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Game Vs Blac Haze
15 lines
no d/r crew or hate votes i'll spit first |
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no 20 lines plz...................................============ ================================================== ==== is the max and lowest is 10 ok
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My lyrics induce mass frustration caused my mad hallucinations like you were on X//
And my rhymes leave you dead in your tracks like I cursed you with a hex// These punchs leave you talking senseless like Brad Pitt in Snatch// Where as I come with KO’s you barely make a scratch// Just like ‘Lennox’ my punches hit so hard its obvious your going to ‘lose this’ (lewis)// Your lyrics are ‘chincy’ and lack ‘cents’ just like you were to ‘jew this’// I’m gonna leave you ripped like I was R Kelly and you were a Tyke// Your lyrics lack wits What happened did your brain go on strike?// My lyrics are infectious likes SARS they infiltrate then attack your Sorry Ass Rhyming Scheme// The closest you have to winning this is listen to Jay Z On “A Dream”// My win is a “shoe”in like this cat trying on “And 1”//(O And 1) Even if I got u a dictionary you still wouldn’t know the definition of a Pun// ~*Finisher*~ Now that this shit is “game” over you can go home and sip your tea//*london Maybe if your lucky you can still get tucked in by your mommy// *hes only 15 |
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...3291#post483291
haze hit that up and i'll hit this up when its done....................... |
This is my first game don’t predict it will be easy//
Because after the quotes you will be evicted crazy// Im going to ram my fist into your jam like perfection// It does matter where u move I slam in the right direction// Ive got Confidence in what I can achieve// Don’t hate….Because after im done il leave sharttered in disgreaf// Believe me your lyrics are plain don’t stand a chance// Il get my gun and starting shouting at you saying dance//(COWBOY) Your lyrics are wack some expolsive shit like dynamite// When I see u spitting I don’t even need to give a fight// I wont make any mistake crushing you this oppourtinty// Il sweep you up then said you back to your community// Your lyrics make no sense to me I cant belive im reading this// Its as bad as leaving out water in photosynthesis// No juics leaving with you plain subjects to rhyme// Your wasting your breath man your out of time// Doctor told me you have issues and test// Il make you run for tissues for the best// You cannot achieve ur potential with no participation// You denyed being gay whilets claiming contradiction// I wasn’t even trying when I decided to lay this down// But now I finshed this battle leaving my mate with a frown// |
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Lets up this so it dont get slept on hmmm
lets go GOOO UP WE WILL HIT UP YOURS LOTS GO ****************** *************** ******* *** ** 8 |
YO Blac Haze got this shit with better punches and flowz
hit myne up and poll can u vote on my battle http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...?threadid=52197 ill return da favor |
thanks man thats 1-0 to me lets go until I KO this character good try but u have very few punchs :(
bye bye |
or quik spittingu voted for him cos he can vote for you in your own battle after????????????????????????????????????????????? ????????
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i dont know i wasnt feelin blac's i thought game had a nice flow vote============================================== ===========game
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are u serious.
vote=blac haze/ or game......... reason=draw.both were iigth i think imma have to read them again caseu this battle was iigth we shall see who gets the vote vote=draw |
just read them over....
break down meta=haze multis=haze punches=tie content=haze originality=game vote=haze coem vote vs. Game vs. Lyricall g |
my vote goes to haze.......yo game you wanna batle me?
Haze better rap.....game keep goin..an battle some one easy VOTE====Haze |
ITS STRANGE how i got a newbie like me gets approached by big GANGSTA's snif sniff no i dont wanna battle you your in warlods u must be good like u said dont battle hard payers............................................ .................................................. .....
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Cant Vote Coz Of Crew But I'ma Give Sum Tips......
Game, You Shit Seemed Pre-Written, Hardly Any Punches And No Personals, Things You Must Have In A Battle. Flow Was Aight But Can Still Be Improved. Use Some Wordplay......It Dont Come Natural To Some People But Read Quo's Guide On It In W.E.C......It Will Help You Alot...... Also Read Rises Guide To Battling Then Read Vendetta's...... They're Essential For Newbies...... -Out- |
Lets Up This to Finish it off, Its 2-1 Him and I want this over with lets go to the top come on LETS GO
And we dont stop |
Lets up this so it dont get slept on hmmm
lets go GOOO UP WE WILL HIT UP YOURS LOTS GO ****************** *************** ******* *** ** |
it was close but i have to give it to back haze barley!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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game- ur shit was tight but....sum words looked ryhmable but when said alloud they weren't..like participation an contradiction
not a big deal...initially..u would still beat most people even wit dis flaw.....ur good fro a newb.... But i still think haze took this based on his punches jus slammin...he's more experience...jus take it as an education...elevate from this... from what ive seen today...theres been like 2 or 3 newby's who i see are gonna be kick ass in bout a week or two....props to both vote HAZE |
yo vote on mine
D'Cyde vs. Whyte Ave. this goes to haze yea he had betta rhymes and punches ........................................... |
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