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Yea Man I Did It Again...
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wut yall think i need ta improve on???
wut u think about the trak? hot? garbage? |
YES! YES! YES!!!!!.... you got it dog.... you fell off a little bit in the middle but you picked it back up. Cut out a lot of the talkin n filler next time. Try to keep a steady flow for a long time without stoppin. It'll sound nice as fuck. Thats a good track tho. You had some good shit in there. Keep elevatin dog. -1-
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nuff respect dog, good lookin, i agree bout the middle part, imma do the trak over later on... my voice was givin out, so it wasnt my full 200%.. good lookin tho .
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any more comments on it?
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yeah homie, this was coo, got sum skill manye, keep doing ya thang
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Good track stay up dog.
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good lookin dogs... anyone else?
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im gonna get it im gonna get it
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quality was bad and content needs work. I wasnt feelin it.
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quality is bad on lo fi, listen to hi fi or the mp3, good lookin tho
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yea keep it up. anymore comments?
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of course
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no doubt
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its shotta man
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bringin this back up for those who missed it, let me kno what yall think...
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pretty tite... i like the beat...
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thanks dog, good lookin
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wake up
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shotta
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MORE FIYAHHHHHHH!!!!
wha gwan bad man?? nice drop hommie, represent de West INdies nice!!! beat was fiyahh still keep at it hommie E Z |
dun kno dun kno, nuff respect fi di feedback
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son, stop uppin ya shit like a madman! if ya works is on point, then the the number of replys will be a testament to that...
peepin- quality's iight...the pop in the intro almost got my ears bleedin tho...'n yes, im listenin' hifi, an still sounds bad...but verse is cool...all the effects are WACK tho son, an the part where the beat skips, which i kno u did an editted...thing is, u need to spend more time on making ya audio sound professional if u wanna go somewhere with this rap shit... flows like most harlem rappers...not very appeling being that everyone these days is sounding similar...i say up ya flow and wordplay more, add complexity to the verse...i mean, u got good flow an what not, jus taht this joint sounded like a whole racka diff verses put into one... but do you... holla back... oNE... |
iight good lookin on the feed back fam, im just tryna make sure every herd it
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i thought this sucked.. no offense.. but you got no sense of rhythm.. and it seems like your jus reading.. its too blah blah blah.. emotion is not there.. and alot of your lines are really played out.. BUT.. keep doin your thing.. elevate
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^^^^^ i definitely agree wit my man up there...
awwww man.....lol......been a long time i dont hear from this cat.....well i did hear this before, and i still got the same opinion....production still the same....i mean at least ur clear, but you're still off flow, and your delivery is horrible....punches aint hittin anything.....rhymes are still childish....i thought they was weak....your doubles and echoe's are garbage.....ya need work....................take this how u want it....it aint beef, but i'm just tellin u wats real....OnE I'm Ghost... |
lol c-nice... good lookin on the feedback, its a old track, just tryna get some more critic on it
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yea no doubt i feel you..
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this is pretty bad. quality is horrible. so bad im not even goin to tell you how to improve it. just keep practicing.... most punches were wack. i liked some of them tho. but on some real. sounds like you not even rappin. work on ya flow dog. aight. man. stay up.
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ok.........flow non existant....lyrics pretty good.....voice sounds like Drag-on talkin,lol........you would sound WAYYYYYYYY better if you work on your flow and emotion........WAYYYYYYYYYYYY better............keep it up.......oh yeah production kinda shitty, but not as bad as some of these peoples tellin you that yours is bad,lol.........stay up
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lol yea i kno the production is buttcheeks, tryna get some better equipment, main thing i care about is dat yall like the lyrics, everythin else is not too hard to imprve, good lookin
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