Zoloxian vs. StreetLedgend
 

10- 16 lines
no crew votes
verses due within an hour of this post goin up

no bitin on my verse eitha...or feedin off of it...no recyclyin so of ur otha shit, etc..

...checkin in...

ill drop a vote when yall finish\
check my shit out
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...?threadid=48201

...I hope you never ever again try Rappin'...
...Street bein' born is just 'proof' Shit Happens...
...Your wack Son, dawg' I'll leave you Drippin' Sweaty...
...Like your Mom's Fat Ass Chasin' A Bowl of Spaggetti...
Legend he ain't ready.I got lyrics' Good N' Plenty
.You get Snicker'd as an MC,I'll rip you 'Now & Later'.
.I punk Pussy Haters & weak ass Individuals.
..You couldn't Rock a Rainbow employed by Skittles...
.Its a Habitual Diss Ritual to Belittle You, thinkin I'm Soft .
...But I'll see you at the bottom if I ever FALL OFF!...
...I'm iller than a SARS caugh catch my drift?...
...You wouldn't have a KeYStylE if you were a fukkin Locksmith...
...If rap was home grown your a lousy immagrant..
...you feel my rips..Im the King...
..You could write ya lyrics on Tampons with Wings, yo Im serious..
.Your verse still wont Flow Fly son Period!.

Ayo check it...

Newbs don't kno wut they gettin into, this 1 barely kno where he from//
Tho this kat's commin from a 'new angle', it'll end in da same outcome// (ME WINNIN)

Foo don't even kno howta spell my name nd he expect ta have a chance//
Bet wen he loses dis battle, he'll post one of his 'world famous bitchin rants'//

If there wuz a "thread starting for dummies" bookclub, he'd prolly be at tha top//
He's tha "pplz merk victim", tha opposite of tha ROCK// (Rock = Pplz Champion)

Ion even hafta start fightin b4 dis nigga start 'bitin' my shit//
Thas y he din't state 'that' rule; he expected ta run away 'clenched' on my tit//

This battle wuz decided on b4 i even hadda drop tha decida// (Finisher)
I'm leavin dis kat stale nd 'nasty' like 100 year old apple cida//

iigh there's my verse...some votes...
Oh nd juss disregrad all tha () if u think they're annoyin...don't vote fo him cas of that..

nice verse zoloxian...
well lets see wut tha ppl say...
lol nd btw u spelt my name wrong in tha title of this thread..

vote=zolo
better punches, flow
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fuckin hell that newb wasnt so bad ....... but his style was a bit off, punches were strong......, street your shit was good at beginning, dropped off near end.... hard this one to decide....... ima check back in a min need to think this one through lol
return favour wit me vs tha truest

lol...plague don't forget ta drop ur vote tho...well, his verse wuz maad good...not even scurred to admit it...some of his linez din't rhyme but he did hav nice punches..

im goin with street on this one. tho i iked the beginnin of the other cats verse. good drop by both but street gott this win from the better wordplay and xperience. holla.............^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ ^^^

ok...poll ur votes tho..





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this battle wasnt too bad but i gotta give it to street legend, those punches were hot
vote-street.

iigh

uppin fo more votes (POLL VOTES)
1-0 accordin ta polls

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THA BEGINNIN' OF THE OTHER DUES VERSE WAS GOOD BUT HE FELL OFF AFTER THA 1ST 4 LINES SO IMA HAVE TO GO WITH STREET, HE KILL'D IT WITH THOSE PUNCHES

OH & UMM HIT MY NIGUH NEW'B BATTLE UP HERE
HE THE NEXT RAP VERSION OF VINCE MC MAN.. LOL

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=48118

street owned you .... herb with 8 posts , going against a heavy weight ..................................................
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aight in end gonna go wit street, his pinches after ive read through ALOT are better......... good wp, style etc.........
return favour wit me vs tha truest

3-0 me...keep votin ppl...POLL VOTES THO...

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iigh 4-0 me...

ONE MORE VOTE Y'ALL.....................
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vote-zoloxian


zoloxian man structure your verse diff. next time though

street legend-
punches-6.0(nuthin really flattered me)
flow-7.0
wordplay-4.0
structure-6.0(flowed aight.)
overall verse-5.7

^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^you had an all right verse nuthin really good though....

zoli..whateva.....

punches-7.0(he built them up (KINDA)
flow-4.0(didnt flow at all)
wordplay-7.0(had some other emcee didnt)
structure-2.0(structure it different homie)
overall verse-6.5

^^^^^^^^^^that aint the average but structure aint that important and as far as the real shit goes(punche flow wordplay) zoloxian took this battle..........just srutcure it different and try to make your punches stand out a little more......

i cant poll vote though so....it prolly wont count...whateva...my 2 cents though for what its worth............................................. .......................

eh, respect ur vote tho...

more votes.........
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vote Street
 

damn street i think that u owned zolo

i would vote for street

cause his one had harder punches

yo wats up with this

man i can't vote

i would vote for street

but damn it

i think he had harder punches


y won't it work

VOTE--________StreetLegend

if ur on AOL it won't work...but thanks fo tha vote

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ONE MORE VOTE Y'ALL

retuen da favor

wit XYZ

Come on dawg...............................

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hey...i gotta give this one to street, i was feelin his verse more..............................it seemed like he had better word play.............................................. ...........return da favor and vote on

http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthr...&threadid=48001

eh, ok

stop sleepin peepz...vote on dis..

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