Death
 

Death

Neva know when I’m a get stuck outta luck,
Inhaling smoke n coughing until I reach my coffin,
As I roam these streets intoxicated,
I neva anticipated, that situations I would be facing could be near death related,
Now my mind is only concentrated, on my survival,
And my only chance of livin is to out live my rivals,
And my arrival, to this world was unappreciated,
That’s why all these cats want me assassinated,
But not from the game of life but from this rap game,
They want me to remain unknown and refrain,
From reaching anywhere so now I must prepare,
To lead the one man military murderous militia,
This game is like a computer n I’m just another hard partition,
Another upgrade another addition,
That’s being chased down by the reaper of death,
And I wont quit this until I have my last breath left,
Until I cant step, until my legs fail-me until my arms are paralyzed,
Until my brain is neutralized, until the evil is purified,
And when death is upon me my superiors will say “Another hero has been sacrificed”.


took me like 5-8 mins to write this one i kept it short

Thats some good Ish mun...Better than your other stuff...Got some nice flow in multi's there man...Good topic and lyrics.......Pz.......

decent drop,

thought it flowed well, and you satyed on the topic!
Until I cant step, until my legs fail-me until my arms are paralyzed,
Until my brain is neutralized, until the evil is purified,
And when death is upon me my superiors will say “Another hero has been sacrificed”. - that was tight!

yo thnx fo the comments.........n meadskillz when eva u reply to my shit u always say That was ur best work......well the truth is that like i elivate everytime i write and like my style sorta changes and seems better then before cuse it's like upgraded.............oh wel..........UPPING

nice drop trill,liked the style,liked the way it flowd in my head,liked everything abou tit...should work on it and expand it out,its good so far

yo thnx...........yea i might think of doin that.....i got like 3 pieces which i've only dun 1 verse.......cuse like i dont think it would go well with choruses and shit

This was Tight , , , its truly audio material , wit a slow beat ,, , , Lines were onpoint , , ,tha verse went wit tha tittle , u did a great job here dawg

Yeah nice drop i enjoyed it a bit shorter than your other ones though................................dope peice

THNX>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>UPPIN

thats some real stuff man, nice line ta end it. Good to see an aussie boy bustin ryhmes

Peace

thnx, there are heaps of aussie rappers on this site.....meadskillz/treach p/morgdorg/Atetrack define'/inspire and a lot more.............................................. ....................................UPPING

But not from the game of life but from this rap game,
They want me to remain unknown and refrain,
From reaching anywhere so now I must prepare,
To lead the one man military murderous militia,
This game is like a computer n I’m just another hard partition,
Another upgrade another addition,


Trill another classic man, Keep spittin, I was feelin this, not bad for a quick write ...upps

thank u.......fuck i'm gettin so majorly slept on..........haha "TRILL ANOTHER CLASSIC MAN" now i get respected on a regular basis..........yo peeps drop links to yo shit cuse u know i'll check urs...............fuckin hell i reply to as amny thread a day as i can.......especially to ayw who need replies peeps with 0 replies..........and i just dont say "that was ill, i give constructive critism........oh well.....UPPPING

That was phat as hell

yo thnx for replyin to mine.........i'm still gettin slept....................................>>>>>>>>>>>><<<<<<<<<<>>>>>>><<<<>>><><><><><><><><><><><><>><><<><><><><><><><>

up up up,dafuck up!....sleeping...........tis annoyin innit....too bad none yall be in perth though...tis a problem,bein by myself an all,hardness to start shit.....anyways,up for my man trill here...moderific

thanx yo atetrack shit's gunna be betta now, i'm recordin tomorrow, and enterin this rap comp in like 2 wks lol TRILL is going places

lmao...they have competitions in queensland????if onl it were tha tsimple in perth...sigh.good luck

Ya Slept on whole lot of Dick Sucking goin on in here this was weak

shut up grym,,,,,,,,,,,dont think i closed ur threads for no reason
stop bitchin about it...........do u want me to open 1 up for ya,
well stop btichin then..............................READ THE RULESSSSSS

OH MY GOD, DID YOU HONESTLY STICKY THIS YOURSELF???? Please tell me otherwise......

be quiet mead.............ur only sayin that cuse i refused to sticky ur thread lol..................