaker Making-Me-Wet, doesent mean that you can "Spray-with-the-best"::.
You'll Pay-for-your-threats, Like "Dolphins", I got Evolve Running-away-from-the-Net::.

^^that was good...



maybe you'll actually earn some respect.. NEVERMIND, he still highlights his multi's w/ Hy-phens//LOL

^^killahhh....hahahah funny line

Yeah I gotta go with Rise on this one..Both came fucken Hard as...Evolve had a nice verse, paid the shit out of Rise but I just think Rise had a better verse, lyrically wise..

Your SuperSoaker Making-Me-Wet, doesent mean that you can "Spray-with-the-best"::.
You'll Pay-for-your-threats, Like "Dolphins", I got Evolve Running-away-from-the-Net::.

^^That line was DOPE^^

Vote=Rise.

This battle was nice as shit...Both of ya'll came nicely...But tha only thing I didn't like was havin' to keep clickin' tha links Rise had in his verse...That got borin' and took a little away from tha effect of his verse...Now I see why I lost my battle when I had links in it...It's annoyin' to keep goin' back and forth...BUt anyway heres a breakdown...

RISE:

A.I??...yep I counted, its 76Herbs(76ers)...bitch yall Arent-Deadly....Yall-Mild::.
So I'm proceeding to "Rip Apart This lil Pussy", like the birth of R.Kellys-Love-Child::.
.....Tha first part of this was wack...But tha second part was nice...Could worded it betta woulda been dope...

"Chess, against Animal M.D's" is the Only time that you should "Play-with-a-Vet"::.
Go ahead, do 50 lines,my 20 still will make a Killing off ya 50, like I'm the Slim-Shady of Text::.
.....Tha set-up was kinda played but tha second part was dope as shit...Nice wordplay....

Cause Evolve is "Running Off Track", like He just Pulled a "Train Crime"::
His "Broken Bars" wont have HipHop Buzzing, if he went to jail, escaped and Saved Shyne::
.....Both parts of this was nice...Tha second coulda been worded better but it was still dope...

He wont do "Big things" if he had a "Dick Pump", Confessing-his-Mind-State::.
Obviously, he never seen, who he's Messing with, like a Contestant-on-Blind-Date::.
....That was dopeness right there...Tha second part was funny as shit...

Overall Rise had a nice verse...Tha links was annoyin...But it was still a nice verse...At sum points it seemed tha flow fell off tho...That took away from tha verse too...

Evolve:

^^first line speaks for its self, DONT DO DRUGS!!!.. its bad for your Health^^//
.....LMAO...Comedy like a muthafucca...Dope shit...

Truth or Dare?? Truth... you aren't as nice as your think you might be
Dare.. you already look like you're on Dope, so I Dare you to Bite Me!!//
Flyweight Match & im taking you lightly, mad cause I Am what you thought you might be
a NICE MC, but your NOT.. so the best you can do, is just Lose Politely//
.....This whole part was dope as shit...Tha truth/dare breakdown was highly ill...Tha wordplay was dope as shit too...

Well first off, get out of W.E.C trying to teach newbies & listen to your own clinics
cause any good MC knows you shouldn't use Quotes, Links, Bold Tricks & Gimmicks//
What Is This?? sounds like Kindergarden Business... he must be jus Kidding around
but its no Joke when i let my Children treat your mom's Mouth like a Playground//
Rise, then bow down.. please pay attention and learn.. then you Might win
maybe you'll actually earn some respect.. NEVERMIND, he still highlights his multi's w/ Hy-phens//LOL
.....These bars were straight fire and comedy too...Nicely worded and consistent...Good shit....

trust me, those braids are crusty... you shoud be ashamed, you are hardly a dred
fuck it im out... someone tell this Rasta Imposta that Bob Marley is Dead!!//
....This juss killed tha battle...When I read tha last line it juss murda'd tha whole battle...It was dope and funny as shit...

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Evolve gets my vote in this battle becuz I felt he was more consitstent wit his verse and his shit practically had me craccin' up tha whole way thru tha verse...

Vote = Evolve

5-7 Rise

damn this was kinda a weak battle

and yes i did think it was a bitch move for them to change the rule's lettin him quote and bold and shit but at the same time it was a bitch move for you to post his pic witch is not allowed aswell

now to the votin'

evole ya whole verse evoled off his pic and that concept is old and is very played there were a few highlights but i wasnt all that spectacular of a quote like the highlitin his multis line

but the rest to me was filler

rise you had alotta werd-play and shit but most of it was played aswell but i can live wit ya punchs and in that case you came off pretty nice

vote rise

take it or leave it

why is this dude so corny?? the only reason i posted the pic is because of all the links and shit he posted.... you are horrible anyway so go back to Front Lines and battle some newbies bitch

Lets go man... this is a good battle... Need Votes

Yo I checked this battle out and i must say it was pretty nice. I think some of the punch lines Rise brought out were good but some where pretty typical. Evolve had some halarious stuff going on in some of his punchlines. Im giving this to EVOLVE he has mad skill that most people dont possess.

vote=EVOLVE
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Ok thats enough fucking Crew Votes

E i'm not trying to Sway,but more than half your votes are from A.I....Its 8-6,but it should be 7-3 if we took out crew votes...see the differents......

Upp

Vote Rise...
I was feeling his punches more..Bottom Line..

Oh one more thing, fuck you man..lol

dawg all votes stand.... its now 9-6 you... billy and Un both voted for you.... you are up by 3... thats it

9-6 uppin... **and trife's shouldnt count because he didnt explain... but i will let it slide

My bad dogs, Ill quote some shit if you'd like...

Edit: nah, its cool.. dont worry about it... either way you still voted for Rise.... so its aight

vote - evolve.

sorry this si evident, he had flow and some evry cool hitting personals.. the rasta line, hyphen and the bold tricks and gimmicks line.. he killed Rise.. sorry rise, i couldn't flwo yorus.. only one part flowed and that was the hyphen part.. i didn;t find many punches/personals which evolve had.. so thats why.. nto a bad effort rise.. but vote evolve

9-7 Rise... Need some votes

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this was a nice battle from both sides, Rise had sum hard hittn shit & all, but 2 me Evolve had this 1..his shit hit a lil harder but his punches were on point & the lines & everything fit nicely...


VOTE=EVOLVE


1Luv
Cin Ladin

9-8 rise

this is a pretty close battle... nice verse Rise

damn...

Rise..
came off perfect with
excellent flow and punches
personals...lacked...vocab
was nothng great...very nice
verse overall aside from
no personals....

evolve...
Extraordinary verse..damn
you came off great with nice
personals punches and
flow was obviously there.
DOPE shit ...

close battle....

Vocab. Tie
Punches. Tie
Flow. Tie
Dopeness. Tie

the decider....

Personals. Evolve....

Great Battle....

Evolve Takes it Barely...

V. Evolve.

Vocab. Tie
Punches. Tie
Flow. Tie
Personals. Ev

close battle but.........i fely Evolve..personals...and yes they did hit hard

Vote: EV

10-9 him...Up....

**He takes the lead**

**Soap Operas music plays in background**

Close shit dawg.....Uppin for more votes

Yo My vote goes to evolve. He did seem to hold back but the little that he didn't was good enough for my vote

11-9 Evolve