DW V.S CarsonJet
 

ok u accepted my challenge

i told u to set up u didnt, i also said u make rules up:u didnt

so ima do both for ya

20-25 line
no dik vote
no crew vote
try an hit today(i c u have like 10 other battles)
no feeding
(since u look busy an im such a nice guy ill spit first)
*G/L*

like i said i undastand if ya take a lil while...ya look busy in da forumn...but i aint doin shit so ima drop it like dis right now.....

yo chek it......

aight listen here mista dw ur lines flo like ur moms combusted ass//
slo, large, an filled wit expansible amounts of useless gas//
but that aint da battle im fightin, im fightin dis war wit u//
literally, couldnt hak it as a rapper if lived in tim-buc 2//
but on toppa all dat..ya call out str8 gangsta//
gangsta, gangsta, sittin on top of ya hill in manchesta//
sippin on tea:sharing fig-newtons wit uncle festa//

urself, ur upset fo diggin dis hole//
a boa constricta couldnt squeeze a dope drop from ya soul//
tried ta be sneaky, but nigga im da mole//
couldnt get a shinny penny, for ya lyrics, from ole king cole//
iv had betta battles in da midst of a winta cold//
out in da streets wit my tounge impinged to a pole//

Id still sieze an incise every amount of dignity within//
u....rappin in dis game ..be theoreticly a sin//
stick ta ya chess an polo wit yo freinds//
tearin you....only a negative message it sends//
dun worry DW....this battle will soon end//
5 votes be all it takes in dis here thread//
like a nigga "in da club", facin 6 more doses of lead//
ya dead, tread softly, bow ya head//
whats dun is done, an said been said//

next//.....

any one want me to hit up sum links while im waitin hit me up...jus return da favor when dw battles bak......*1*

rite i gotta go off line carson so i'll spit tmoz! that was tight dawg gud verse!


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yo check out my shit on TMcVeigh v.s. BLuNT-mc................................................ .................................................. .

i will vote when dw drops his verse and then yall vote on my nexy battle please pzz niggas 1 :) .................................................. ....................................

hey tmcveigh stop fuckin free postin u done it in like 20 battles today.......first fukin rule of r&b dont freepost in a battle post.....vote /give ur explanation thats it....dont fukin advertise...

aight...DW dont forget to spit today...im uppin this for your convenience...dont forget...peace/////////////////////////////////

aight...DW dont forget to spit today...im uppin this for your convenience...dont forget...peace/////////////////////////////////

i shud really be voting 4 carsonjet coz DW u no-showed. i mean u voted against me vs ogsilencer b4 i even spit. how much of a dick ryder can u be?! but i aint gonna vote coz i aint a cheatin cunt like u.

o yeah, good drop carson.

wut da frig happened? that was 2 days ago.....maybe today u'll hit up.....hopefully

ill vote up on this IF dw spits.....................................
return favour with me vs Insane Thug ;)
-peace

tryin to end this thread.....uppin for votes please.....ill return the favor/////////////////////////////////////////////////

You’re a disgrace 2 man/
A nigga who got caught beatin his dick on a live web cam/
U ain’t a male u a caveman who hasn’t evolved/
U like a fuckin crossword puzzle which hasn’t been solved/
Mankind doesn’t deserve 2 be metioned in the same line as u/
Wen ya not beatin ya dick your avin more fun than u supposed 2 wiv a wooden snooker que/
Theres a wall where man on 1 side n u on the other n you’ll neva make it through the gate/
You’re a disgrace 2 man, whos fate is 2 live in the gutter eattin scaps off a steel back plate/
U the kinda pussy who always got picked last in school football/
Who went shoppin wiv his mum at 19 at the local mall, n cudnt get pussy so fantasised over the posters on his wall of jean paul/
U a disgrace 2 man but u ain’t a man n that a fact cos u ain’t got no dick/
U fillin in a gay questionnaire n answerin every question wiv a straight tick/
Im ashamed of ya mum n ya dad 4 producin something so weak/
Your ass wasn’t planned, u were a split in a condom, a fuckin sperm leak/
But Its o.k cos your kind fallen straight off the food chain n becoming extinct/
U just wish your ass cud turn bac the clock n make r genes linked/
You’re a pussy arse bitch, a disgrace, a nigga who shud be ashamed 2 show his own face/
Cos u ain’t out servin ya own country at war/
Actually its probably beta that u not cos if u were your arse wud cause a civil war/
You’re a disgrace, 2 man n mankind all in 1 case/
N im gonna finish u dawg so get down 2 the cemetery n find yourself a suitable place/
Carsenjet u just broke down n u divin head first/
U like a hot air balloon which just burst n in this race 2 the ground your ass comin first/
Pass? Not on u cos this eres tighter than ya mums ass/
Im original dawg, I ain’t gonna shot u ima sufficate u wiv gas/
I can c rite through u like u a piece of transparent glass/
u can’t get pussy so u fuckin an inflatable bitch/
But im bout 2 pop her dawg so I hope u can stitch!

Thats it!


uppin!

dw and his long whack ass verse
your the real disgrace to this site nigga
you put the homo in sapien you faggot
get off the site, your rhymes stink you shit head
go eat a dick!

set it up bitch im gonna fuckin kill u! i'd like 2 c u do beta n think u can well stop fuckin bout n set it up!

uppin votes!

uppin votes y'all!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

soz its late carson alot shit been goin down the last few days! peace! now can we get some votes up in ere now y'all come on!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

you both same some good punches. the flow's were aight. i gotta go with carson on this one. he came just a little harder. good battle though.

both came quite hard in this one, both had good punches n word play.... hard decition ima go wit how i personally took it...... i did feel carsons flow good, but a mean dw just his flow went dam good in ma head, ima go wit him...... hard decition but gotta be.....
vote: dw
return vote wit me vs tha truest
peace

uppin votes y'all!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

uppin!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Tight battle for sure
At first I couldn't decide so i had to read both verses 3 times
At first I thought Carsonjet would take this but his verse would be better if it was on audio

cause DW made better personals and delivered his punches a bit more

Carsonjet had some better creativity and orginality but he has to work on better punches, btw the opener from carson was ill tho

Vote = dw

Return the favour
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uppin 3 votes!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

but i want a battle with dw first check bitchslapped and set it up 20 lines and dont bother postin on my other battle stuffs closed
vote=carsonjet
ps. i want to battle dw

yeh this battle was good. carson had aight flow and punches. however i felt dw's punches more. i think this was one of his best battles. keep it up man.

Vote = dw

thanx dawg!

uppin!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!! 2 votes!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Even Though DW took so long to drop his verse id say it was slightly better

The punchlines where more obvious, and hiw words and lines flowed into each other much better ..

Poll Vote = DW

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i'm gonna give it to dw...he came wit harder punches and all.... better word play too.... good battle though to the both of ya

vote - dw