ålphå bë† Vs. Feeble Minded
 

15 line max.(but im doin about 10)
first to 5
No DR Votes
No Crew Voes
Due Tuesday by 11:59PM
Dun matter who drops first


uNo

due tuesday? what the fuck...it is satuday for christs sake....whateverany way, you drop fist................and i asked for a newbie, but whatever....................ur going first tho, and i will ot feed off of ur verses....and im only waiting 30 minutes...it shouldnt take longer than that...otherwise this battle is off aight...


LETS GET IT STARTED SPIT.

well you said you needed time plus this isnt the only site that im at.i do have other things to tend to so thats why i gave so much time but since you'd rather battle a newb the this battle is off.

haha.....u make it seem like i am turning this battle down................but if you hve better things t do than why challenge me in the first place?????????????????????

you should be able to write it in 30 minutes..........................
THA ISWH I LABELED I WHO WANTS TO SPIT NOW.....NOT WO WANTS TO SPIT BY TUESDAY...)


comon man....i know u can battle me now.....reply please..........

i be twistin up the sickness like double helical depictions;
rematch? the dotted line, suggest you re-sign like president Nixon...
trust me, you need to make like spiders, and stick to anything but the web...
Fatality! FINISH HIM...his health meter's in the RED!!!
comin' off the top, hittin' hard, like Bungee jumpers, wit snapped cords;
join the crowd, my dick's somethin everyone's ridin' on, like a FORD...
the syllables you display are...gay...my metaphors are double edged swords;
kid, you couldn't come off the wall...if you were particle board...
I'm on some homocide shit, you on that homo - side tip;
basically, I'm a dominatrix, I professionally deal ass-whips...
ya punches is played, dogg, do us a favor...and Quit;

hows that?....i think im gettin better.

ok it was good...sorry i just saw it....ima go in a few minutes.......................................

its a sad fact that losers also always have to be some of the most pathetic contestents/
my flow makes u look like a 'mis-match' that cant 'add', cuz u couldnt 'add'-'dress' it/
my verbal 'bullets' are deadly, wear a bulletproof vest but u still wont be able to 'chest' it/
my flow, the devil possessed it, you must be a man-of-god cuz u sound like you were molested/
im a one man firing squad, to win is requiring fraud, i fuck rappers up in the blink-of-an-eye/
the forum's inspiring god, so dont bother to try, thats bordering on the brink-of-a-lie/
to show that im sly, i 'rip off his thigh', just to prove he has a 'lower figure'-than-mine/
and disfigure his spine, re-arrange its design, beat in his brain, to prove he cant configure-this-rhyme/
i write omens, sent by the divine, i write this 'carefully' because his rhymes arent as 'neat' as my lines/
i show men that i will rip of their legs to de'feet' them and cut off their 'height' as a sign/
finally, when i take the time to respond, you'll get down on your knees and worship my pen as a wand/
the fact that i am benevolent, becomes pretty evident when i smash alpha bet and all superiors as evidence/

sorry...my net is messing up...i had to restart twice........

VOTES

both ya'll came nice as hell, but feeble's shit was just better
dont get me wrong alpha you came hella nice
the come off the wall was orginal, the side-tip line was a nice personal but not really a hard hittin punch.

feeble just came better like with the punches aadd-dress reference

This one was easy. Feeble Minded's lines were dope great rhymes, and i think half of the abcs (alpha bet) couldn't rhyme.

my vote= Feeble Minded

but 4 alpha bet i think he still had some great punches but i still have to give it to feeble minded
i pressed the submitbutton by accident

sorry can't post don't have 100 yet but feeble wins !

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...9812#post459812

Feeble had some mad multies and shit but im gonna go wit Alpha because this line from Feeble:[i show men that i will rip of their legs to de'feet' them ] is in the wackness emergency center under the sticky

bullshit...then it was stolen from me...that shit aint fair....and hoiw you gonna sa that line is whack............................................. ......................maybe he put it in tere to show people HOW TOI RAP...ad that line ismos defmine...so dont vote against me for that, that is bullshit...

