Feeble vs Bribeone1
 

rules:
you spit first (you challenged me)
max of 15 lines.
poll attached (if ya vote post poll vote please)

no haters bother me. dont tell me i suck if i lose becuz...I DONT GIVE A FLYING FUCK...

ok feeeble checkin in on this one ill be up in a few hope u are too..........give me a due time...................

I look at ya avatar and it tells me u D,R so hard the weak sword is bloody.::
Ya crew is hellhawks..but beatin me?. if ya place iced over...man check these frozen~birdies.::
Feeble-minded you should put me in ya loss column...and after it say...Bribe just left me Blinded::
Absent minded after u get defeated....i know u just arrived but rember this L ..u need to be reminded:::


^^ quick warm up now to simply destroy you...



Like you were witt ya wife after birth ....ya just got ya baby-ass-handed-over.::
This bitch will only see clearly.... if broken-glass-landed-on-her::
Like u typed rhymes on ephedra. might be hyped for a bit but still u coming-down..
Like rapbattles own circus .....im a light ya.......so watch an enflame runnin=clown::
Only way u can beat me is if you take my rhyme over your shoulder and squat-on-dicks:
Ohh........and also ..if i go to your house take the keyboard and type-in-this::^ ^
Like if i sawed off ya feet at the ankles.......you will never fill my shoes.::
Youll never get near me in this case,,even if a filled-a-hat-with-clues::
Witt a Buddha pose.....you holdin ya stomach cause its sickening:
If everyone put their ear to the screen they can hear this bitch screaming::

Man U see my verse and run ...........go home pre write one...


u still wont beat me bitch......that was a bitch move

hey...........

will vote when feeble drops..........

hate to do this but can you peep my shit in the meantime

vs kronox
vs trix

they are getting slept on like crazy

a waste of a verse.....MODS close this if u can....
this pussy no-showed....

hahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahaha

yo
...ya texts doomed...to be shitted on like floors of bad restrooms/
i blow fumes and so soon... have cats fallin in-to their doom/
you soon to quit bitch...wit both wrists slit, by the crimes i com-mit/
dont face it...ya too shallow, stuck in a deep pit where i drop shit/
before ya de-fend i have this musicians face flatter than the ce-ment/
make knees-bent have ya condition worsen, splatter till they be-dents/
my killing spree-can wor-sen, till it becomes an e-vent/
i pre-vent my de-scent by chopping you into similar seg-ments/
i'll crack ya wrist and fracture it cuz ur lacking fist/
attack your cyst then rapture it to make a snack of it/
give you a month to get back at this and give ya punch some twist/ (his had none)
administer the kiss of death just with this breath/
my sinister bliss with meth crumbles you till i miss whats left/
rip your spine in half to lower you figure /
then take the time to laugh cuz its proves im bigger/

good shit
man bribe yo i seen better
Feebe got this shit man
nice punches and flow better
check out my shit
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...?threadid=51190

Good battle for y'a'll I thought.
I gotta give it to Bribone by an edge
cuz his wordplay was a lil betta
but Feeble minded came ight too.
Oh yea bribone u dashin shit dat
aint multis dawg. But N/e wayz
my vote = bribone, peep my battle with
X ecution n drop a poll vote, thanx

vote - bribone

I just do it so people could see how many words im rhyming off of...ya know.....

1-1 need poll votes.....

Bribe1 got this one.
The wordplay, Flow, And Punchlines were the hit points.
Feeble had a nice spit too.
Not hard enough though.
G H O S T.

2-1 but still no poll votes................
...................so............................. ...
................up we go........................

It won't let me poll vote.
;(
They need to fix that.
Or alot of people won't be getting votes.
G H O S T.

well alldig just PM me and told me they were working so....up we go for some poll votes.....upupupupupupupupupup
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aight......

mystery explained this as I would have
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bribe took this.............

yep...

respect the vote...........

Uppin this battle right here

votes please thank you very much.................One....

Uppin this One 'Mo Gain........Upper..upper...


can we get some votes up in here..............plz

thank u ...........................

The way I see this it's was pretty close

Feeble had some pretty gos flow thru out the his verse but his punches was o.k. nothing that was to quotable. That where Bribe took this by a hair his lines were more creative

Only way u can beat me is if you take my rhyme over your shoulder and squat-on-dicks:
Ohh........and also ..if i go to your house take the keyboard and type-in-this::^ ^

^^ the highlight line of the battle and the winner

vote= Bribeone1

Ya'll click on teh link and vote on teh battle with D-Dizzle and Carsonjet
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=52010

both flows were nice...Feeble brought some horro core type rhyme which was good.......but I really did'nt feel that as a battle/Diss rap.....you kinda had punches but they were'nt that noticeable right off tha back...ya wordplay was iight but liike I said I did'nt feel those verses as disses but more like a Gangsta Nip {if you know who he is} type flow!

bribe had a good mixture of punches and wordplay...I think his disses coulda been harder...He had a few good oneliners that shoulda landed betta but to me his wordplay cap'ped off this battle

vote bribe

3-0 uppin this once more 3-0
Poll votes please

uppin uppin uppin uppin.................

FEEBLE BROUGH IT RAW BUT WUT REALLY TOOK THIS IS BRIBE"S PUNCHES CREATIVE AND WORDPLAY .......NICE BATTLE CLOSE CALL

BUT VOTE: BRIBE

ps
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...2746#post482746

me vs 13 vote plzzz

Uppin again....4-0 in the polls


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Bribe Took This Wit Better WOrdplay And Punches....I Ain't Explainin Or Quotin Shit......Vote=Bribeone1.......................... ....