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Open.Mic.Project Presents:[.What is Heat...?.] FT: Meta 5
.A man once said Heat is the product of fire, I say... Fuck That! .
Heat is What I Speak; With Every Word I'm Emcee Defined Enter My Mind At Your Own Risk⦠I'll Merk You in Time I Come to Find Artificial Intelligence In Every Word Spoken I Awoke When Hip Hop Declined, Fake Gangsta's Were Loc'in Verbs Smokin', I Feed the Fire With Fuel Of Pure Intelligence Every Vet Truly an MC & Important? Labeling Herbs Irrelevant Preachers Celibate? Fuckin' Kids, Enough Sin To Engulf Flames Insult Names With Every Open Mic, Puttin' InFumZ to Shame Yeah I Said It, My Mic Eats MC's, The Merked Know I Fed It Read it In The News, When Meta Arrives, Please Call a Medic Truly Pathetic, Vets Battling Newbies To Gain A Simple Win Merk Your Kin While You're Still Searching In the Recycle Bin That's A Sin! Always Come Original Or Reverse And Go Home I'm Prone to Death Roaming The Earth With MC's Syndrome The llest Killah Known To Bless The Stage & Kill Microphones A Drone That's Shown His Fate When His Hype Was Blown Never Condone Biting On Any Level, Fuck All Foreign Objects Words Are Perfect, With Meta's To Reflect Our Open Mic Project Don't Sleep! |
pretty good.
I don't like readin battle raps, I read open mics for that reason, but I don't regreat reading this. It had nice vocab, and references to crews, and it would go on a beat like a fat kid on a whopper combo. Verbs Smokin', I Feed the Fire With Fuel Of Pure Intelligence Every Vet Truly an MC & Important? Labeling Herbs Irrelevant I was diggin those lines. pretty good dude. topicals are better tho Peace |
I feel what you're sayin'...... I used to write Topicals... I feel off from that...... gotta get back to it...
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THIS WAZ ILLL MAN!! I Really Liked It,Nice Vocab,Nice Flow,All Around Dope.. My Fav. Linez
"Yeah I Said It, My Mic Eats MC's, The Merked Know I Fed It Read it In The News, When Meta Arrives, Please Call a Medic" "I Come to Find Artificial Intelligence In Every Word Spoken I Awoke When Hip Hop Declined, Fake Gangsta's Were Loc'in" I Loved Dis Piece Man For Real Ur Ill.. 8/10 Peace .. 1Love.. $pitzophrenic |
I agree Wit Scitz
THIS WAZ ILLL MAN!! I Really Liked It,Nice Vocab,Nice Flow,All Around Kicked ass.. My Fav part "Yeah I Said It, My Mic Eats MC's, The Merked Know I Fed It Read it In The News, When Meta Arrives, Please Call a Medic" ILL |
Illest piece I've read 2day.......Nice vocab , Ill flow , Nice style , and Ill wordplay...............Tha only word to explain this drop is ILL......................
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represent it out meta...v.nice drop...nice flow,caught it easy,i aint one fo rht ebattle raps,that why you wont catch me in a crew conflict,but yaknow...ups to the battle cats,nicely written...liked the infumuz line...the cleibant preacher line was good also..i liked how you dissed only once...not overdoing it like some shi ti see,where th eentire thin gis overdone,one line is all you need..psh.no doubt,havent seen you in open mic in a lon gitme dun,is this a return??? ;) oh i forgot the definition of illness with bash,but eh,anyways...nice drop.
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i was feeling this...
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yeah, sorta like a comeback...
Thanks for all the replies... keep 'em comin' |
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not many people like infumez..lol
anyway, it was a dope joint, i was fellin the flow and punches! "Preachers Celibate? Fuckin' Kids, Enough Sin To Engulf Flames Insult Names With Every Open Mic, Puttin' InFumZ to Shame" keep droppin' them! |
hmmm....
solid.... one of the better cats I've read on this board repay the fav http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=53089 |
Illness mayn...
Feelin this.. Keep spittin meta.. peace -1- |
thanks........... more replies.
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I agree i dont like reading the battles really but was ill none the less good job.
Peep my drop 7 Days War. |
thanks...
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Any other feedback?
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This was aight. The flow was decent. On and Off throughout. Vocabulary was nice tho. You maintained that, consistency is important. Multies here and there, but why did you bold some words? I'm not getting that.
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Re: Open.Mic.Project Presents:[.What is Heat...?.] FT: Meta 5
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bringin heat again' meta.. tha's str8 dawg.. the flow seemed a little off, but overall it was nice for the content, I liked the topic you did too.. it biggs up ur game, lol.. wasn't really a creative topic but it was still a topic, ne-who.. keep bringin' tha raw shit.. 1
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