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Tonya~Montana 05-19-03 05:12 PM

Tonya~Montana >vs<Nuclear Weaponz
 
rulez....first to five.....5-10 linez!! check in and Holla!!

Nuclear Weaponz 05-19-03 08:18 PM

Thats madd short lol, how bout we raise it to 10-16 lines. Checkin in. And i'm about to key some shit up right quick. Start your stop watch.
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x-signals 05-19-03 08:19 PM

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=48249

hey can ya please drop a vote on this ill return the fav i need one more vote to win thanx

Nuclear Weaponz 05-19-03 08:49 PM

Ayo...

Why ya on MY DICK? It's ya only 'GRASP' ON GREATNESS, cuz you can only 'TOUCH'-da-best // 1
You're a PUSSY at HEART so I'ma rip a CUNT in ya ribcage and let my manes fuck-up-ya-chest // 2
You wouldn't have DOPE 'TRACKS' if you were a Heroine-addict // 3
Ya verse is ASS and I'ma RIP it worse than when ya boy friend FUCKED a TEAR-in-ya-crack-kid // 4
Shit you couldnt Katch Frazes, All you got is a couple One Liners// 5
The only reason Tonya wins Battles, is cause she got an Army of dick riders// 6
Tonya Cant Step-To-Me, her Punches and Forced Multis are played out// 7
Ill Rip-ya-Anatomy, You Cant Stand Up to Me, Cause Ill leave you Laid-Out// 8
If she rhymes above the sound barrier she couldnt rhyme at new heights// 9
Tonya's disoriented ass couldnt be advanced, if her verses were keyed from satelites// 10
When you come back startin off with losses its serious, your wack, go find another site to RAP ON // 11
This bitch is Murdered with this Verse "Period", speakin of which it's to remove this Bitches Tampon // 12
This battle should be a One sider, your getting devoured, coward// 13
Ill chop you up for 60 minutes, and label it your FINEST HOUR// 14

Damn i sound all sexist callin you a bitch lol. Oh well sorry if you take any offense.

brabbit 05-19-03 09:27 PM

yo come hit up this shit brabbit vs dice roller

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...=5&pagenumber=3

hit that shit up an ill return the favour aight dogg?

NewPort 05-19-03 09:45 PM

Yo, hit up that battle against Hurrikane, so i can put that shit to sleep then i'll put my opinion in on yours -one

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...?threadid=48377

Nuclear Weaponz 05-19-03 09:50 PM

God damn, get tha fuck outta here and stop freepostin. This aint no mutha fuckin employment office. Quit rushin shit and maybe people wouldn't get so annoyed by you fuckin herbs. Uppin for Montana.
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Nuclear Weaponz 05-19-03 11:57 PM

U must be busy cuz from what i heard your on time for battles and a good battler. I'm waitin to be amazed lol. I hope you didnt think i was playin when i said i could make your loss list longer.
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Nuclear Weaponz 05-20-03 12:19 PM

Iight i know your not duckin on my so i aint even stressin, I just hope you drop today.^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ ^^^^^^^^^^^
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Nuclear Weaponz 05-20-03 04:48 PM

Uppin^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^21

Nuclear Weaponz 05-20-03 05:38 PM

Uppin for your verse.^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^21

Tonya~Montana 05-20-03 06:00 PM

IIGHT.....
 
yea I read ya Little Rhyme and I should
Verse Feed// all you Rappin bout is SEX
like you Battlin "BIRDS & the "BEES//

Cause ya NAME Nuclear Weaponz at me you
CHOSE-to-FIRE// How you get One LOSS on your
RECORD you must've FIRED ya GHOSTWRITER//

I ask why you BUGGIN you must have CRICKETS-as-FANS// You
have tha HARDEST Crew on RB when yall holding each other
DICKS-in-HAND// I guest thats why ya crew Label as
"SUCKER MCEES"// I heard you call ya ASSHOLE "TENDER LOVE"
cause you like to "FORCE MD's"{More Dicks}:eek: //

Spittin Murderous Rhymes yea this Rap shit I Love
it// I'll SUFFOCATE you with tha same BAG you make
your Girl where in Public// ya rhyme Weaponz are useless
dam I knew you was a FAKER// I got 7 wins and afta this Battle
you gonna bring me 8{Kobe}like the LAKERS//

you say I have dick riders naw I just RIDE DICKS// make me
STUTTER when I mention how you try to COVER up what you Do Doo, like you HIDIN-In-SHIT//
you don't carry WEAPONZ so quit ya lyin Boo// the only time you
do Drive Bi's is when you pick up ya crew//{get it}

..........