Feeble had some mad multies and shit but im gonna go wit Alpha because this line from Feeble:[i show men that i will rip of their legs to de'feet' them ] is in the wackness emergency center under the sticky :http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=44714

look down at the bottom of the first post, this guys bitin'

vote: Alpha

damn good battle u2, but feeble came out on top with this one....he came much harder and his wordplay was hott.....good shit feeble, u really improved since we last battled...I'm gonna need a rematch tho....in a couple o dayz I"ll holla at ya

aigt cool...and thanks...this cat pax knight is so full of shit...u kno that guy that puts the lines up over a th whackness emergency center? yea...he takes peoples lines from over here on purpose...i consider itan honor that he used mine....and post apoll ote please/....nd pax knight...the fact that my line i over there means the guy saw it and liked it...jus go ask him who he got it from...i guarantee he says me....

more votes...thanks for voting everyone...

in the wackness emergency center it is under the part of what not to use:

[quote originally from Vendetta]
There are a few punches that are so played, no one but the most wack artists would ever use them. If you use a "de-feet" or a "cum back" line, you will get positively sonned. I guarantee it.

Examples:

I'll bust a nut on your spine to see if you cum back /

I'ma cut off your legs just so I can de-feet you /

If you use one of these lines, or anything even remotely resembling these lines, you will without a doubt be anally raped with the lyrical equivalents of splintered telephone poles. Just don't do it. EVER.[/quote]

and he posted that way back on 5-7-03 so he didnt "steal" it from u

now Feeble i dont want beef wit u im just pointin out sumthin i dont think was right, and every voter should know before polling. u have a lot of good original stuff but i cant respect this verse if i find u biting. Ive seen ur other stuff and voted u but not in this one sry dawg, i dont want beef jus the truth

shut the fuck up. that i my line. why would i steal something he called whack???
and anyway...ur an idiot...ur the only hater who thinks i lost just cuz ur taking anothers opinion and using it/....wat a loser....we'll see what real rappers think......thats why you have more loses than wins right??? cuz u know how to rap?? thought so...just shut up...

thanks for voting darkforce...this other cat is just a hater.......

notice he said that everyon uses it.....that is equivelent of"many rappers can use this as it is not hard o think off, and they wll not be biting."
so shut the fuck up and get off of my tread...i did not steal shit...and i dont go to the whacknesscenter cuzim not whac like u are....

shut the fuck up, ive voted u on other shit so dont say ima hater, i just happen to agree with Vendetta on this type of shit

in fact this is the 1st time ive voted against u

ok....just dontsay that i stole it....i didnt realize you meant that you thought it was whack....i thought you wre calling me a theif....

my bad awg...i had you wrong...if you think it waswack that is completely up to you to decide.....sorry dawg....i misunderstood...

thats cool that you voted fair though.....i appreciate it....i just thought you were trying to say that i stole that shit....thank for voting dawg....canyu vote on feebl vs kronox???? thanks...

i gotta give this one to alpha. His stuff had good punches and feebles were just wacked...............................~1~

alpha won this with nice punches, feeble had a few played lines
good battle tho
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aight cool....more votes needed............................................ .................................................. ..............

i think feeble came harder in this battle, i was feelin both but his multi's & punches were swingin right to left.
hit my battle up with taktik...
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=50042

aw see now how gay is that?this kid is tryin to vote against me twice.thats not right.wats that all about huh?

this right hre is the end of your wining streak....pute i the "respect" column............................................ .................................................. ......

my flow, the devil possessed it, you must be a man-of-god cuz u sound like you were molested/


^^^baha. i jus thot about the whole priest issue and laughed


my votes goin to feeble. better wordplay and punches. good drop both, nice drop 2 abc. anyways, yeah thas my vote. good battle

i show men that i will rip of their legs to de'feet' them and cut off their 'height' as a sign/
Feeble, the de"feet" lines are played... and you need to shorten your bars, get straight to the point....

alpha, your verse was overall an average one...
comin' off the top, hittin' hard, like Bungee jumpers, wit snapped cords;
join the crowd, my dick's somethin everyone's ridin' on, like a FORD...
^^those lines however... are played...

vote=alphabet... he just came harder and was more consistent... pz

aight thanks for voting....but i really dont understand this whole "played" business...its not like i can diis him in any way that is not "played" since i dont know him, this isthe internet...expain please...but thanks for voting...

this was a real close battle. the wordplay from both was excellent but i felt feebles just a lil bit more. but good from both peepz.

VOTE => Feeble <=

By the way Alpha Bet i replied to ur bitch slapped thing.

thanks for voting. if there is anything ud like a vote on id bemore than happ...i know how it is with no one voting..very annoying.

feeble... to come off hot, and to get the edge in text battlin is to come up with original ideas... lines like those have been overused and have no shock value anymore... if you come up with some hot original shit then you will get more votes and wins... hit my battle up by the way
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=49667
alphabet already replied...

I liked both of the verses but I think feeble took this just by a bit he almost lost it by using the played out lines, like that de-feet shit, But the Man Of God line was hot
Vote = Feeble