B.R.E Presents: "Chocolate Bar"
 

...................................B.R.E.......... .............................

Chorus:
She look like a chocolate Bar/
She's my personal Superstar/
She always drives through my mind like she's a car/
Her smile is as bright as a Sky's Star/
Just thinking of her beautifully Shaped Chocolate Mist"/
Makes me quickly attend a Dentist/

Verse 1:
Hey yo Baby , I just want to tell you that My Brain is Confuse"/
Cause its wondering if you're feelin da same way that I'm feelin for you"/
I was really Amuse , Cause I wanted to come over there and burn out ur Beautiful Fuse"/
This Love was Complicated at First"/
Cause I didnt kno If u Liked me , And that Really Hurt"/
Lil Cutie , I kno you wanna Join My Immunity"/
Cause your Pretty Lil Shape Reminds me of a Peanut Butter Hershey"/
I'm in Mercy , Cause tha first time you went out wit me"/
Was Because You Felt deeply sorry for Me"/
And My Friends Said that It was a Date In Pity"/
I hope U feel me , cause you're da Inspiration to this Rhyme that I'm kicking"/
Your Love is Invading me like a Deadly Virus"/
Da first time I saw you , I didnt say Hi , Because I was Embarass"/
Your Enigmatic Clue was less"/
Remember that Day when I was Trying to sing like Marvin gaye , Well Baby It was you that I was trying to impress"/
Watch while i Manifest your Internal Interest"/
When I met you , My whole darkness Faded like I had Just been Blessed"/
I gave you the Key to my Heart , And it was Unlocked"/
U Sweet Chocolate Tart"/
I'm the Wrapper and you're the Candy Bar"/

Chorus:
She look like a chocolate Bar/
She's my personal Superstar/
She always drives through my mind like she's a car/
Her smile is as bright as a Sky's Star/
Just thinking of her beautifully Shaped Chocolate Mist"/
Makes me quickly attend a Dentist/

Verse 2:
As Time went on , Our Love became Strong"/
The Love Switch was no Longer Off , It was Turned On"/
It Felt Like I was the Trees , and Baby U was the Storm"/
Your chocolate Shape grew Prettier and Prettier as the Months Moved On"/
And my Craving for you became Stronger and Stronger as the Days Passed On"/
I Loved the Layer Of chocolate which was on ur Soofa"/
Like Usher I think you "Like it My way"/
Its like I was the Object in your Way , and You was the Magnetic Force"/
Then suddenly We attracted together , and we became Lost in Each other's Course"/
Yo Baby come over here so I could take a Bite out of that Chocolate Candy"/
Just Thinkin of the shape of ur body , I catch a Toothache which is Deadly"/
I'm a nibble on your Chocolate earlob Just like Mike tyson"/
Baby I think you're the reason That I'm Living"/
Cause your Nutrients , Supplys me wit Vitamins"/
And ur Onaments , Helps me State this Lovely Lyrical Statments"/
You Lil Chocolate Bar , I love you wit all My Heart"/

im feeling th verses a lot lot playa, but ya need to work on the hook real bad... why u go and force lines in the hook? ditch the dentist and car shit

Nigga dont u get da Chorus........
She drives through my mind like shes a car.....I ment that I'm always thinkin of her.......

The beautiful shape of her Blue Mist/
Makes me quickly attend a Dentist/
^^^tha tittle is chocolate Bar , , , When i think of her shape , I wana go to da dentist cause I catched a toothache....Because her shape Looks like a chocolate bar........If i bite her . shes sweet so i'm a catch a toothache.............Its a metaphor thing

good piece. There returned the favor. Sike, anywayz, it was good, rhymes were kinda simple, but the flow was uuhh, aight. I kinda liked it. Creative(Chocolate bar)

^^^^ Rhymes had to be simple.......Because its too a girl dumbass..........I couldnt spit no vocab on this track......

well, it's still aight. Im not hatin or anything.

Dat shit was terrible Bash dont listen to dem niggas!!! Bash u got wut it takes to be da 1st ever rapper to go Dirt. Wack Drop I give it a 0 (Zero) (Z-Ro) ZEEROW!!!! She must got a ugly shape if she shaped like a chocolate bar!!! I feel sorry fa u if u gotta go home to dat every night nigga!!!! Find a new bitch!!!!

yeah bash knowing the skillz u got left me kinda disappointed after reading this drop cuz u can elevate so much higher, but its still realitively good piece and flowed, wordplay was kinda simplisti
still a creative song

don't worry of them haters, they don't know when to use what style in rap. it wwas a hott drop. but you couldve put coca cola bottle instead of chocolate bar,lol. nahh on the real this was mad hott, it was simple but it had to be, and you had mad hot lines,1

I want Veterans to read this.........No newbies.......You cats dont get this drop.........I wanted to make it funny yet Realistic

Da thing about it is it aint funny.
Yeah she drive thru ur mind.
Her shape send u to da dentist.
Ok I get dat but still it was terrible.

