Deceit vs Noiz
 

15-20 lines, 5-0 KO, no hate votes, keep it quick and simple, i'll spit first

Aight Dawg Im Checkin In Spit Yo Shit

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I spit insane rhymes, it's presidential shit/1
Deceit gives hysterical lyrics to bust your Noizy lip/2
Politically incorrect, hipocritically speaking/3
Sick as a Nazi while your methods blaspheming/4
Your mother opened her legs and i was shocked by two things/5
She had a penis and so much hair, it looked like Don King/6
Your gettin' ripped but there's no need for apologies/7
The last time you had money you were playin' monopoly/8
Don't pass go, you stay in Jail/9
And you stay there to avoid my lyrical hotels/10
My flow bankrupts you when your lyrically bankrupted/11
Even your parents find you uneasy, you were probly adopted/12
Though your mums so ugly she got done for facial mooning/13
No one could give birth to someone so repulsive and losing/ 14
Your rhymes embarrassing, you show a new low level/15
I'ma rebel with a cause, without a cause you just a rebel/16
Your mothers such a fucking whore, she invented AIDS/17
So you went to your other option, turned to gays/18
And every word you utter is nearing your last feat/19
Your last word was my beginning and you said 'Deceit'/20

Done, good luck Noiz, sorry, took kinda long, had another battle to finish off, go ahead dogg.............................................. ....

Sinking To Your Level Really Quick

Deceit, The Word Known Now For A "Modern-Meaning" 1
The Act Of Deceiving, No Wonder Ceits Lyrics Are "Peeving" 2
They Aint Punching Hard, Your Deception Has "Turned-Around-Leaving" 3
Ungreatful Bastard, Be Happy And Feel Your Chest, "Cant-Believe-Your-Still-Breathing!?" 4

Picking Up Pace

Ceit If You Can't Relate To "ERrors" How Come You Can Relate To The E.R.?// 5
Bitch I'll Sedate You, The Patient, To Literally Lay Down A "Stall-Bar!"// 6

Explict Evidence (This Battle), Shows You Are "Dumb" To "Trip" Such A "Loud-Alarm!"// 7
But Even Then You Deny It When Your OWN HANDS Were Covered With The WET PAINT Of The "STOLEN CAR!"//8

Keep Misleading "Film-Stars", And The Inevitable Is Bound To Happen, There Is "No-Place-Like-Home" And You'll "Lose-Your-Way-Without-North-Star-Tracking"... 9
Your "Tracking" The Golden Brick Road 'Cause I Already Paved It, Don't Bothering Asking For Directions 'Cause Dorothy's House Got "Blown-Away" (lol) 10

Im Ripping This Kid Too Hard...I Gotta Chill...

This Flow Leaves All Your Cravings Content, Wrote This Under 10 Minutes And It's "Worplay-Is-Mint"...11
Your Fire Wasnt Really There (Guess It Deceived You) And Now Your Back On The Block "Lighting-Dryer-Lint"12
Refer To Your Name And I Still See It As No Threat, Even hough im Spitting Fire And Your Burning You lie To Say "No Sweat" 13 These Lyrics Attack In Identical Stacks, Packing Punches That Leaves Ceit Decived And On Lax 14
Last Line, Taking It Easy, Knew I Was Never Losing This Battle Cause Ceit Is "Bent" All Over The "Needy"




Aight Im done..Stummbled Through That One, Didnt Even Read It Yet

Good though, i liked it, the flow was stumbly as you said, but you took advantage, nice battle, this could be close...

Uppin' Fo' Votes, i hit 200 aswell, Noiz, you're a good lyricist, but i'm better, Nah fuckin' witcha, ha.
Uppin'......

yeah UppIng For Votes

Good Battles We Both Have THe Abillity TO Spit Quick, Pretty Even Too

Lets Get VOtes
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damn noiz ripped this newbie out of his damn skin
i mean you've just been whore slapped
fuck bitched slapped

Aight Cool Upping For More Votes
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uppin', noiz, am i the newbie, i mean have you got more posts, just a new name?
Whatever, uppin', let's do this one quick........................

I generally thought i was really good, especially the last 2 lines, they were prophetic, mystical, am i just seein' what i want to?

