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Dirty Shanks 05-25-03 03:37 PM

Dirty Shanks v5 Vortex
 
oK...........
Rules:mad:
Do Not
-Dick-ryde
-PM for Foul Play
-Hate
-Crew
-Sway
-Bite
-Or Recycle

Other:o
-15-20 1 Line = 1 Bar
-Due before 3:00pm today...
-Check in once & then STFU..
-Let's Have Some Fun...



Good Luck:whacky:

Baron Mynd. 05-25-03 03:47 PM

No doubt.

Deph wasnt shit without me, and now ya coming dead last,
I gave your girl the 69. .and really did a number on that ass!
you blundering fag, lemme sum up how many girls u fucked,
Shanks. . u thought a Camels Toe was on the end of its foot!
its funny as fuck, U and ya mom both Suck, and theres no doubt
my dicks the flag pole hanging from the Roof of her mouth!
the truth is now out, exposed this dirty bastard and owned him
cause all his punches Fail To Connect. .like faulty modems!
im reloaded, you need more than Buttered Knives to beat me hoe
cause a Shanks text battle sucks more than Shanks breath control
im reckless so, im throwing blows to crack ya dome so stop -
cause if you Head is Victory...then expect me to Pull It Off!
kid gloves are gone, its time you understood you cant handle me
when your verse is more Shit Related than Mr Hankys Family.
god dammit he. .really is wack, i thought it was just his adlibs
cause V will only come after D when reading the alphabet kid.

Dirty Shanks 05-25-03 05:13 PM

*This kidd thanks he made a differance in Deph.. bitch please...!*

Check It..........


Why the fuck do I get stuck battlin’ this fake gay ass poet..!!
He was Deph & a straight bullshittah wouldn’t ya know it..!
A Turncoat from RnR thinkin’ tha name would gain respect..!!
But even tha hurb’s of R.B. show’d that he easily get’s recked..!
Gave him a place to stay, but now he’s sent back to tha cave..!!
ya alias’s been slain, tha Fame’s maim’d start changin’ names ..!
Write ya soft poetry, an waste them trees wit all that loose leaf..!!
battlin butterflies..? & you have tha nerve of facin’ me at R.B…!
Taste my Buttered Knives slip through ya signatures Poetry..!!
Nerds pursue rhymes?, I seen ya tryin' to fit words into lines..!
hurbs imbue mines, your’s ‘cluttered’ the way ‘birds’ accrue signs!!
This kat's clutchin a nine but he's the one wit slugs in his spine!
i'm fast enuff to crush ya skull without even touchin ya mind..!!
ya not older or colder.. trust a man can be mean, especially me..!
He think’s he testin me? ya bars are garbage.. get zestfully clean..!!
Use ya Plain Text & Jet-Mcfly.. Head back to the Future Vortex..!
Ya luck’s out catchin' snakes eyes like ya tackled Madusa, for Sex..!!


Done Deal............


Voter's do what you do....

Baron Mynd. 05-25-03 08:34 PM

Fo shizzle My Nizzle. .

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QB SNYPER 05-25-03 08:40 PM

Vortex, your verse was good. you had some lines that stuck out, some that I got the idea. good battle both of you.

could you hit my battle up with one
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=50205

TruthZ 05-25-03 08:41 PM

i read this shit twice...

Vote-Dirty

His personals were ALOT harder hitting than Vortex
punch filled verse...Dirty waited until line 8 or so to
start hittin the punches, started slow but then got
up to speed...

Vote on OnE Vs. QB
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=50205

Baron Mynd. 05-25-03 09:05 PM

1-1, thanks for the votes.

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Dirty Shanks 05-26-03 12:33 AM

Quote:
Originally posted by Vortex
1-1, thanks for the votes.

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Dirty Shanks 05-26-03 02:25 AM

Word^

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13th Disciple 05-26-03 02:45 AM

Quote:
Originally posted by Vortex
No doubt.

Deph wasnt shit without me, and now ya coming dead last,
I gave your girl the 69. .and really did a number on that ass!

..^hows that possible over the internet? booooo........
you blundering fag, lemme sum up how many girls u fucked,
Shanks. . u thought a Camels Toe was on the end of its foot!

...^how u know his personal bitness like that? u don't do u.....
its funny as fuck, U and ya mom both Suck, and theres no doubt
my dicks the flag pole hanging from the Roof of her mouth!

...^another mom joke........aren't u suppose to be an elite?
the truth is now out, exposed this dirty bastard and owned him
cause all his punches Fail To Connect. .like faulty modems!

