BlacK_PlaGuE vs Tha Truest
 

aight rulez:
15 lines max
no crew / hate votes
no d/r
no FEEDIN / BITIN!!!!!!
you spit up first dawg (if yo ok wit dat ;))

i'm here....verse'll be up in a couple min..
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aight kid checkin in here, spit up................................................ ....................

cmon dawg how long you gonna be, spit yo shit so i can send you to hell wit yo felow newb's.........

MY VERSE
 

i'm the "plague" spreading "black" disease all over this site(plague) you a "fag" you dead like [I]japanese people in the "war" its all over tonight ///

i kill muthafuckas no remorse or feelings i report more stealings to the rap "police" about these "biters" than a orange does peeling//(report more biters than oranges peel)

i get rappers in bad moods i strip rappers of mad jewels and if you play "baseball" and talk i hit rappers with bats too //

what happens when "crazy" rappers spit? i bet madness you could be a "doctor" who specializes with "animals" and still not be vet status //

like a little "kid" yo ass is dependent,annoying but thats yo choice just call me "daddy" long legs i "spit" venemous poisen you have no voice///(cant rap)

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Like a “hanger” my –hats to you- like the “peak” higher –aptitude- like a kid with a fucked up –attitude- I beat you and –tattled you- and “drank” you up like –apple juice-and just like yo mamas pussy this –battles l[o]ose- //({lose}battles lost for him)//

Tha Truest ima leave yo wack ass distressed from tha quest o' mine to put yo to rest//
Whats yo last request bitch, have a gun stand off like da wild west?//
Yo dawg you just messed in tha head, you always gonna be second best to me//
This aint no democracy, is tha united states of black plage, yo under me!//
Yo callin out S.O.S, you dont need help kid, yo need a change o' address//
Ima come after you guns a'blazin, yo face frozen wit the cool chills of ma glock poppin//
A aint stoppin bitch, you challenge tha Lyrical D - ya challenge me//
Assume the crash position, head between yo knees and kiss yo ass goodbye//
A show full blown aggression, yo spit was nuthin more but your confession//
Yo gonna be sufferin from depression at tha end of this battle session//
All thats gonna be left of you is a chalk line round yo body//
Am spittin so hard at you yo hairline got wet an' soggy//
Ill leave yo body in a hamburger bun, yo dawg dont slip up dial 9-1-1//
You got a hired BB Gun, yo expect to get me wit that SHIT//
Fuck off bitch, go home, get a job, cos this is tha end of ma spit//

~peace~

uppin for votes............................................. ........................................

yo yo uppin for votes ya'll............... ill return favour if yo got a battle goin..........................
peace

uppin for some REAL EXPLAINED votes are the kind i like.........

i'll return the favor who eva votes i'll vote on yo battle/.........

u cant even poll vote foo ;)
aight uppin cmon guys.............
ill return yo favour if yo got a battle
peace

i go with black plauge, he had a longer verse & good punches, truest was good but he shoulda went a lil longer
return the favor dawg
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...3394#post443394

VOTE = PLAGUE

REASON: Well, i din't liek truest's structure too much...big run-on sentence...i also thought plague came wit it (better punches...all that shit)

stay up both

don't foget ta vote on my battle wit zoloxian
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...=&postid=443359

mind poll vote guys......... uppin............................................. .............................

Oh nd i'll poll my vote in a sec

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http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...=&postid=443359

aight tnx dawg, still uppin ya'll ill vote up if yo got a battle goin.........................................

"the POINT of a joke or humorous story"......a punch(line).......


explain you punches to me........and how you had more than me and how you had better than me...the voters explain that to me,.........thats what you are supposed to do....to elp people elevate you cant say this guy had better punches and not give examples................a VOTE yall peeps need to learn to do it.......personally in my opinion his punches were weak............................i think i wo........wait..............i KNOW as far as SKILLS go i beat this guy................


i'm out......

sincerely,
Tha truest

Yo, plague rememba ta poll vote in my battle wit zoloxian...decide already,,, lol

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=48225

^^^yo what the fuck see?......why he askin only plague to vote?........that just proves people dickryde on here to much............i'ma vote on some battles show ya'll people how to vote man...........if truw emcees were on here and wanted to help people improve they skills they wouldnt dickryder and all that shitt.....

cos i voted up on his earlier but cudnt decide dawg lol.............................................

not dickridin...i voted herr,,, askin fo him ta return tha favor...god dayumn....he really DID beat u tho...ur structure wuz messed...

yo street legend lets battle............................................ .................................................. ..................

lol u wantin another whoopin truest dawg :)
uppin for votes............................................. .....
ill return favour............!!!!!!!!!!

uppin ya'll come on......................... ill voteup if yo got a battle goin the now dawgs....................

i'll hit this up 4 sure if u vote on my battle wiv carsonjet, the min u vote i'll vote on this! remember 2 poll vote dawg!

YO, BLACKPLAGUE BATTLE ME, I SEE THAT YOU HAVE SOME SKILLS, BUT I PRODUCE NICE RHYMES LIKE MAGIC SO LETS BATTLE...I PROMISE YOU IM NOT WACK...COMON...SOME OF THESE CATS ALREADY PUSSY OUT WHEN I CHALLENGE THEM.

aight im gonna try to explain why i am voting for black as best i can on this one. neither one of you really threw any good punches. you were both more about how much better you are and how your gonna kick the other dudes ass. which is cool, i'm just saying there wasn't a lot of punches thrown. i think black had a more straigth forward attack with his flow though. truest it seemed like you were dancin' with your sentences to make them flow. it made it seem a little weak. i know what you were trying to do by making some wordplay - but it came out wrong and seemed kinda weak. hopefully that explains what i mean to say.

aight dawg tnx for feedback, nice n details much respect to yo!, still uppin for votes guys.................... ill return favour if yo got a battle shootin/.......
peace

stilllllllllllll uppin lol ;) come on guys get this shit rolinnnnnn like a tight rizzla come on!!!!!!!!
ill return tha favour if yo got a battle goin.......

yo black took this easily.he defo got tha skillz that ya need.............................................. .................................................. ................okay am done

aight 3-0 KO, uppin for 2 more votes to close poll n make it official ya'll,,,,............... ill return favour if yo got a battle goin aight....................
peace

I'm giving this one to Black... Truest, your verse was nice but you tried too hard... wayyy too hard to do metaphors and punchlines...
when you have to explain your meta's & punches like this:

you're trying to hard...

I see some potential in you truest... keep battling and writting..

Can Both Of you drop a vote in my battle with BigNick... thanks

here's the link:
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=47553

uppin for votes yall one more to close............................................. ......... ill return da favour

still uppin ya'll............................................. .............. ill return favour if yo vote up....

uppin for another vote.............................................. .................................................. .................................................

vote blak i felt that this was not the best battle ive seen but it had alotta flow at some points that i could get to feel and thats what made me keep readin

but black came straight to the point good flow and had some decent punchs

so vote black