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The Life I Lead (first open mic posted by Chrit)
Growin up with no morals another child of the streets/
Stereotypical youth fighting just for the means to eat/ 20 years go by, and Chrit's no longer about the greed/ Think I've gone soft? My past precedes me in this life I lead/ Since birth another stereotype a kid grown up in the drug game/ Just another faceless shorty in the corner... well known but with no name/ Miserable existence... forced to see blood trippin always startin a fight/ Had little man detatched from reality hopin and praying for that white light/ Another vicious circle... no love from home so ran with a family of street thugs/ Didnt understand his history so had to repeat it by gettin deep into drugs/ Intelligent though didnt want to be a G so fronted cheese and in the mind stayed guilt-free/ Innosence lost when drug raids made kid by association be labeled guilty/ Why me? At 14 facing a court system with charges of two felonies/ Forced Chrit to mature quick... played my deferreds and to society was debt free/ Growin up with no morals another child of the streets/ Stereotypical youth fighting just for the means to eat/ 20 years go by, and Chrit's no longer about the greed/ Think I've gone soft? My past precedes me in this life I lead/ Second coming of Chrit now kids matured and on the right track/ No discenable gifts except his flow but still turned out raps that were wack/ Attemptin to gain idnustry cred hitting up open mics to battle rap/ Unfotunately lack of melanin caused these clubs to be virtual death traps/ Skin causes cats took look first but never take Chrit serious just cause he's fuckin white/ Never mind the street ties peeped his skin and just dismissed the fight/ Had to showcase twice the talent to get other cates to admit Chrit ripped shit/ Finally made a name by taking the most respected emcees best spit ant flipped it/ Hard times over now... fans of Chrit now run rampant.......... From the gutter to the penthouse finally everyone can see the talent/ Growin up with no morals another child of the streets/ Stereotypical youth fighting just for the means to eat/ 20 years go by, and Chrit's no longer about the greed/ Think I've gone soft? My past precedes me in this life I lead/ Growin up with no morals another child of the streets/ Stereotypical youth fighting just for the means to eat/ 20 years go by, and Chrit's no longer about the greed/ Think I've gone soft? My past precedes me in this life I lead/ Look for this and more off Chrit's demo cd...... will all be uploaded once audio shit gets up and runnin |
yo tight shit Chrit if this is ya first cant wait to see ya next...nice.
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NICE..............ya cant wish fo a betta open mic
good flow wordplay an' the topic jus' kept me hooked in good shit hopin fo mo of da same. Very enjoyable Peep my shit -one love- |
chrit, me and you is dawgs ...
and when i read this shit .... Makes me proud to know you .... you such a fuckin good writer if u ever quit i shall smack you... (lol j/p) but dawg best fuckin verse ive seen from ya including all your battles ... i loved the verse... i felt it hard dawg...i felt it hard.... if ya ever wana do a text collab hit me up .... |
thanks for the comments ya'll
and yeah blaze.. I'm cool with a collab anytime and look for my next drop in the next few days............ Street Prophecies |
very cool. this was nice.
damn. i like this because i can look at it and think that this is reality for you. most of these heads talk bullshit. but this felt like a real read.....dope 9-10 |
it was a ill drop.
First of all i can tell is truth, not bullshit peeps right thats fake. Another is the flow was X-treme. Ill stuff man keep it up, love ta see more from ya -OuT- |
first uppin..............
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hot joint man lol tellin eminems story it sounded like haha
i agree with what everyone said man, it was felt and ill and one of tha best drops ive seen yet, even without much wordplay or multies, and that means u really ripped real shit stay ^ |
If this is ur first open mic........I cant wait to read ur other Open Mics to come............Ill shit dawg
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yea this shit was hot son not enough of this in open mic kepp postin in here some and keep this shit real
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nice work chrit, I felt this one
A lot of people drop verses about street life and how they ended up in the rap game by being deprived of a decent childhood,but this one seemed like you actually meant it. You lost me a couple times, and it was hard for me to feel the flow, but this was still nice. Peace |
ayo u were reel with me so i'm finna b reel i was mad feelin this thang u jus did. the rhymes seemed sincere and i cud feel yo struggle. this is wat open mic is all about respectin other peeps work.
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eyo....chirt.....this is ill....i liked reading it.....let me know when u get ur audios up...i'm startin some too....I"ll hit ya if i get mine up....payce dawg....keep spittin
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damned audio equipment!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! |
haah tis a bitch this equipment at times innit?.
nice words chrit,seemed like you were reallyputting yourself into this peice,liked the chorus,it was good story,fuck cat sthat base talent purely on racial factors,its a bitch...they jsut cant hack getting their place taken by someone else...fuck them cats,but it seems to have paid off for you...having to double the talent,ahs really paid off,someone that dont give up on it after all that shows character,and the will to succeed with thi sshit,you gon do well no doubt....i liked th epeice all round,no huge words,kept it simple,worked perfectly well with it,keep spitting,lookin forward to more shit from you,and hearing the audios... bismillah |
<<<< has given up on his audio equipment!!!!
guess we'll all just have to wait til july when I record the demo |
uppin.....................
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this shit was ill chrit, how come u ain't post open mics before?
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never really wrote my shit down ya know... normally I just take a beat and freestyle a verse to it this was the first one I've truly written out |
well this was crazy anyways,yo, keep writin cuz they all fire
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man i really like this shit-whether it is ur life or not then i dunno but i felt it so what im sayin...is either the piece is well written or its from the heart y'kno...by the way my piece was just lookin for pointer y'kno im drop a deeper piece later if ya got a min
nice chrit-i wanna see more 1 |
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all is my life.... too bad its so cliche' but yeah be on the lookout in the next weak for my second piece tentatively called "street prophecies" |
Yo......I Felt This C...............It Was Nice...........We Should Collab
Some Time..................................Keep Doin What U Doin......1 |
gosh chrit that was damn good, can't wait to see ya next one
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yo Chrit i've bee writing for a while,actually thought i had sumthin before I came online to forums like this--learnin alot--man i got far ta go---
you got it goin on--good stuff-----blessings to ya life man--it's whats made ya you any way check out my first attempt http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=50386 let me know what ya think anyone |
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good to see the comments |
Yea this was an ill drop, i really liked it and I look foreward for to reading all your new drops when you get them up cause i think right now with this and if you drop some more open mics ya can own the thread. I will also have to read some of ya battles and all to get a betta feel of ya but like it.
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Ruth:Chrit..............................what's so great about you?
Chrit: Dawg i just let it out....all the scriptures i have in my head Ruth: Man this wus amazing presentation u should join AMerican IDol Chrit: FUCK AMERICAN IDOL.......i keep it underground until i blow up....lol This wus a presentation of RuthLess.....lol Sorry for the pressentation dawg..lol Anyhow damnnnnnnnnnn Homey shot wus sickness fo sho........am waitin for yo Audio.....deffinitly how you put yoself in this wus amazin.......nice drop dawg feelin the contend deffinitly |
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