My Ocean...
 

Too deep for 99% of ya'll... Guesses are welcome to as what this about...

Swimming in my ocean of doubts and insecurities/
Anchored to the bottom looking for puddles of purity/
Fish resemble past people, problems and predicaments/
Would swim away but apphrehended by lack of ligaments/
Holding onto a liferaft of alcohol and nicotine/
It's keeping me alive and killing my dream/
Who are you? I don't know me either/
Trying to stay awake, sniffin' the ether/
Masked people surround and drown me/
Hidden motivations while the unbound me/
Free at last, only to be chained up again/
Commotion in my ocean, lost another sick friend/
I would swim away but dive deeper in the depths/
Wish i brought a heater, so cold i can see my breath/
Hallucinations, seeing gas underwater, a dead father/
26 Christian Martyrs, 14 Angry daughters, 1 motionless otter/
Its my ocean, I came to love it, came to call it my home/
Mythological creatures, special features, 100 watt speakers/
Pyrex Beakers, Shiny Beepers, Fallen Leaders, Chome heaters/
All these contained within my tiny ocean, free will erosion/
Easily influenced, angered, endangered, enhances the promotion/
This ocean cannot be seen by friend, foe or even its creator/
Not graphed, not reachable by raft, nor any elevator/
May seem shallow but the water runs deep/
deprivation of sleep, slaughtering of the meek, movie of the week/
To think such a place even existed, to think such a person could be uplifted/
To see the power every hour constantly being shifted/
Exclusive, only accessible by the "gifted"/
Wondering geographically where this entity lies and what it beholds/
It cannot be sold, for it is mine to keep/
The ocean surrounds my brain, only accessible in sleep/

You guess it yet?

this shit is poetic and metaphorical!!!!!
i'm diggin it!

This ocean cannot be seen by friend, foe or even its creator/
Not graphed, not reachable by raft, nor any elevator/

this was my favorite line in the whole thing...i think at times the wording was a little repeatative.....i have no idea what it's about...is it about being sperm?

^^lol... its not sperm... its very obvious what it is at the end... uppin

This was fucking ill mun, one of your best, Very dope, I enjoyed it to the full no doubt...Keep droppin gems dunny....
HAHAHHA LMAO At that kid..Sperm...What the fuck?? hahaha...

.............................Pz................... ............

Fart Poop
Weak and wack
people dont pay to listen to bullshit!!!

^^kids mad cause he still does gangsta rap... obviously you are part of the 99% of this site... go to hotflowz.com or some stupid site like that... no room for you here...

lol... murda-glokk.. fuckin' kids..

I thought this was an' a'ight piece... the flow was a little off at places, it was too poetic for my tastes, but I'm thinkin' it's about your dreams, that or a near death experience, cause it seemed alot of past memories were flashing in and out of the piece.. deep, I liked it..

^^^someone actually read it!
its about past thoughts... the thoughts that sit in the back of your head and you never really ever think of... lol... hard to explain... but i had a dream and i was back in my past... all stuff shifted in the back of my brain just came bubbling out... ah well... congrats blunt!

i read this before....u know wher inspire.dope......
haha peeps think about it can u get the hidden message towrds this crew...
well inspire doesnt wanan call it that but it sounds like it to me.
dope dope dope....u should make a song with chorus n shit....
so it might have a chance of being in RB legends...........

herbs learn of this dude.,.......if u can understand it

^^^RB Legends? :rolleyes: I'm Shure!

shit was gangsta i liked dat shit keep dem comin dawg.............................................. .................................................. .

^^^lol... nothin' gangsta about it... uppin

uppin...

uppin... homos

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views be up but no replies? :confused:

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I liked it, it wasnt to poetic like that one person said and it was far from gangsta in anyway. Its kinda dull how poeple use that nowdays, but back to the topic it was and ill drop like all the others i have read from you. Good job.

^^^word!

nice piece inspire.
you already said it was about past thoughts, but I really could've sworn you'd watched a MASH movie and Finding Neemo in the same day lol.
anyways, this had dope wordplay, and a really good flow that had nothing to do with bar length. It made me think...ocean...thoughts....swimming....sperm..... heh
meh, this was nice, keep em comin. and kill that murder glok dude.
Peace

its about past thoughts and subconcious and dreamy ness and shit...i guess.


arent i clever?...yes.
lmao@ murda Glock..oh i mean G.L.O.K.K. yeah...keeping it cracka style for all my wife beaters in lockdown wordup...
now thats gangsta...like gary coleman level gangsta...cant b fucked with gangsta...*sighs*...ignorance seems to be in enough quantity the villagers are getting sick of it...

Beatiful imagery mayn..

if you don't understand this, you must be stupid..

but on the real..im loving the concept of this...

deep..

lol i havent seen finding nemo... isnt out here yet but i'll be sleeping on the sidewalk to get tickets before opening night :rolleyes:

thanks to the last 3 people who replied... you comments are noted... finally some vets get up in this... lol...

Definitly agree with Trill add a hook to it and definitly worthy of RB legends, keep it up dawg

^^^thanks... uppin one last time....