Dw...{VS}...Spittin Quik
 

Rulez:
15-20 Linez
3-0=KO
5-0=Murda
no crew hatin or d/r votes
well explained votes
Spit kid

yo spittin soz i didnt c that u ad posted a thread! i gotta go out so i'll post 2nite or 2moz! u can spit if ya want or u can wait 4 my verse! hola back dawg!

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aight kid
tommorw 4 u
but probably monday for me................................................ .................................................. .........................

alrite spittin lets make this 30 lines max u not online but I know u be in 4 this cos im sure as hell that u can spit 30 no problem!

o.k y’all listen!

Im bout 2 hit quik up like an Iraqi get hit up by a u.s soulja/
This shit be the realest dawg n don’t say I never toldja/
These rhymes getting under ya skin like a scarab beetle/
I’l slice ya arm wiv a knife then inject in heroin wiv a rusty needle/
Laughin, as Watch the sweat drippin from ya pours while inflictin u wiv pain/
This heres burnin through your skin like a heavy dose of acid rain/
Im like lightenin, in n out in a flash of light/
Leavin niggaz on there ass knowin they’ve be beaten in a lyrical fight/
This shit as tight as a knot on a parachute harness/
U about as tight as lace that can’t be tied cos its been polished off wiv varnish/


Dawg ya dads on the dole n ya mums catchin gud business on ya street’s corner/
u get ya shag n 4 10 dollars extra ya get a blow job in a hotel sauna/
u livin in a council house cos ya family doesn’t even have the decency 2 pay/
your all a disgrace, who don’t deserve 2 be mentioned in the same line as the U.S of A/
this gonna scar u till the day u get buried in the mud/
which ain’t far away cos this a bonfire n you’re my ply wood/
in this arena u getting taughtchured more than a lion in a circus/
why don’t u just fuck off 2 pluto cos on earch u have no purpose/
im ashamed of ya mum n dad 4 producin something so weak/
but u wasn’t planned, u were a split in a condom, a fuckin sperm leak/
people say oil leaks r bad 4 the earth but u were way worse/
in this game im like the doctor n u like the nurse, I earn my money while u steelin yours from an old ladies purse/
wen eva your fires burnin I’ll be there cold as ice 2 extinguish/
dawg next time its ya birthday make sure u make the noble wish-/
-that u neva have 2 battle me on r b again/
now turn off ya monitor, take a deep breath, n count 2 ten/
cos 2 be honest bitch I was rhyming tighter wen I was a baby in ma play pen/
your shit ain’t tight its whack n loose/
while your struggling 4 words I’ll be chillin n “sippin on abit of gin n juice”!

uppinnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnn nnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnn!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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dw took this he had better flow and his word play was better two keep tyhat shit up d u got talant G

thanx scotty u can't vote but thanx anyway! don't u think u shud read his verse b4 makin a decision dawg!

can i get some feedback on the verse y'all n i'll vote on any battles u got goin on! the truth aswell i can take critism cos it will just make me better! hola y'all!

come on uppin!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!

uppin on this now hes still not posted!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

thanx scotty u can't vote but thanx anyway! don't u think u shud read his verse b4 makin a decision dawg!

dont u think u shud have done that on mine against ogsilencer?!

luk bitch im feelin beef ere so why don't u fuck off n wen i've finished the battles im in now av me a battle u fuckin punk!

soz y'all don't vote yet i 4got spittin got till tmoz 2 spit!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Yo...you want criticism....cool......I thought you had a few good lines.......that parachute line was hot and original.....something sorely lacking on here in metas.......I felt ya flow.....some of yo shit......I got the message.....but it seemed kinda played..specially that Iraqui soldier line.....that is way overused..........and your ender.......weak as shit....should finished with somethin hard......

Just my opinion though....good verse......just needed more pizzaz or some shit....something spicy..........

Yo hit up the polls on my battle with dice-roller.......thanks

spittin got til 2nite or its a no show! thanx dawg i can take that n work wiv it!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Ay yo...

Aight Look...

I know u hate Incognito, Dw’s wackness been wayyy Out in da Open//
no wonder ur Status keep Failing Charts like Mr T. in US Opens..//

time to end dis chapter like regrets after a weak novel, nutin to quote,//
like interviews wit Mutes on fishing boats, Dw..ya significance has always been a Joke//

Dw's beef get grated, den toast ya buns, str8 Drive-thru Servin like Bullies grabbin a Nerd's Lunch,//
like ya Fists got sent to Iraq, u jus Missin ya Punch//

completed 261 posts, remarkable! like Critics, u know dats on da Negative Side //
Quik will punch u to death, like severin ya penis, hence Killing ur Pride//

da Rap-tor got provoked[/u], De-Tox dis [i]non-hazardous Joke,// couldnt hunt DW if i was da Red October, coz DwSofter than a Pillow made of Smoke..//

Provoking U like Taunting Midgets, U still cant Touch Me, still out of ur reach,//
DW slug u up like i spit snails, while u Suck like ur spittin leech//

U been a Prick in my heel till now, we kno bitches who dont stepp up r auto-gay,//
Ull feel like Quik drained all ya Wordz, coz after dis gay-bashing ur left wit Nothing to Say//
This Fool "hits more balls" than "pros at golf pros",Ill? only when i spit at you with sars,wreck ya with my iron bars,after its ova u can Trace my Line with left ova Scars//

DW livin Like fat kids on a resperator now ya heart is pumpin,teach you how 2 murder sumthin,//
rip ur invertebrae so ya body Bounce as i Slit Ya Wrists til the Blood Is Jumpin//

For this Fag vets in an untouched premises,im tha "agent of retrebution"DW im your nemisis/
take this win this home i deminish,Ya verse like ja rule tracks observers look forward 2 da finish/

Like Midgets skills undergrown,murder bout 2 be shown,
ya in a (whack)league of ur own,Ova 2 wins but yet all unkown/

Ova after im pulling this trigger,DW known to lace verses with steroids to get punches bigga//
Putting Method in ya avy only way 2 put the Man in you nigga/(method MAN)

Kik You Out of this bar like violent bouncers,Im calling ya death n i aint funeral pronoucers,//
Come dope in ounces,Fire@You From 1m Away so u can observe "Close In Counters//

Come With Brillance magically murder this dick jerker,
coz DW Packages More Nuts than a Peanut Factory Worker//

DWs Most voted on who shouldnt battle in vets we chose,he wants 2 stay ill heads opose//
,since ya just got ko'd by gen and 380 snubnose,like pissed off mods this battle i close,Like Violent Male Sexist i Slaughterthese Fake ass Hoes//

Disregard your size,Slice Scrotum past upper thighs,Dw killed in no disquise,
platter both ya eyes,Stop ya (Dw)Quest of takin the prize, ya begin me not 2 kill u ..just dw dun compromise/


Dawg U FiNIShed!!!!!

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i think Murda! quik had good punches and had sum good personals. that is what was lackin in dw's verse. good battle though.

Yea, this was Quik's...

I hate it when someone has to lose these really long battles.
There's always alot of thought put into these and coming out on the losing end sucks!
Sorry, DW

Quik

heheh so tru. Good effort from both. But Spittin quik did have it all. Better punchez and wordplay. Say no more.

VOTE => Spittin Quik <=

i agree wit above....DW stood a good chance till spitten spit......DW's shit was jus kinda basic an la la la...while quick's was direct an actually a joy to read...good punches an vocab...VOTE SPIT

Quick took this one on the personals and flow
Tight battle but I think DW's was a bit too played
and spit had some nice creativity

Vote = Spittin