7 Days War
 

This is my first song with a chours and all, dont sleep on this one hit me up with what ya think of it, i did it in about 20 mins or so.

The Seven days war cant go on anymore |
We gotta shove the past out the door |
So many dead bodies on the floor |
The Seven days war cant go on anymore |

The guns where lifted high, the month was July |
The day was the sixth when the war cry, was heard in the sky |
They seemed to be fighting for no reason, a simple treason of the heart |
A different view of the same review was tearing the two apart |
One side was white, ready to put up on hell of fight |
The other black, tired of getting dragged out into the night |
Why couldn't they get along? Who has the right to say who should belong? |
I stand on the white side, hands at my side not on the fight, I take a walk along |
The middle where the war is a stand still, getting a slight cold chill |
A single white person yelling a degrading word, skin crawling in me like he king of the hill |

The Seven days war cant go on anymore |
We gotta shove the past out the door |
So many dead bodies on the floor |
The Seven days war cant go on anymore |

I turn to my side, torn and worn pride a deep sigh for them |
I look to the other, a child sits his eyes a glisten like a gem |
He cries, as he tries to find out what the hating is for |
I frown and move to him, his tears continue to pour |
He don't want this 7 Days War to go on anymore |
A gun shot was heard, what occurred next was a sad time |
The boy was hit like a bird, a third one dead during this hellish crime |
I dropped down, a frown on my face, was the white race really such a disgrace? |
That they would add a little boy to the list of the slain? If I could I would replace |
My life for his own, I tried to stand but there was this pain in my bone |
I can only picture this kids family sitting alone |

The Seven days war cant go on anymore |
We gotta shove the past out the door |
So many dead bodies on the floor |
The Seven days war cant go on anymore |

The was coming to end, seven days long so many sent to heaven |
There was this young one by the name of Evan, picked up an AK 47 |
And with that sparked a new found hate for both sides towards the other |
One after another, turned on there sons and their mother, father and brother |
The war ended with blood shed, skies painted red as so many where now dead |
The path was led by the father of the killed boy, to the bed of the boy we all fled |
The mother placed her hands on her heart, begged the lord please |
She dropped to her knees, the rest went out to appease |
But they wouldn't hear or see of it as the turned and walked off |
With that the 7 Days War was done for now with a single cough |

The Seven days war cant go on anymore |
We gotta shove the past out the door |
So many dead bodies on the floor |
The Seven days war cant go on anymore |

Thats it, hit me up.

Uppin'

dope shit blud.....the hook was mad...i got into the hook eazy...and off it quick to the other verses....ill shit dawg....

yo chek my shit out....SIN for FORGIVNES...pzzz

Aight thanks, i will peep ya drop

Still Uppin

like Big E Z that was ill.

Thanks for the few replies so far

Still Uppin this, so dont sleep.

Uppin again, so many people have looked at it but left nothing...wonder why.

nice...nice Story telling, descriptive...

fluid scheme....pretty solid dunn

Thanks

Still Uppin

Uppin cause yall sleeping

Ill dawg....I Liked every Line

that was a dope track......

like to hear it in audio over a Nas type of beat.......

flowed well and content was dope

this was cool..

liked the conecpt...

but try to make it flow a lil smoother,...

Yea about the audio thing, im thinking about something like that but I gotta work on my voice a bit because it sounds funky over the mic. The flow yea is kinda good here and there now that I read it over i will have to touch that up some for the audio if i make one for it.

Uppin this piece for a few more times is all.

Uppin

returning the favor...

i liked the whole idea of it...but i didnt get into the verses too much, its seemd like u forced some of it trying to get too many multis...not bad...6/10

Aight thanks man and thanks for returning the favor.

view of the same review .........i liked it how u rhymed words inbetween a sentence

that was ill.....nice topic.........
The was coming to end, seven days long so many sent to heaven |
There was this young one by the name of Evan, picked up an AK 47 ////////wordplay was good.......i never realized evan and 7 rhymed lol..........


good work............the chorus is alrite..........

Thanks again

Last uppin just cause im tired of uppin it.

Next Work: Still Standing.

Very nice homey, I like your stuff..keep spittin

Thanks, working on my next drop as i type this here.

nice drop,sorry for the late reply,sleeping is a big problemup in here,but you dont want no fool replying to t your shit...nice job.good rhymes,shit was simple,couldup the vocab a nothch,but eh,its not nescersary...good story telling...

good drop man,i did like reading it,again apologies for the lateness,i usually reply to ill shit straight away but i been busy...get at me with your future drops.

Aight thanks, yea sleeping is a problem here but its all good thanks for your reply.

Upppin cause everyone is sleeping on this.

i'm not a big fan on storytelling, but this was aiight, liking the concept tho didn't get to bored, normally i do but very DEF overall:apreciating your talent and keep droppin.
return the favour plz

Thanks, Aight I lied on this im going up it a few more times so im not lost in the mainstream cause my next work is on hold for a bit.

Yeah, dawg I was feelin this shit...you kept on topic, every verse mattered, good flow, nice rhyme play.

Thanks, with that its upped again.