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Erratik Assassin 06-04-03 12:56 AM

Erratik Assassin V.S. mercurio
 
Rules:
16 lines
No crew/hata/dr votes
I'll spit first

All other regular stips apply

Erratik Assassin 06-04-03 01:10 AM

Ayyo...check it...one, two...

Mercurio you couldn't touch my spits if you tried to kiss me frenchin //
You remind me of Shady/Aftermath cuz you only worth 50 Cents man //
You make me wanna 'url and I ain't talkin hyperlinks, it's simple potna //
The lead falls from my uzi like a pencil sharp'na //
You can't understand my shit so you "Rewind" it like Nas //
And my voice come through his speakers as loud as the Wizard of Oz //
Your lines make no sense like George Bush blabbin //
And your voice is so annoyin sound like it's a porpous laughin //
This groupie grabs more of Eminems junk like he means it's war //
Than a little fat kid hungry at a convenience store //
I pity this fool like Mr. T this kiddie gets schooled like little Gs //
My shit burns ya so bad it's like I'm spittin at you wit listerine //
I spark my static at you like your clothes has just gotten dried //
And my rank in rap is so high people thinkin that I just gotten fried //
And your name confuses the forum you're losin this war, I'll loosen the score //
Cuz I'm cruisin the board - I'm like Tennessee cuz it's like I'm shootin for Gore, you a nuisance fa sure //

mercurio 06-04-03 01:36 AM

erratik assassyn is about to get assasynated,
im gona stab u in the face then get u creamated
u the pussy, im a dick nice and stimulated
all ur rhymes is fake none iz origionated
im a make u hurt fool
every rhyme i use is a killing tool
u needz to go bak to skool
im ridin u like a mule
il ride u out til u so thirsty ur sippin on ur own drool
and wutz wit u keep saying shit against me with eminem?
i heard the shit from ur boy about u goin to clubs feminin
dressed up as a women gettin ready to get them in
takin it up the ass like a whore on vikidin


yea.. that shit was relaly weak, n i kno i lost this battle

Taktik 06-04-03 01:37 AM

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=53637

you vote 4 me and i might pul off a favor:)

Erratik Assassin 06-04-03 02:00 AM

Uppin for votes!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! People are you sleepin? C'mon.


(damn 100 characters shit)

brabbit 06-04-03 02:08 AM

yo ill vote up this shit for sure if u hit up brabbit vs white trash hit it up farely aight and ill return the favour an hit up this battle fa sho aight!!!!!!!!!!

Erratik Assassin 06-04-03 02:12 AM

Neither me or merucio have 100+ posts, we can't vote. .................................................. .................................................. ..........................................

QB SNYPER 06-04-03 02:45 PM

yo erratik u still havent improved since last time
i thought u woulda did better than that..still props but why havent u improved more than that???

usually when u stit 1st, you go hard not knowing the odds of loosin & if thas whachu call hard man u neva had a chance aginst me last time..well i voted ya
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illest_emcee 06-04-03 02:50 PM

hit my battles up against:
docmeth
delirious
and ? II text

the fava'll be retured
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JHustler 06-04-03 04:06 PM

ERRAKTIC WON DIS ONE MERCUDIO LEARN HOW 2 SPELL

UGKUGKUGKUGKUGKUGKUGKUGKUGKUGKUGKUGKUGKUGKUGKUGKUG K

Erratik Assassin 06-04-03 09:08 PM

I told you QB, (A) I don't like freestyling, and (B) I forget ideas too easily. I'm gonna start keepin my unused bars in a notebook or somethin. Not the exact bar cuz that's pre-written, just shit like...if it was the pencil sharpener one I'd be like "Alright, I'ma put down lead falling from a pencil sharpener." I was gonna do that before but too many people bitched about that being a pre-written so I stopped - but every freestylist and/or rapper has to think over his bars before he uses him - fuck some use their bars more than once.

And damn, I DON'T HAVE 100 POSTS YET!

