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KerrDezzy (1-0) vs. T_Pound£ (0-0)
Check in's by Sunday
Verses by Tuesday Voting ends Thursday Topic... Like a sore thumb |
yo jus checkin in, wonderin when ya gon' spit t pound?
this gon' be a good challange pc................................................ ............... |
Checkin in.....
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My heart Throbbing like a sore thumb, the hammer that hit it still shakin from the reprocussions//
My soul Cussin at it, and the nail quietly laughin and discussin' the hit// The wood flipt and lied on the floor pointin at my swollen Feelings// wouldn't have been so bad if my world hadn't jus dropped from tha ceiling// Who would have thought kneeling could cause such pain// If i hadn't proposed it would still be the same, still sane// but the replie was in vain, she thought she was to good for me// She was the only girl i ever loved, thought she was heavenly// when really she was jus gonna take my love and just throw it back at me// Reality is a Tragedy, But when most storeys turn out happy this one just ends// and wheather it consumes you depends on the support of your freinds// they can bring you happiness and help you to defend....yourself from letting this misery re-offend// You gotta change and blend, and learn to accept// and i bet you would never have thought a sore thumb could have this affect// |
if ya up my ass too long and recieve-a-sore-thumb,
it throbs like balls when it needs-to-cum, i lace this rubba band around it and it turns black-n-blue, the blood ain't circulatin so it becomes-a-bruise, the rest is left n swolls-up to look like a helium-filled-balloon, wrap it and put cast on it til ya decide to reveal-your-exit-wounds, i don't recieve the pain cuz i stay physically fit, take a blood test on me and watch my blood alcohol d r i p, don't take it from the sore thumb cuz it'll-sky-roket, it isn't safe to come in contact wit somethin toxic once it reaches oxygen, the pain grows on it like a mentally-insane-man when he gains his adrenalin, i nailed-it-out for him but it hit em, some1 get him some penacilin, the paramedics is needed cuz once the man has bleeded he becomes heated and starts his serial-killin, to ease his pain i join him to smoke-a-j wit me n bob dillan, rejected of any otha choice but to amputate, contiplate if the wooden plate could take-the-place, x-rays reveal like you it has multiple-fractures-n-brakes, your like ya thumb cuz you just got outta placment, i neva knew a sore thumb to you would result in an another hospital-patient |
uppin this
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C'mon dont sleep
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kerrdezzy gets my vote here. he stayed on topic best flowed well and overall it was just a really good verse
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uppin fo mo votes
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vote= T pound
more emotion in his, I thought it was a more original way of looking at the topic. Kerr, your verse was good, but it seemed too...shit whats the word....forced. Like you didn't mean it. I was just feelin T's more.... oh yeah, and the bob dylan line was ill, I fucking love that guy Peace |
yeah t-pound gets my vote
was feeling his verse more........didn't really like kerdezzy's verse much pretty much same reasons as under stated^ |
Uppin Votez
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ight, i don't really agree wit the last 2 votes here but keep them comin............................................. ......................................
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Good Battle Yo.....Much Respect To Both........Both I'm Gonna Come Real On This..............Kerr.....U Had Nice Lines And Used
Good Wordplay But T-Pound Was Actually More On The Subject Of A Sore Thumb<-----which by the way is another gay topic.......U Cool Wit Me And All....And I Don't Even Like T-Pound Becuz Hes Gay But I'm Leanin Towards More His Way........ |
ight thanks fo the vote, i think i stayed good on topic but... whateva, keep them comin.......................................
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T-Pound put more creativity behind this one....due to the fact he wasnt talkin about a sore thumb the whole time(Who comes up with these topics?!). You both approached it ok.....Kerr....you just kept forcing it like understatement said. T-Pound I felt just edged out this one....his verse wasnt all that well either....it was a close one ya'll..........but
Vote - T-Pound |
I liked T_Pound£'s verse a lot better here, KerrDezzy, didn't quite feel where you were going with that, but T took it to that deeper meaning that I was thinking about when I made these topics.
Vote=T_Pound£ P.S. Too all of those reading this post and commenting on how crappy my topics are, I'd like to say that you're probably too ignorant to see the deeper meanings (except thru the grapevine, don't know where I was going with that... I need to lay of the bong water). |
ight thanks fo the votes, it was hard topic
keep them comin tho............................................... ................. |
Uppin Fo Votez
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sorry for the free post but could one of u peep my battle please
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Yeah will do
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why are you still uppin this?... i was but to vote then looked back at other votes and saw that its 5-1.... thought 5 was all that is needed?...
madman, tripmarxx, understatement, fgee, and 13th disciple all voted for t_pound... |
vote dawg, just keep them comin
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Umm....Im going to say...
T Pound...Not A Great Battle... Kind of Weak. Keep Elevatin.... V; T Pound............................ ********************** |
T Pound Wins [1-0]
Kerdezzy Loses. [0-1] >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> <<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<< >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> <<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<< |
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