The Dream
 

I gasp for breath hoping it doesn't turn out that way it hasnt yet
but we cant forget the dreadful prom the start of all of this shit
the alpha to all of this turned me to a balling kid so i just hold her
in the backseat i let my warmest tears soak the coldest shoulder
with hopes to make just a little bit warmer the dreams and wishes
after the kisses wait for the moment of bliss or death the decision
obviously made with precision ive taking a chance for the daring
and i hate the hurt im out of clothes cuz' my patience is wearing
i sit dreamily in the sub concience ive loved all this and it shows
but the biggest blow happened when asked if he lived in local
who would she be with? the pain of the words "i wouldnt know"
they come and go the thoughts the dread desire the yearning
my stomach has zero steering wheels why in the fuck is it turning?
so back to the backseat the questions answers even true lies
but the tears fell from my eyes like rainfall pouring from the sky...
god why?! tell me please why cant it be? "son its not destiny...
either let it go or let it be" no! i wont you dont know what its like
the kind of love that even makes you turn down god's advice
so all i can do is stand and sigh hoping wishes will come true
and she'll stop saying the words ... and make the actions of i love you...


^ the dream ^
by sand....


fades in...

*God's voice*

"Eva he must love you...."

this is................BEAUTIFUL..... i am speechless...

warmest tears soak the coldest shoulder//clever shit my stomach has zero steering wheels why in the fuck is it turning?// more cleverness

yo this was ill, vocab was sick, flow was off the scale.....
sand i will sticky this.......by the way do u want ur otha drop unsticked,,,,,,,,,

this was better than your other shit u had stickied. this actually deserves to be stuck. so some 1 wanna do it? i feel that if you took your shit to poetry youd get more respect. dont be afraid to be deemed a poet. `wUNn`


Dont be a herb, Return the fav.
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=52579

Dope ish here Sand, Seems like there's a sticky section reserved for .Sand. Every week haha but its well deserved mun, droppin it Nice, peep ma new one..."Like father, Like Son..."

.......Pz........

na SAND deserves it, i might as well sticky his new drops cuse
peeps sleep on his shit constantly,.,,,,,,,,or dont reply at all
his otha shit had like 200 sumthin views n like 20 replies
that wasnt fair at all (lol i didnt reply)

damn this was nice. fuck you and your wicked flow.
I don't even know what to say anymore. you always stick in ill metas, and similes and everything, and it still flows perfectly. how? how god damnit! whatever dude, you know this is sick.
Peace

Thank you all for taking the
time to respond...this really
was just a quick thing because
emotions were running high
at the moment so i wrote i
wasnt going to post it but i
am glad that i did...

i am sure they are glad too

Getting better ... pretty good.

i like this shit this cat is a true storyteller with ill worplay!!!!!!
much respect!!!!!

its too bad....really

the way things are

going...but that is

life..im learning to

finally understand it....

Garbage
who would buy a cd and listen to this trash
1 word POOP

that was pretty good dawg keep goin were u at................................................ .................................................. ....

Lmao...Your Name Is Still "Murda G.l.o.k.k.
Lmfao...

*TEARS* Man do I feel this...man this was hotness..had me in tears...*TEARS*

we all know murda glokk is gangsta...lave him alone,its not his fault...

who would buy trash liek this...i would fo rone...big ups to the emotional rappers...that put heart into their work...

very well written, nicely laid out,can tell you were feelin shit nahmean..liked the gods advice being turned down line,that was good...well written nice job...liked it

That was ill. It hit like it was supposed to. That was hard. B

what is your sig about?

thx...

Truly great stuff sand, Some great imagery

Made my day

-peace-

well thank you...
it's unforunate all of
my dreams come true

cept this one....

i agree with glock that was trash.....just playin...back to reality....
that was a good drop...keep it up...and glock dont hate....
liked the metties and wordplay like to hear more...first time ive viewed this section of the site,...

Yo sand wanna battle? Check out my diss on you ...
 

oi sticky i'm bored so i feel like a battle/ n I'm your herder n your my cattle/ come little sticky listen to your rattle/ so far this easy cos you aint thought or spat all/ I'm new to this shit so you've got an advantage/ but in all my battles the response has been average/ so I thought I'd try you and see if you can have this/ i thought I'd try you to see if you can hack this/ but your a lazy ass bitch n so I'm see no reply/ n looking at your pic your one hell of an ugly guy/ don't take that the wrong way it's just your face is like slime/ n your lyrics are awful n barely rhyme/ ye I know this shit has no real meaning/ but I don't use fucking metaphors i just cause bleeding/ my lyrics will cause you to suddenly stop breathing/ choke on your own blood turn whiter n start heathing/ so fuck you sticky or sand if that's your name/ you aint got the right to be in the rap battle game/ n if i offended you well that's a shame/ cos i'ma lyrical Picasso putting words in frames ....

safe ...

^ umm....leave ^

Re: The Dream
 

You just a lil pussy your whole style is weak, im the new kid on the block and i know how to speak, why u talkin bout gettin a girl cause you dont get any, i cant count how many bitches i fucked already, Ill slit your throat make u croak like a frog u fat hog, u dont want none of me cause i am god!! U betta take my advice, or youll sink and it wont feel very nice. Im the cat that u come to for qeustions cause ill take care of all your problems. Dont ask me how i can IM GOD i know how to solve em'. I stay high like altitude, hell ya I got a bad attitude, thatz just how a gain a lil respect, You dont want to rump with me cause you will get decked, U can call me Saint Blaise, I blaze it up, what u dont smoke pussy- come here and take a puff. i act abnoxious, i steal, i pickpockets, you can ask you girl the size of mah rocket, Ill leave u with a missing apendix, youll be hollaring someone please call the paramedics, Someone just cut me up and snatched mah necklace. My raps is Deep like the Mobb, you broke azz bitch go get a job. You Betta watch your mouth dont talk shyt, cause itz Saint Blaise bytch and Im loading my clip!!

^ umm leave too ^

if only your audio touched me liek your words did
your still ill
just not made for the mic

lol...^that's weird^...
and if it is sound that
touches you and not
content...shit...i dont
want to touch you anyway....

(it was his first audio...dont fucking judge him)

like i said babe all your work
is awesome who gives a fuck
about what those faggots say

werds....^

This right here is nice i can't say nothing bad about it.

thank you. good reply there^