..Red.. vs G UNIT BROOKLYN (tight ass battle)
 

yo, imma battle in elite to avoid herbs and dr votes..
u spit first
no recyclin, cre, hate, d/r, squad votes

uppin

I DONT MIND SPITTIN MAN
CAN YOU DO ME A FAVOR WHILE IM KEYING, GO CHECK OUT THAT QB SNYPER VS MEADSKILLZ BATTLE..U AINT GOTTA VOTE BUT LET ME KNOW WHO U THINK WON

*KEYING*

OK I MEANT TO ASK IS 10 LINES GOOD?
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make it longer.-..just a lil bit...
got some good stuff in mind and i dont wanna limit myself.
say 15-20..=???

I WOULDA LYKED THIS TO B EVEEN BUT ILL JUST KEY IN 15 LINES
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will peep when it drops...................

in the meantime peep me vs metaphysical one...................
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it all good G.. just drop.. and then i'll right something about the same length.. it would be like 2 lines more or less-- it all depends.. ill see when i start writing

uppin..........
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SORRY, I GOT MY VERSE
SISTER TOOK TOO DAMN LONG TO MAKE A PHONE CALL
LEMME KNO IF YOU STILL ON SO I COULD DROP THIS SHIT LIKE A PIGEION......

drop.
....im here.............................................. .
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Red is from 'Panama'?...well i'll 'split you' like your Country does the 'Atlantic & Pacific Ocean'/
Quit your boastin, cause once that 'shit' happens' i'll be sure to leave ya 'new ass hole ripped open'/(lyrically speaking:-O

slipped from focus once you read that line, fine..but parametics will find your body lookin like red wine/
confine your rhyme & make sure it makes you 'look like a 'bitch' so you can say its 'worth a 'dime'/

i murder you like being hit by lighting & shocked by thunder like a monsoon in a tundra/
by the time this battle is over your record will be 'identical to 'Harold 'Red' Roberts jerey number'/(84=8-4)

your right this a 'tight 'ass' battle', i got this 'pussy' niguh wide open'..someone please bring the lotion/
fuck droppin the soap, this bitch 'IS THE SOAP!' the way i got him 'brain-washed' & his rhyme 'floatin'/

even if i 'flow dirt on your name', i'd still have you 'all washed up' trying to 'talk dirty' is so sweet/lol
attempting to win this battle is 'hard' like jackin off in a 'hill pool'..this win will shift over to me!!/

you bustin doors & nailin bitches like you really killed a rap vampire/(his sig.)
you really tap-dancer with your pants on fire, thats why i know your a lier!!/

really your a menace to society?...NOT!..your just a skit like the Waynes Brothers version/
I now got you 'beat' but like using your dick to 'cum in handy' for a preist'..i just 'raped this virgin'/


I JUST HATE TYPIN WITHOUT CAPS BUT TRY TO MAKE YOURS EVEN WITH MINES AND IT SHOULD TAKE YOU ABOUT 2 MINUTES FOR EACH LIKE & CORRECTIONS HUH?..I'LL GOVE YOU 35 MINUTES TO DROP, THATS AIGHT?

aight.-.- vote fo the best verse and not fo a battle record...
we all elite here so i hope there no dr or any shit like that... here i go...

its time fo this cat to loose
yo, yo.. check it..:

My intentions are to murder you with the least expectations, - with rhymes so 'rich', they can feed 3rd world nations - Im gonna destroy you, and there aint no stoppin me - You say you talented? But why you copyin G??//

Without complication im 'erasin this “Problem”' wit my lyrical 'vaccination'//
Look how you 'pacin' -- put you in 'German Death Camps' to help ya 'concentration'//

Ya pants get pissed in whenever your faced with an oppinion contradiction//
Defeat your entire 'fact'ion as if i was attackin with an assault of 'fiction'//

Defeatin-me is like readin-a-test u ain't studied 4 cuz u kno u gon' fail befor tweakin-tha-text. //
I'll Insert-leeches-who-feed-on-this-guest when i Reach-deep-in-ya-chest i'm startin 2 feel-tha-weak-in-your-flesh//

“Gansta's”' record will crackle and pop when i snap~ his~raps ~wit ~ tha ~sickness.//
Like puttin hats on pussies Red will cap~this~cat ~wit~tha~ quickness//

PRed will beat you with watches on my knuckles so you can face the hands~of~time//
You're bland~with~rhymes -- like rows of handicaps i cant stand~ya~lines//

I feel tha breeze -- keep blowin on me so you gotta be a fan~of~mine// (wow)
Bury you in crop circled fields -- cant see the signs cuz i land~wit~mines//