QB SNYPER 06-04-03 09:48 PM

well this site is more complex, i doubt they'd say thats a written unless they comare it to your other freestyle battles or their wack which rarely happens

and i hope that isn't your online record TOTAL
damn you shoulda kept goin like me & soldier

Erratik Assassin 06-04-03 10:22 PM

It is my total, it's been hard findin battles lately. At the 50 Cent forum, everything was straight garbage, anyone there who still rapped I either beat them before or they were retiring. And I told you everywhere else crashed. Then I remembered "What was that place that the dude at Verbal Kombat told me about?" and that's when I went to FU, and then I remembered you talkin bout this place and I was like "Hey, I gotta go somewhere."

I'm hopin to do a lot more battles this summer, I'ma try to do atleast 5 a week - right now I'm doin like 3 a week.

QB SNYPER 06-04-03 10:29 PM

oh i see, well look at my register date & you'll see how long i got where i am. i waste no time especially when i got time.
umm i thought you retired & just fa thought you never even challenged or went aginst me.
after u chaged ya username its like you disappeared.
this is the only place that i find more conveinent but by sunday i'll be out.
you remember dame dash rite?...well he's findin another place thats better than this.
hopefully it'll be less dick rydin & newb's since its not new.
but this place was for temporarily purposes.
look at whene my profile says in from..lol
umm well when he finds that site i'll be sure to get it to you & knowing him it'll be hott.

Erratik Assassin 06-04-03 10:32 PM

Aiight man - if I find any forums I'll let you know. Back when I said I was takin my break from 50's forum I found Verbal Kombat, Verbal Raps, The Spot!, Brilliant Illness, and Freestyle Underground. They're all down now, except for FU (currently at) and VK (they don't like me there lol).

Yeah and I saw that thing where you from lol.

QB SNYPER 06-04-03 10:37 PM

yea, they investigatin me cus i set a new record in this shit but umm next place i move to on the net to battle, it'll be permanently

Erratik Assassin 06-04-03 10:40 PM

That's cool, that's cool...I dunno how long I'ma bein doin this, I hope I don't lose interest in rappin over the summer cuz of the lack of battles I'm gettin.

I'd go to other places, too, that I've found - but they got shit like "oh 100 posts or more" and shit, like they can't trust me to vote on a battle? lol I vote more than I actually battle, it's kinda sad - 'cept here I gotta wait til I've posted enough.

Master Blaster 06-04-03 10:46 PM

First Things First

mercurio ~ Learn How To Rap Or Learn How To Battle Rap
One Of The Two Please

*nothing to quote here*

Erratik Assassin ~ Took It Hands Down Pretty Much...Good Job
On Your First Win...Had A Few Good Punches...To Lazy To Quote

Vote ~ Erratik

~1~

Erratik Assassin 06-04-03 11:05 PM

Thanx man. So is this considered a KO now - or do I gotta wait for two more votes or somethin? I don't think I ever read what a KO was considered as around here.

Erratik Assassin 06-04-03 11:15 PM

Uppin for votes...

When's the KO? 5 votes?

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Erratik Assassin 06-05-03 12:14 AM

Holy shit, uppin for votes............................................. .................................................. ........................this is wicked gay

Erratik Assassin 06-05-03 12:49 AM

Goddamnit...can we close this and say I won? I consider 3-0 and KO anyways. This is taking too long.

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Tonya~Montana 06-05-03 01:19 AM

on the real....merc last couple barz sounded gay!!

vote E A shit was way betta! punches hit nicer

Erratik Assassin 06-05-03 08:54 AM

Thanx man. It's 4-0 me uppin now. Is 5-0 a KO cuz ain't nobody answered me yet.

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Erratik Assassin 06-05-03 09:39 PM

C'mon, if I get one more vote we can finally do away with this battle. .................................................. ......................................

rYdoGG 06-05-03 10:52 PM

OK.....................FUCKUGKFUCKUGK FUCK UGK fuck UGK F U C K U G K FUCK UGK.....unda ground kingz iz gay....pyace

rYdoGG 06-05-03 10:53 PM

a dunno i think mercurio lozt....ur shiat wuz kinda choppy mercurio....juss elevate it.....i think u lost tho....wuteva iss all good...pyace

rYdoGG 06-05-03 10:54 PM

if i could vote id give it 2 erratik assasin...........i juss forgot ta put it on ma lazt post...waitin for 100....pyace


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