KroNoX 05-20-03 06:01 PM

You guys vote on my battle vs T~Cee
SO I'll return the favour here if you've voted
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=48593

Peace

Born To Kill 05-20-03 06:20 PM

Man...

I wanted real bad to give this to Weaponz...
Just because I like seeing the mighty fall.
But it ain't happening this time.

I cannot count the number of times I've seen Nuke's opener laid out in one form or another...
"grab on my dick to feel greatness, suck on my dick to taste greatness, fuck my dick to ride greatness"
All been done.
Same with the 60 minutes line.
Seen it over and over again.
Sorry, Nuke

Tonya Montana

Tonya~Montana 05-20-03 06:23 PM

THX FOR THE VOTE BTK .................................................. .................................................. ..........................................

Criminal Intent 05-20-03 06:36 PM

u know they always say punches when battles. Well in this battle one had punches while the other wasnt feelin. Im a start off by sayin i wanna give this a tie but it would have to be an extremely ill battle for me to give it a tie.

so

favorite lines

This bitch is Murdered with this Verse "Period", speakin of which it's to remove this Bitches Tampon // 12

didnt really have good structure but a pretty good line overall

The only reason Tonya wins Battles, is cause she got an Army of dick riders//

ill line but it would make peeps think that u werent really tryin

Ill Rip-ya-Anatomy, You Cant Stand Up to Me, Cause Ill leave you Laid-Out// 8

my favorite in ya verse and its the only one that stood out to me

other comments
if u feel u not in the mood for a battle especially battlin a nubian(i think) goddess like tonya u should ask for extensions or post pone cuz she got a reputation for rippin niggas. i just think u need to try and stay focus nahmean.

breakdown

multis-excellent
punches-poor
disses-good
metas-good
wordplay-excellent
structure-good
flow-good
originality-average

overall-7/10

tonya baby tonya ! WHOOOOO

How you get One LOSS on your
RECORD you must've FIRED ya GHOSTWRITER//

ouch is all i got to say

You
have tha HARDEST Crew on RB when yall holding each other
DICKS-in-HAND/

damn thats an insult

I heard you call ya ASSHOLE "TENDER LOVE"
cause you like to "FORCE MD's"{More Dicks

that shit was plain dirty


got 7 wins and afta this Battle
you gonna bring me 8{Kobe}like the LAKERS//

i like the idea but it wasnt to original

you say I have dick riders naw I just RIDE DICKS//

that was my favorite line :D

other comments
girl u keep spittin and doin ya thing. U can hang witht he best of them. I can tell this wont ya best but that shit was still hot so it shows that you're unstoppable even on your worst day. Good flow

breakdown

multis-poor
metas-excellent
flow-good
structure-excellent
wordplay-excellent
punches-excellent
disses-excellent
originality-good

overall 8/10 so u won by a small margin but that coo.

good battle to both of ya'll

Evil_SoLo 05-20-03 06:47 PM

YO, TONYA TOOK THIS WITH EASE. I mean seriously she just schooled this cat. NICE VERSE TONYA. yo return the favor at my battle vs RYANo
vote = tonya
stay up playaz

NewPort 05-20-03 07:17 PM

Hit up that battle wit Hurrikane (pay attention to the lyrics and not the posts cuz i think it was evenly matched unlike the posts' read lol just vote and tell me wut u think) and in 10 posts i'll hit you back wit a vote -one

http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthr...?threadid=48377

Tonya~Montana 05-20-03 09:05 PM

thanks for showin luv yall and votin!! up................................................ .....................up!.................

AZTEC_PRINCESS 05-20-03 09:24 PM

good job tonya very very good and if i had the opportunity i would poll vote on ur shit ...... but then nuclear weapons had some good shit as well ...
vote = tonya

Tonya~Montana 05-20-03 09:30 PM

thanks ........ preciate that!!............................................ .................................................. ................................

