Franchise21 vs Gridlock
 

yo u kno da rules 10-25 lines max....
no hate/ d\r/ or bullshit votes.....
first to 3 votes wins by knockout if da otha has no votes ight....
u spit first ight

yo style is as hopeless as fuckin for virginity//
go! and let yo mom fix ur wankin consistancy//
let me cast this prophecy, like the holy fuckin pope//
imme have u hangin with yo neck on a rope//
dont hope, be sure its hella more effective//
ya mam shud have been more contraceptive, cuz now shes stuck with u 24/7//
while yo mom is pleasin sumone and the other guy is ridin//
she's thinkin of how many "holes" she can fill to make more money//
not only fat, ugly to but is that a reason for yo mom to become a prostitute//
yo mom's truely an "institute"//
shes been down with the whole city but still isnt wide enuff to fit a real nigger//
she says "size doesnt matter"//
so why did she dumped yo dad after she saw mine 25 inch "best seller"//
keep ur leaps sealed while suckin ma dick//
cuz i dont want any shit squirtin all ova ya new canadian mounty equipment//
go play with ur balls, but dont let em burst//
then when u feel this "sensation" ur truely feelin this verse//

Out.

Grid lock youres was tight. I'll wait to see the other guys verse.
But i can't vote till I get one hundred posts so that's why I need to build up my posts. So I can start voteing on peoples shit. so until then I 'll just write what I think about ya'll shit.

yo ima murda dis man......

dis nigga really thinks he gotta chance against me.... but he bout to get merked real quickly..... cuz da shit i spit will leave u filthy//
check it wat type of name is gridlock..... u could tell he aint got no friends, cus all he does is play wit his cock.... its funny da way u bout to get dropped.... cuz ima lock up ya lines like if i was da cops.... and have u on da sidelines givin me props.... da best thing u do is just stop..... cuz if u continue u gonna get rocked//
u aint no real rappa.... u just a fuckin acta..... u wanna be gangsta.... u rap like a str8 up wanksta//
dogg be for real..... da lines i spit ull lock u up like da slomen shield..... u kno da deal.... u betta off just stayin still//
nigga to challenge me, u must have a mental disease..... da only thing ur good at is being on ya knees..... fuck bein my son nigga u my niece...... u bout to get merked lyrically...... u aint nuttin but new pussy..... i feel bad dat ima defeat a fresh rookie//

ight lets get da votes in people let start uppin uppin uppin uppin uppin uppin uppin uppin uppin uppin uppin uppin uppin

i gotta give this to gridlock. better flow and punches. franchise, work on your formatting. get the typed flow happening.

VOTE ---> gridlock
someone poll me up at http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=49738

yo ight 1-0 vote he beaten me keepin it real lets just keep it goin hit me up and ill return da fava ight

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both verses were probaly equal in my eyes, nothin too special in either drop, they both were pretty generic, but gridlocks shit have vocab and on da otha hand, franchise shit was funnerier so he gets my vote

Keep uppin peoples lets close dis shit down ight c'mon lets go hit me up and ill return da fava ight

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Ai 1-1.. lets go.. *btw, good "comeback" Franchise..*
.......Vote on this shit..and finish it........

Out..

my vote - gridlock betta structure and punches ive seen franchise come much harder than that he let himself down

go peep the 2 tyma battles

ai ty tyma..

we need more votes.. c'mon yall


ai im out... 1~

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I'll vote on this here pretty quick........................ lemme get my 100 posts and ya'll can vote on my 2 battles with wildandwhite69 & espana

ai cool man, appreciate that.. i wud vote yo battles but i still have a long way to go *looks at his post..* damn....

DAts cool...................................We all know you woulda voted for me....lol Aight.... I'm workin' towards it.......... good battle guys

Okay.............................................. .........this is post 100 and I said I'd vote on ya'lls for ya..........................

Gridlock took this battle difinately...............way better everything. I know your my dawg Franchise and you a Renegade but ya need to get better or your gonna have peeps like Grid beatin' your ass daily

ah shit..............................didn't click on the vote thing............................................. ...................................

do i take that as a compliment or.. haha

thanks newayz..:)

Take it how you like................................I was just tellin' him to that he's gon get beat by every newb if he don't elevate

uppin for votes...



c'mon...

Grid lock took this man. The other cat needs to work on his structure and his flow.............................................. ..........................................Grid gets my vote.

eh thanks for the vote man but cud ya please "poll vote" other wise it wont count.

ai.. thx in advance.

Ok 1 - 4 .. c'mon peeps.. lets finish this..

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