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Passivist 05-17-03 06:19 PM

"Criminal Minded: A Deathrow Story" featuring RhytemicTendecies
 
{RythmicTendicies}
I’m sittin here, spending my last solitary days on-tha-row//
Surrounded by killers, rapists, and generally filthy-shit-gore//
I don’t wanna be here no more, I wanna go back home//
But since the age-of-four, I’ve dreamed of the father I’ve never known//
This 10 ton burden on my back I’m towin, all my appeals are gone//
My only chance is to start clawin through these walls, laywer isn’t carin//
People say when I die, it’s just clear sailin’, but not for my malevolence
soul//
When their done, my white ass will be as black as coal, it’s-already-over//
I’m gonna need more than a 3-leaf-clover, you think things’d-be-different/
If I’d woken up that-moring-sober, bit I guess I’m just keepin’//
The justice-system-efficient, wish I though 2 fuck’s was sufficient//

{Withersman}
Murder was the case that they gave me//
My lawyer said, "Sorry Mr. Withers but I can't bring you to safety"//
I couldn't believe what I heard//
I knew sooner or later I would see Satan and not the heavenly birds//
I'm the man who's been neglected all his life//
heart filled with hatred, cold, and filled with the desire of strife//
as you can see what drove me to this insanity, I can't believe//
Why did I leave a nigga six feet deep//
Well he came in my face and said, "You gonna get your ass kicked"//
so I pulled out the eagle and left him sleeping in his casket//
there it goes the darkest sin//
the niggas soul is floatin in the atmosphere with the wind//
I've been to jail before but not for this reason//
Now the rest of these killers and billers, fillers will also stop breathin//
in my cell, I'm countdown and calculating//
my remaining days, oh shit there goes my life savings//
I wasn't innocent like Snoop Dogg was found//
instead to the jury I was a notorious bloodhound//
now my life is in jeapordy because of my actions//
I could've walked away instead of killin someone like I was in "Red Faction"//

{RythmicTendicies}
This is it now, no more chance-to-mend//
My mistakes, were getting clos to-the-end//
Forgiveness signals to god, I send//
Hope he’ll tend, to my tortured excruciating wounds//
O shit, this it it, don’t take me now, please!!//

{Withersman}
No man!! They can't take me away!!//
The governer will call, please just a few more days//
I'm sorry for what I did. I SAID I'M SORRY FOR WHAT I DID!!//
I never realised how emotional it gets when it comes to the end//
Makaveli said, "I aint a killer but don't push me"//
THE MUTHA FUCKA WAS GONNA KILL ME//
I'm strapped in this chair it's too late//
The family's giving me the finger wow that's great//
Okay tears are running down my cheeks how?//
it's too late you can go on and pull the switch now//

(Electric buzzing)

-Done-

Bash 05-17-03 06:25 PM

Tha topic of this drop remined me of Snoop dogg's "Murda was tha case that they gave me" , , , and 2pac's "2 of amerikaz most wanted" , , , , ,Withersman Blazed it as alwayz , ,, rhymeictendicies also came out vicious , , Lines were onpoint , , , overall Ill drop ,, and ya all get a 9/10 , , ,,

Passivist 05-17-03 07:49 PM

Aight thanks dawg UPPIN PEOPLE!!!!!!

cerealkilla 05-17-03 08:49 PM

Hey man that was dope as fuck.Keep writin' kid.

Passivist 05-17-03 09:09 PM

thanx dawg. UPPIN

beatle juice 05-17-03 09:21 PM

holly shit this was hype Withersman i like your style the first line you spit that was ill the safty shit

nice post i love what ya'll doing with the crew thing

Passivist 05-17-03 09:41 PM

lol thanx dawg UPPIN!

Tha_Rhymer 05-17-03 09:58 PM

yo that shit was hot. both emcees deserve 2 thumbs up

Passivist 05-17-03 10:10 PM

thanx Dawg uppin!!!!

Passivist 05-18-03 12:36 AM

YO CHECK THIS YALL!!!!!!!!!

Nonsense 05-18-03 12:42 AM

dat was hot i was really feelin it....................i would like ta hear it ova a beat.....................

Passivist 05-18-03 12:45 AM

thanx dawg

RythmicTendicies 05-18-03 05:53 AM

thanx everyone :)

Passivist 05-18-03 11:29 AM

UPPIN FOR VIEWS AND OPINIONS!!!!!!!

Passivist 05-18-03 01:56 PM

UPPIN FOR OPINIONS!!!!!!

Passivist 05-19-03 12:00 AM

UPPIN!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Bash 05-19-03 12:13 AM

return da favour dawg , , , cause i replied to this drop a long time ago , ,, so peep mines http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=48119

Passivist 05-19-03 07:55 AM

Aight dawg

§olja*Lyricist 05-22-03 05:35 PM

Nice stuff....I never seen this collab before, but RT informed me mine was similar. I did one about a man though and it seem yall two were talking about yourselves on death row. Nice piece! -1-

Passivist 05-22-03 06:39 PM

thanx dawg

Consiquence 06-01-03 05:04 PM

that shit was hot............................................... .................................................. .................................................. .................................................. ..........

Consiquence 06-01-03 05:05 PM

infact it was bangin............................................ .................................................. ........................................

Passivist 06-01-03 07:19 PM

^^^^ ok thanx.......


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