...^thats a little bit better.....
im reckless so, im throwing blows to crack ya dome so stop -
cause if you Head is Victory...then expect me to Pull It Off!

....^where the hell is the rhyme....i know its not stop and off
kid gloves are gone, its time you understood you cant handle me
when your verse is more Shit Related than Mr Hankys Family.

....^ummmm......gay

V will only come after D when reading the alphabet kid.



That is basically showin that i wasn't feelin it at all.......Dirty Took
This Wit Ease.........That Rhyme That I Explained Wuz Pure
Garbage.....Thats Not Hate...Don't Get It Twisted.....Its Facts....1

13th Disciple 05-26-03 02:46 AM

I Didn't Mean To Quote My Words In His Quote......My Bad....But Whateva........................................... ............1

Baron Mynd. 05-26-03 07:42 AM

^Kid, you are gay. They were all punches - does it matter if they are true or not? And stop and off DOES rhyme, you seriously need to listen to nimrods anthrax/gas tank prospect. .

whatever, 2-1. .

BROOKLYN 05-26-03 07:49 AM

dirty shanks is just a crayz ass funny ass nigga he got this one no doubt
VOTE - DIRTY SHANKS
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Baron Mynd. 05-26-03 08:09 AM

Woah! look at your name, your gay. .

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Chrit 05-26-03 03:06 PM

shanks took this one....


just wasnt feeling vortex's verse....

too much played concepts....

dirty's punches and personals just connected harder here...

no offence to vortex's verse but shanks just took it hands down

Baron Mynd. 05-26-03 03:16 PM

^ Im glad you think like that, but please explain to me the punches in his verse, i saw like 2 - maybe its just me. .

Dirty Shanks 05-26-03 03:28 PM

yeah right.... There's more than just two...

And stop swayin' votes Fam.. lol..

gettin close so you though you'd be sneeky huh...?

lol..

Good battle...

Uppin' for more votes...

13th Disciple 05-26-03 05:41 PM

seriously......not tryin to freepost.....but vortex ur doin alot of
cryin........stop being a baby when someone doesn't vote for u....
but stop and off doesn't rhyme.......u must have a lisp or sumthin..
i guess go and on rhymes too......either way.....i said what i said...
and voted for what i voted............u big baby u.......

Dirty Shanks 05-27-03 03:48 PM

Uppin for voeter's...............
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Dirty Shanks 05-28-03 01:38 PM

Quote:
Originally posted by Dirty Shanks
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Dirty Shanks 05-29-03 11:50 AM

Vote Please........................
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Dirty Shanks 05-29-03 05:16 PM

Uppin'..........................
vote please........
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SMOG 05-29-03 07:41 PM

uppin fo ds................................................ ...................
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Murderous Method 05-29-03 08:45 PM

Quote:
Originally posted by 13th Disciple
seriously......not tryin to freepost.....but vortex ur doin alot of
cryin........stop being a baby when someone doesn't vote for u....
but stop and off doesn't rhyme.......u must have a lisp or sumthin..
i guess go and on rhymes too......either way.....i said what i said...
and voted for what i voted............u big baby u.......


nah lol
I HAD a lisp, even then I knew what rhymed n stayed away from S words that had to be stressed lol

but yo I honestly think SHANKZ won this, u were both in my crew so its fair to say this is a fair vote

guys dont front VORTEX had his punches played concepts or not u guys are completly dismissing them,
but then again compared to the personals along with the flows of SHANKZ verse u gonna give em the win.
1
lvu
M&M!

Baron Mynd. 05-30-03 05:01 AM

^ Exactly, thats what i was complaining for - kids are acting like i had no wordplay or punches at all and Shanks had like one personal at the end of his verse and kids are like "oooooh, shanks killed it with the personals!"

Let go off his nuts, damn!
Nice battle Shanks, just know -
you beat me here at RB, but if this was at RnR, id of won. .

Dirty Shanks 05-30-03 10:04 AM

yeh good battle....

And I highly doubt that you would win by change of atmosphere..
Unless your sayin' that dick-ryder's are all up on ya shit over there.. You can post it at RnR... I'll keep a look out..

StayUp Fam...

Baron Mynd. 05-30-03 10:30 AM

^ No point posting it at RnR, pencil whipped is dead there, lol.

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Dadi Kewl 05-30-03 11:11 AM

Shanks took this, i liked both verses but dity's punches were
Harder and he had alot of personal's

Vote=Dirty shanks


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