I'll sit on you and re-cline, the way I attack this bitch should be considered a crime, Your Like a Watch In The Trash "Your Wastin My Time"//

You couldnt notice good lyrics if they were right before ya eyes - You say you dont 'bite', but No one believes your lies - We all know before a battle, your reciting, writing - "Oh my god, I'm facing Red, I better start biting"//


there ya go.. 15 lines...

hmm.....
damn ya'll had some long lines in there...

anyhow... read it twice and was more impressed with red's punches and wordplay

a couple played lines from both but that cancelled out

overall red's verse was better in my mind

vote- red in a close one

return the favor and peep me vs metaphysical one

yo thanx Chrit + OnE..-- i knew elite people would understand my wordplay and shit..
uppin fo mo votes!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!

honest vote here.... i was actually impressed by this piece. My vote foes to red. although g unit had some pretty good punchez red's verse rolled in my head and the wordplay was better.

Vote => Red <=

could we get some honest votes in here as well? thanks

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...er&pagenumber=1

i really aint see no good personals from red & his wordplay was as good as g uni's
g unit punches hit harder even though read was more complex, just feel g unit was more consistent with his shit.

verse-g unit

damn..oh well...
keep em comming........................................... ..
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^^^
already voted and all..........


just reminding ya'll to peep me vs metaphysical one
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uppin ... lets get some votres............................................ .............
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common people dont sleep...

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uppin ... lets get some votres............................................ .............
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this is bullshit... why doesn't people vote in the fucking elite???
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As Chrit said, both of you guys had played out lines but i gotta give it to G Unit cause he had nice "personal punches" as i like to call them.

Red is from 'Panama'?...well i'll 'split you' like your Country does the 'Atlantic & Pacific Ocean'/
Quit your boastin, cause once that 'shit' happens' i'll be sure to leave ya 'new ass hole ripped open'/(lyrically speaking:-O

That opener was so fucking tight!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

...Red... Your shit was what we would expect from a average Elite rapper (good verse anyways)

Ay yall hit up my battle with Addlibb!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

hahaha lol.. i expected u to do that lilbrick...after u gote mad when i voted against ya....
but fuck it... i respect ya opinion

keep em comming...

Ay yo this wont let me vote for some reason!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!DANM!!!!!!!!!!!!!!(i haven't been able to vote for a battle in Elite yet)

Ay yo dog it was nuttin personal. And yall cats wonder why you dont vote Elite.................I am not the kinda person to hate vote or do that whole "vote for me and i vote for you thing", i just like to hear sick lines and to tell you the truth your shit was half bittin and was just an average spit

You had no personals, just a bunch of insults stacked in bunch, it's like your mom packed you lunch and forgot the punch!!!!!!!!!!!(words of a wise man)

whuteva.....
pussy
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THIS WAS A GOOD BATTLE BUT i AM GOING TO HAVE TO IVE THIS ONE TO THA PERSON WITH BETTER PUNCHES AND BETTER WORDPLAY.

MY VOTE: G-UNIT BROCKLYN

^^^^^^^Couldnt have explained it better than this...........

VOTE : G UNIT

aight.. its ...3-3.//.....

keeop em comming........................................... .........
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remember no d/r, squad or vote crews!!

Red busted that ass...

I've seen much, much better from G-Unit...

But that ain't takin anything away from Red...

His shit was solid and mean.

It won't let me vote, but I've been trying to!

Sorry!

G UNIT'S verse was more directed at ...Red...
like lilbrick said G UNIT had good personals.
Red's verse could have been directed towards anyone, you have to keep your verse targetted at your opponent.
vote=g

could you return the favor?
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=54041

DAMN GOOD SHIT LEMME BREAK IT DOWN THEN CAN YALL RETURN FAVOUR

PUNCHES - G UNIT
MEDA4S - RED
WORDPLAY - RED
PERSONALS - G UNIT

SO BECAUSE OF THAT I THINK IT WAS VERRRY CLOSE BUT I GOTTA SAYYYYYY G UNIT SEEMED MORE ACTUALLY DISS LIKE WHEREAS REDS WAS NICE BUT CUD BE AIMED AT ANY1 AND RED ( G UNIT BROOKLYN IS A EASY ASS NAME 2 DISS AIGHT NEX TIME RIP IT OPEN!!)

GOOD BATTLE CAN YALL RETURN FAVOUR IN ELITE FRONT LINES I FACED THE LIGHT WEIGHT CHAMP

HEE SOOO WACK VOTE IT PLEASE

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=51540