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KerrDezzy (1-1) vs. tRiLL
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Verses by Tuesday Voting ends Thursday Topic... Vision of the future |
damn looks like i'm considered pretty decent, i've been matched up wit t pound, crook ed, n now trill... lol ain't nothin come easy
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yo i better not loose this one......lol my battle record looks so bad now.......><>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>\
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yo sorry but i cant dropmypiece in time..........i havent had time to
work on it......cuse i gotta practice for this rap comp thats coming up....could i please get till wednesday................if u dont belive me ask TreachP, morgdorg, N4$A..........they all go to my school and i'm doin a song with N4$A<,,,,,,,,,,,,,i have never been a no show so please give me this 1 day extention |
*I...uh..I... can't believe this... this shit here... dawg*
*what is it kerr?* *dawg... I'm gettin a vision... vision of the future............* In the year 2023 this world became about nothin but drugs n riots, All of a sudden i look up at the sky n seein Jesus comin down to save me and puttin the evil to silence, The devil grabbin my children but i ain't gon' let him destroy them wit his violence, I grasp tight wit God's hands... hol them up strong so they don't fall to eternal hell, If they take my children I'm thinkin i might hafta go as well, Life at the age of 30 some odd years old wit a wife, 3 kids, n a pistol in hand, Fuckin up the evilness that's tryna wipe out this Earth wheneva it wasn't God's plan, Readin the revalations n it seems all to be fallin in place that this is the end of man, I know i haven't been all that rituous so i gotta make an impression to God so i'll jus give my last stand *kerr, what the fuck, what you mean yo last stand dawg?* I'm not sure but it seems that i go on an endless rampage of killin off the evil wit semi-autos n granedes, I'm equipped wit the shit that i was granted to find myself through this maze, It all seems to be a test that i'm bein put through but it's jus too hard i can't go on when i'm dazed............................................. . Fuck it, i'm runnin wild lettin bitches like sadam n bin laden know that i'ma be around fo a while, If they wonderin where the hell al queda is to back them up jus tell them they can be found floatin dead in the nile, I'm goin through bitches like a knife into a cake, Whoeva holdin the evil against me has they life at sake, Everything be moderated this days wit computers helpin the devil in they automatic ways, Shit's goin crazy wit American's n Europeans droppin bombs wit nuclear waves, Everywhere you look it's blinding like gettin hit wit mase, Houses gettin demolished into piles of useless bricks, I turn to find my children n wife dead, put my head down to cry but the next bomb hits....... *The world goes to pieces dawg, i wake up wit my future...3 children......... n wife... In Heaven* |
ight man he's late, or we gon' bend the rules which ya wouldn't let happen befo or we jus gon' let it be a no show
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YeAHHE WAS TELLIN THE TRUTH HES BEEN HECTIC LATELY DOIn songs and this rap comp at scholl in the mean time can you vote on my rbtl thanks ill come backa nd ediit this when hes posted nice verse kerderzzy
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yo sorry for bein late.................i'm, a drop now aiiittt.......
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its all good.....no school today....typed this up after break fast...
