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..:TeckNeek:.. 05-20-03 04:04 PM

wolf at the door vs teckneek
 
sorry kid i was biz for a sec.......i'll key this quick...drop if your done
18 bars max
you know the rest of the rules

..:TeckNeek:.. 05-20-03 04:16 PM

fuck lyrical domination i come with literal demonstration
leave you wet like condensation from verbal meditation
cracked like pavement from attacks with each statement
my thoughts adjacent ta kids who plot in basements
seeking ta destroy words that come from this closed “DOOR”
say no more I diminish “WOLF” in this siege of war
hung from slipknots expose this phoney with 9 shots
twin glocks spray hollows aimed at his wristwatch

that’s spitting deeply how’s wolf scriptions gonna beat me
i flow so sweetly its gonna take mad diction ta defeat me

dudes like 24 he's still trying ta define one rhyme
in one line i lay you on the floor like I did your dime

your mike dreams get smoked like pipes from crack friends
scrap schemes of you growing old in the rap scene
unseen is your future like Christ in a room of blasphemy
why contest ta attack me when i undress your shit so naturally

..:TeckNeek:.. 05-20-03 07:41 PM

wasnt this suppsosed ta be a quick battle???????????????????????????????????? fa real why the fuck do we need 100 characters ta post a fuckin 10 word reply
GAY i think

wolf at the door 05-20-03 07:58 PM

sorry i didnt even see this kid....

you just tryed to roar but it came like a squeek, that shit was weak from this newbie teckneek//
if you could sneek a peek past you "fat stomach" you would see this is your "da feet"//
I come discreet and eat this battle like meat, couldnt make you rhymes flow even with a phat beat//
I'm "straight forward" like the movement of my "rooks", my hooks get mad looks//
I'm "fryin" you like "fast food cooks". cuz your weak attacks come from nursery rhyme books//
Battling me is like "Shaq" on the "freethrow line", there is absolutely "no shot"//
White boy thinks he's gangsta cause once he smoked pot, but sees a black person and runs scared cuz he's more rasist then Trent Lott//
This muthafucka couldn't add "color" to this forum if he had a "paint can"//
He's more "socially retarded" then "Dustin Hoffman" in the movie "Rain Man"//
For your next battle try to savor some of my flavor it might make you come just a little bit braver//
Inspectin teck, i broke his neck so quick i shoulda had him sign a waiver//
I'm an assault maker, shook you quicker then a salt shaker//
buried this bitch faker in a "casket" like the "undertaker"//

wolf at the door 05-20-03 08:15 PM

uppin............................................. .................................................. .................................................. .................................................. ..

NewPort 05-20-03 08:26 PM

wolf's ryme;

if you could sneek a peek past you "fat stomach" you would see this is your "da feet"//

it took me a min to fig. out the connection, but once i got it i was like ohh shit. I liked that line. Nice flow and punches

TeckNeek's ryme;

fuck lyrical domination i come with literal demonstration
leave you wet like condensation from verbal meditation
cracked like pavement from attacks with each statement

these were sum nice lyrics, a nice lil intro. I liked that shit but the shit i didn't like was . .

dudes like 24 he's still trying ta define one rhyme
in one line i lay you on the floor like I did your dime

that line...ppl have been usin those words to ryme wit for a long time, i just thought it was too repetitive but good flow n lyrics none the less

The Break Down

Lyrics: Both
Flow: Teckneek
Metas: Wolf
Punches: Wolf

Winner/Vote = Wolf at the door

wolf at the door 05-20-03 08:27 PM

nice thanks kid. hit this up peoples. .................................................. ......................................

FunK_DoC 05-20-03 08:30 PM

niice battle but if i could vote i would have ta give it ta Wolf at the door, better wordplay and punches, these were da lines i thought won it for em...

