Make Them Listen.....
 

Sometimes, the darkness in the sky shows how i feel//
I ask god why things are so hard, as i pray and kneel//
I get confused at times, with my mixed emothions//
people dont see how hard i try, the dont see my tru devotion//
my life at home, its somethin you'd see writtin by stephen king//
theres screamin, yellin,abusing, you never know what each day will bring//
I try to ignore it all, go on living each day//
byt no matter what, god seems to busy to answer anything i pray//
In school i pull of my fake smile and goofy act//
they only see a happy child, but happiness is what i really lack//
Im now lookin back, i see now how i really felt//
I had no one to fall back on, i only had myself//
There was no one who could understand the words i experessed//
i felt like such a fuck up, my whole life was a fuckin mess//
Im tryin to show all the youngins out there to never give up//
Just please, i know its hard, but trust me, just keep yo head up//
One day, you'll find that someone who will make u feel incredible//
and once you find them, hold on tight, and never let them go//
cuz you only got one chance, one life, so live to ur potential//
live out your dreams, do what u can to get by and get through//


Make yourself known, Make yourself powerful//
Make sure ur name is known, so they never forget you//


Payce...

........nice drop right there.........I'm feelin that shit! Positive message and all.............flow was on point.......a few times it fell off but regardless tight drop most definitely............peace.

This was Ill dawg............Ill , Ill , Ill ,Ill....................

thanks yo, uppin dis shit...payce

yo this was mos defintely a nyce piece....
i was feelin the flow...and the emotion....
nyce drop....keep spittin that ill shit
MAKE THEM LISTEN....i like that title...

Thanks dawg....
Lookin fo some replies....Comments and shit.....

eyo...Pretty good fo a girl, RIght?

DAMNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNN......................Slik nice shit Contend wus ILL...................WARLORDS to the fullest

thanks ruth....yeah....warlords....uppin

Uppin this shit...Comments please

Uppin

you put that shit together pretty nice, I like your choise of words, keep that shit going, the good thing about it was it all went to gether and made sense, stayed ont the topic, nice shit

some tight shit you got silk, how long u been righting rhyems G?
holla Back

I only been doin this shit fo bout a few months....Like at first i made fun of rap, like came out wit words that rhymed and thought it was funny, then i found my self starting to like it, now the kids in my school love to read and hear my shit....Holla back if any yall got anythin else to say!!! Thanks fo all da comments too....Leave any of ur stuff too and i'll be sure to check it out!

nice silk, thanks grim for my Phat Sig dogg peace~

uppin fo mo commets

Weezy, post somethin i wanna see what you got