Nuclear Weaponz 05-20-03 09:35 PM

LMMFAO.........WHAT??????? She was dissin on my crew lol. And i dont even have a crew. Yea you had some nice punches and good structure, but now let me break it down. You had no multi's from what i read (which was tha whole verse) one or two meta's about tha whole 8 and kobe shit. Criminal intent dont know how to vote lol sayin you got excellent disses and punches. They're tha same things lol. And you did have nice punches but they never made since, if i had a crew your verse would of been a whole lot better. Thats pretty much all i have to say.
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Tonya~Montana 05-20-03 09:45 PM

addin dat you had a crew to this battle was sumtin xtra!!
I don't use multi's anyway!!!!!!!

Besides your shit played!!!!usin sex against a female is played out!! My punches made sense!! you just don't understand them!! TOO DEEP FOR YA!!!

Nuclear Weaponz 05-20-03 10:07 PM

Naa, you have no idea what clever is. I could introduce you to it if you would like?? Want a rematch??? I just relized i did lose this battle. No beef over this, but i CAN beat you. And would like to prove it to you right now. I'll be back on in one hour to an hour and a half. Stay on set up tha rematch. 10 lines no more no less. And witness my cleverness. If you wish.
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Criminal Intent 05-20-03 10:13 PM

Quote:
Originally posted by Nuclear Weaponz
Criminal intent dont know how to vote lol sayin you got excellent disses and punches. They're tha same things lol. 21


let me hit u like this

"i'll pull ya heart out and rap to its beat"-punchline

"You wacker than the muthaphucka u bit ya style from"-diss

get ya lyrics persona straight and just accept the fact that u got beat. I hate it when niggas got beat now they wanna whine about it. Do u see me whinin in our battle i done seen 2 unfair votes but i know for a fact that u were better so i accepted it and i aint bitchin

InStIgAt0r 05-20-03 10:20 PM

BOO FUCKIN HOO is all i have to say, you lost nuclear. You both had some tight verses but she won. Respect to ya both.


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Tonya~Montana 05-21-03 10:40 AM

thx for showin luv yall.............................................. .............................................uppin before i go back to class

mr.mayhem 05-21-03 12:08 PM

sorry Montana cuz any other day i would really go wit you on this. But today.... Homie had more lines that dropped my head
"You wouldn't have dope tracks if you were a heroin addict" It ain't TRU but it was hot. So..

vote=nuc weaponz

mr.mayhem 05-21-03 12:09 PM

i'd appreciate if yall peeped my battle with skiddlezz cats is snoozin on it freepostin and shit.............................................. .................................................. .........................................

g-rho 05-21-03 12:18 PM

i gove it to nucler. was a good battle though

y'all check this out though
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=48559

Tonya~Montana 05-21-03 02:06 PM

uppin for betta votes other than what this cat gave as an explanation!!^^^^^^


holla!!>>>>>>>>>>>>

Nuclear Weaponz 05-21-03 02:10 PM

Lol, i actually got a vote on this??? Well anyways, Tonya would you like a rematch 10 lines only???? Aren't scared are ya???
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Tonya~Montana 05-21-03 02:13 PM

nah I ain't scared.....but I got other peeps lined up!! .................................................. .......ya Dig??

Tsar Casm 05-21-03 02:26 PM

please vote cuz its getting slept on and ill return the favor
http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthr...&threadid=48569

Rise 05-21-03 02:34 PM

Yo Tonya...you need to start checking you Pm's on a regular basis...Plz go check them Now
.............

Tsar Casm 05-21-03 02:43 PM

tonya got this one definatley. i just liked how she plays with words for instance
"yea I read ya Little Rhyme and I should
Verse Feed// all you Rappin bout is SEX
like you Battlin "BIRDS & the "BEES// "

i liked weaponz shit but it just didnt have enuff to win

vote-tonya~montana

Tonya~Montana 05-21-03 03:21 PM

uppin for last couple votes....holla.................................... .................................................. ................

K.Largo 05-21-03 03:34 PM

read Nuclears verse and like it..but Tonya again doesnt fail to impress....punches,multies,structure and yes she added your crew into it too..

vote=Tonya

Tonya~Montana 05-21-03 04:21 PM

thanks.......uppin for last votes! holla............................................. ...........................

lilbrick005 05-21-03 04:23 PM

This was a tight battle but im gonna have to give it to Nuclear because this part of his verse made me say OHHH

When you come back startin off with losses its serious, your wack, go find another site to RAP ON // 11
This bitch is Murdered with this Verse "Period", speakin of which it's to remove this Bitches Tampon // 12
This battle should be a One sider, your getting devoured, coward// 13
Ill chop you up for 60 minutes, and label it your FINEST HOUR// 14


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