^^^ Hater

Anyway Bash that was tight......flow was simple but you already stated why......I'm pretty sure she will enjoy it.

yo I think this cat bash is fallin off playa!! first off your not keith murray so stop takin his shit secondly stop crammin your 3rd grade flows in your wack ass chorus.

^^^I was just playin around on that Joint dawg...............Yeah i stold da tittle from keith murray...................Deeni dawg I wanna see wat u got...........U been on my dick..........U're a newbie anyways.......Peace out cuzz

iight ima lay it like diss, i see all yall points,,,, but i felt this fosure it was tight, listen to the man when he says some rhymes gotta be simple un elivated,,,,, thats where wordplay kicks in,,,, n this drop had it fosure,, fuckin chorus had more wordplay then u gay haters ever spit..... not all raps are gangsta u chumps fuckin ideots.... if you aint got the interlect to understand differances in raps then dont ma fuckin post.......... this was a tight drop,,, written well and focused for the point makin shit n i feel it,,,, yall cant say shit about dis piece,,,,, i no i aint never seen u chimps write a emotinal piece,, cus u cant u think ur a gangsta who sits behind a moniter all fuckin day! point made im outty fools

Boo ... 1) you stole the concept from keith murry

2) you did it horribly.

if you tried to be funny , you failed

if you tried to play around with the song , you failed.

No matter what you tried doing with this .. it didnt work.

I messed up on this shit......Aight cuzz..............Emcees go through this.......Where they have a drop and its whack.........4 sho cuzzn.........Keep bringing tha Feedbacks

fuck dat shit,,,,, dis was iight man,, i no i maybe cant battle but not many can spit ill freestyle emotinal pieces like me..

maybe u stole a headin but wtf noone ever done that before? get outta here

i could be new to this shit but i think i could lay you down show u the tru essence. i been waitin n u been stallin so wut up, HOLLA!!!!!!!!!

Im wack Huh
THis was some Ja Rule Garbage
You Stink
Im A Drop it like this here for ya

There is no rhyme detection/that could warn you of my impeccable timing perfection/my psychiatrist concluded that I got a freestyle addiction/quality rhymes I be spittin/I don''t flow/I rise/to da top of this battle board until its mine/idiots like u should start reading inbetween my rhymes/I made battling an event in the Olympics/I make drunks stop being alcoholics/I make homosexuals hide back in the closets/I made people with no ass take a seat/when MCs battle me they get Alzheimer''s disease/I make lyricists say fuck the beat/made DJs say fuck the MCs/made graf writers say fuck the wall when doing graffiti/made b-boyz say fuck the floor when they be doin shit that be intense/spottin fake cats like u has become my sixth sense/there is no defence against my ish/I don''t speak English/I speak lyrisism/defeating cats like you is my mannerism/you can''t cure it if you did an exorsism/I made pimps become bitchless/I made emcees admit that their favourite holiday is Christmas/just so they can put my rhymes on their wish list/Santa even sent it to them using Fed-Ex/even though I wasn''t there I still was bussin them up like Lennex/Lewis/cats like you are clueless/trying to battle me is foolish/I got u locked/u can''t even beat me if u shadowboxed/my rhymes make MCs scratch their head like dogs with fleas/I invented similies/cause the only way to explain my rhymes is to compare it to something unrealistic/to make it symplistic/cause dumb-asses like you can''t understand my 2 to the power of 5 lines/if I gave u a sponge u couldn''t absorb my rhymes/u could get a brain transplant/but still be too dumb to understand/cats like you be on my hit-list/now take a lie detector test and admit this/YOU KNOW MY RHYMES BE THE FUCKING SICKEST!

Alll right im done for da night
But befo i go Bash


yo i possess cosmic powers beyond nuclear and atomic/
i move at the speed of light and wit'' more force
than a comet/
i move the heavens and make volcanoes erupt/
my heart is black to the core and my mind is
seriously corrupt/
My rays of devastation will shatter the 9 planets/
i''ll absorb all your energy and use it to my
advantage/
u want war? u better forfeit because once
i absorb it/
the entire universe will be out of orbit/
My brain is an infinite blackhole/
i''ll swallow u whole and shit out your skeleton out
my asshole..........what......

Good Job cuzzn........{Claps}