Battling me is like "Shaq" on the "freethrow line", there is absolutely "no shot"//
White boy thinks he's gangsta cause once he smoked pot, but sees a black person and runs scared cuz he's more rasist then Trent Lott//
This muthafucka couldn't add "color" to this forum if he had a "paint can"//
He's more "socially retarded" then "Dustin Hoffman" in the movie "Rain Man"//

peace

..:TeckNeek:.. 05-20-03 08:57 PM

yeh i didnt like shit either thug ...after i posted it i was like that's WACK but whutevr its just a text battle im not gonna lose sleep over it ...haha

wolf at the door 05-21-03 12:41 AM

uppin. lets gets some votes in here kids. ... . . . . . .. .
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Persianplaya408 05-21-03 12:59 AM

Lyrics= tie
flow=Teckneek
metas=Wolf
punches=Teckneek

vote- Teckneek


vote on mine:
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=46813
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=46443
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=46068
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=46007

wolf at the door 05-21-03 01:00 AM

aight aight - we tied now - lets get some more votes up in this piece. me and teck will hit you back...................................

wolf at the door 05-21-03 01:23 AM

come on yall lets get some votes going up in here. .. .................................................. ..................................

wolf at the door 05-21-03 01:36 AM

uppin. . . . . . . .. . . . . . . .
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wolf at the door 05-21-03 01:56 AM

come on yall dont sleep on this me and teck will hit you back on your battles. hit this up kids. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .

TeraRhymes 05-21-03 02:09 AM

Quote:
Originally posted by ThuG WhytE
wolf's ryme;

if you could sneek a peek past you "fat stomach" you would see this is your "da feet"//

it took me a min to fig. out the connection, but once i got it i was like ohh shit. I liked that line. Nice flow and punches

TeckNeek's ryme;

fuck lyrical domination i come with literal demonstration
leave you wet like condensation from verbal meditation
cracked like pavement from attacks with each statement

these were sum nice lyrics, a nice lil intro. I liked that shit but the shit i didn't like was . .

dudes like 24 he's still trying ta define one rhyme
in one line i lay you on the floor like I did your dime

that line...ppl have been usin those words to ryme wit for a long time, i just thought it was too repetitive but good flow n lyrics none the less

The Break Down

Lyrics: Both
Flow: Teckneek
Metas: Wolf
Punches: Wolf

Winner/Vote = Wolf at the door



yes WOLF got this much better punches

can yall vote on me vs BLAC HAZE and me VS CONSTANT

thnx i need votes on bof battles

wolf at the door 05-21-03 03:09 AM

cool. i'll hit that up. for now lets get some more votes up in here please. .................................................. ...................................

DarkHisTory 05-21-03 03:11 AM

WOLF wins this, Betta Punches n shit way betta Teck Was Ill Too i just think Wolf out punched u dawg

DarkHisTory 05-21-03 03:12 AM

Vote-wolf<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<,((((((((((((((((()))))))))somethings wrong it wont let me vote in the poll i'll come back lata and do it
)))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))) ))))))

wolf at the door 05-21-03 03:30 AM

uppin yall.............................................. .................................................. .................................................. .................................................. ....

Ace Of Spades 05-21-03 03:36 AM

teckneeks rap was good but i
didn't like his ending
wolf had some really good punches
vote=wolf at the door
check out my battle against Andre dogs
Peace

Ace Of Spades 05-21-03 03:37 AM

damn
my fricken computer won't let
me vote, sorry wolf
but ill try again later
my decision stays
Peace
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Emotion 05-21-03 03:45 AM

That newbie held up well but wolf at the doors verse i didnt really like but he easily won the other cat youre verse was pretty good to.
peace

Ace Of Spades 05-21-03 04:00 AM

sorry wolf
but the site won't count
my votes and i have no idea
why, ill try again later though
Peace
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Born To Kill 05-21-03 10:04 AM

I'm gonna have to drop the vote on Wolf as well...

Nice spit, good flow.

And it made me laugh.

I love humor when someone's being dissed.

Wolf At The Door

wolf at the door 05-21-03 11:56 AM

uppin............................................. .................................................. .................................................. ...........................................

wolf at the door 05-21-03 12:12 PM

uppin
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wolf at the door 05-21-03 01:16 PM

uppin uppni uppin............................................. .............................
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Spittin Quik 05-21-03 01:20 PM

wolf just got this shit
good punches and flow man
check my new battle out
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...?threadid=48914


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