Hmmm, forget the nicities, tell the complete truth noiz, what did you think of me?

yeah I Know I Think QB Just Gets A Little Mixed Up WHen He Sees Verses Lol Im THe Newbie Out Of You And Me But Oh Well, Who GIves A Fuck

Upping

Your Shit Was Aight...I Was Checkin On Your Other Battles...You Ripped Some People...I Think I Just Went A Little Further In Wordplay, The "Dumb" And Hearing And the ERRORS and ER Lines...Thats What Might Win This BAttle For Me..But One BAttle Aint Mean Shit Yo, DOnt Worry About IT SOmetimes You might Beat Me, Who Knows Its All Draw Cards Man

Ha, well whatever, i thought i was good, i guess that's all that matters, my dignity and honor, and of course the fact that i am a lyrical genius...
Ha, jus playin'

Uppin' fo votes........

Good Verses By Both.....


But' ima Have to Give This ..Opps for got i dont Got 100 Post...

I'll vote in a Sec...when i Get 100


~OnE~


So will Yall go and Drop votes..on some of my battles...im Sure to Come back and Vote ..on this battle..

Ha, you little bitch, i'm laughin'....................

Uppin' Fo' Votes...................................

Aight Man...Im GOnna Go Hit Ya Shit Up RIght Now...

Uppin Fo Votes.....

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Upping For Votes

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Noiz, do u have to suck up to every1, fuck that man, jus' wait for the votes............................................. ..........................................

Noiz won this battle. It was a good battle but Noiz took it.

now vote on my battle:
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=52551

I AInt Know Why You Gettin Angry..Im Makin THis Shit Go Faster By Postin Tha Link And Telling People TO Hit It Up..Not Vote Fo Me..

Chill yo THis Aint Over

Na, i ain't angry, don't misunderstand, but some of these people will jus hit back to you cuz you hit first, don't worry anyway, my bad..............

D...u busted on the mother thing to much...i learned this as a newbie as well...overcome this....Nioze u had sum nice material but ur right the flo-was lackin......typin u really cant judge flo as much as content so ima give this one to Noize....u suprised me quite a bit...u remind me of a man named RISE......

noiz hit yours up didn't he, ha, don't worry, thanks anyway.........................................

Yo You Can Hit Up WHOEVER You Want..I Jus Put THe SHit DOwn, Ask FOr A Fair Vote, And THats It...Like I Said, Just Relax, You GOt Good Shit, Not Like You A Lacking Minded Fucktard Thats Never Gon Learn A Lesson...

Battling is supposed to be judged on your talent, now i'm not talkin' 'bout this one battle, but every battle i've seen or had, it's just favors.
There's no honor in the talent everyone here is tryin' to develop.
Why not try and judge the skill instead of the votes you want.
And Noiz this is to no one personally, it just seems corrupt as the world is.

And Why Everyone Say Im "Rise"? I Saw His Thing With Like THe Untouchablkes Or some Shit And It Said "Retired n Red" On All DIgs TOpic...Thats What Haiku Said Too...Wierd...

your identical long lost cousins!!!!! or you sound alike, whatever.................i think i'm high, ha

i'm fuckin' witcha noiz....................

Yo...I Jus Try To Keep My Head Level, ThinkIts Only The Computer And Jus Let Whateva Happns Happens

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wow...good battle
close call
break down

punches-noiz
multis-tie
content-noiz
wordplay-deceit
originality-noiz
creativity-tie

vote=noiz
reason=close call..had to read both verses a dew times

holla!
good battle
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Uppin'...........................
Lets finish it, Noiz needs 2, ha, i am cynical
And skeptical..............
Uppin' Fo' Votes

Yeah Uppin Fo Votes...
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honestly i think this one went to Noiz cuz he had better wordplay, but both had really good quik spits. yall should keep doin rematchs, id peep em.


anyway hit these up for me aight: my battle against *MoF* and the one against dice-roller

Aight Thanks YO APpreciate It Ill Vote HOnestly On THose SHits Soon As I Can...Uppin Fo Tha KO Vote

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yes i admit noiz killed this cat, deceit u were good but i heard that monopoly shit before about bankruptin and shit but urs was a little different you also got a little boring threw the middle of it and used words i didnt know existed in the beginning, noiz you were plain tight.... vote = noiz