not my best, i had the worst case of writer's block .................................................. .................................................. Narrator: After a chopping session, tRiLL ventures into the forest, where he can’t take it no mo and passes out, in the morning he wakes up and he realizes… Damn I shouldn’t have blazed, my I’m drowsy feeling lousy both eyes glazed, What?? I thought to myself this place seems weird, I thought I wasn’t seeing clear, I didn’t pass out here, So I strolled until I saw some civilization, Was I lost?? Oh well I ventured without hesitation, [tRiLL walks towards where he thought was his old neighborhood] What the fuck was this, was I still tripping of the Canibus, Where were my friends all I saw was rubble and tents, I ran into a building from where I saw everywhere was chaos and destruction, All I saw is 5 year olds with gats busting, Armored cars speeding, innocent children bleeding, Entered a different building, but it felt like I was in common doors, Felt like being in a Ford, with the interior of a SS commodore, (an Australian car) I saw some people, dealing substances illegal, Looked outside n saw an army of law enforcement, Coming and knocking at the door-step, [Then trill sees a picture of himself on the wall, which read “Wanted Dead or Alive, reward 100,00”] With out any guarantee I new I was a vigilante, Ran out the back door and headed towards shanties, So now it’s gotten to a stage where I cant keep up the pace, I couldn’t run they got me with a tazzer Now my mind was in a state of confusion, Reality? Or was I stuck in an illusion, I overheard someone say something about execution, “Where am I going,” I asked, 1 of the guards said, “Shut-up murderer this day will be your last” Trying to escape I struggled, enraged on the inside my blood bubbled, I was blind folded against a wall, why was I there I couldn’t recall, Someone said “Any last words”, I replied “What are you doin this shit is absurd”, I heard guns cocked, and pictured myself on heaven’s door knocking, Shots fired, I thought to my self this is the end……………………. [Suddenly tRiLL wakes up, looks around] -Yo trill what happened dawg Huh? What -You was passed out fo like 3 hours, haha Oh…………………………………….. |
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what's the deal.... does it consider a no show... if not let's get some votes on this, i was feelin it n i don't want it 2 go 2 waist
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.................................................. .................................................. ............................ what ru talkin about this isnt a no show......ru blind 06-05-03 at 03:19 PM u posted at that time posted: 06-05-03 at 08:47 AM n i posted like over 5 hours ago |
Oh k...2 nice verses from both sides, I enjoyed both...What I really look for in a Topical battle is what each people do with their topic given and the concept ttaken on, I think Kerr's was written very well and a nice concept, tRills was also written very well and had also a nice concept, and had a little twist at the end which was nice....Very Close battle but I think I'ma have to go with tRill jsut, Both Very well written pieces...Props and Peace...
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[Then trill sees a picture of himself on the wall, which read “Wanted Dead or Alive, reward 100,00”]
thats meant to be 100,000 dollas lol............... UPPING |
for your information kerdezzy...al queada is in saudi arabia,mostly riyahd,they made over 2000 arrests in a month while i live there,veryv ery limited activity in egypt,its al answa islam in eypt....lol thought you migh tliek to know...
i need to register to vote,still havent done it yet,forgot,but yeah sorry... i thoguht trill had it,the whole terro thing was kinda played nahmean,but both verses were aiight...i jsut cant vote yet ahha,ill pm alldig.. |
vote trill...why?
partly explain...above... also...kerdezzy did have a vision of hte future but eh,so did trill,jsu tin a different way,i liked the way trill did it,like as a dream,him seeing his own future in the dream that kinda hitng,i sorta thoguht,hmmm trill isnt on topic,then i realized,that its a dream of the future,shit happens all the time,i get dreams liek that and it happens at time...arent i magical...but yeah,i liked the concept of trills more,made me hink harder then ker... ' bismillah |
vote=tRiLL
he had a better idea and conveyed it nicely... like a 3rd person perspective... turned out to be a dream... was ill |
Vote Trill
Both were written pretty well but i just got into Trills story a little more.... i seemed to be a little more entertaining.... peace to both though... Nice Verses |
umm Mad Man, Mystery~murdera, Sand, alldig...... when i was
battlin 13th disciple......someone reply voted and mad man..... edited the polls and counted it as a vote................ could any of yaw please do that with my thread |
yeah i'd have to say trill edged this shit but it was another close battle
i prefered trills concept of the vision and it had a bit more originality to it than kerrdezzy's....wasnt feeling the terrorism and god stuff vote trill |
i personally thought i had this...plus trill was late which wasn't allowed when vendetta was late... but i geuss that's jus how it's gon' be... maybe i shouldn't have brought the whole god thing in there, is that why i ain't gettin the votes?
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i agree^
i dont think u should be allowed any slack ......if you're late ur late tough shit kerr that was dam close man....dont sweat it.....coulda gone either way...too close to call really |
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