Ronin Vs Feeble Minded...he Messed Up The Other Link This Battle Is Fucking Tight!!!!
 

RULES:
FEEDING ALLOWED...
HE SETS MAX I MATCH IT...
HE SPITS FIRST....


HERE IS HIS SPIT....

Im so “brilliant” that’ll LEAVE-U-BLIND//
When catz SEE-UR-RHYMES, they understand u got a FEEBLE-MIND//1
And u cant defend from my VIGOROUZ-BLOWZ//
Tha TRIGGER’LL-BLOW, u could rock bullets wit teeth and not be “VICIOUZ”-WIT-THROWZ// (Super Mario Brothers)2
And its factI got tha sickest-of-flowz, make u STUTTER-BASTARD//
Ill have u “spread out” by my “toast” faster than BUTTER-PACKETS//3
Callin me so quickly u must be EAGER-FOR-DEATH//
Catz say im YOUNG-GUNZ the way tha tefz SEETH-THRU-YA-CHEST//4 (BABYZ)
Feeble cant AFFORD TO LOOSE this, cuz im SUCH-A-HIGH-PRICE//
U can “back stroke out”, but still get gutted by my “BUTTER-FLY”-KNIFE//5
Ill turn ya “VERTERAN”-TO-AN-AMATEUR//
I still cant decide which is tha BETTER-HAND-TO-DISMANTLE-YA//6
If ya whole flow is electrical, or technical I can ACT-THA-DIFFUSER//
DESTROY YA RAP CAREER soon as I SMASH-YA-COMPUTER//7
Like my boy SnapNeckz ima HAZY-LEXICON//
Wit ur WEAK CEREBRAL, u musta thought MARCH MADNESS, wuz a bunch of CRAZY-LEPRICHANZ//8
Tha NEXT-I-BOMB, is every BLOCK-IN-YA-VILLAGE//
After this battle FM is gon be described as DISTRAUGHT-AND-BEEN-PILLAGED//9
How could u ever get RID-OF-YA-WACKNESS//
I CONSIDER-IT-TRAGIC…. Cuz mafia makez sure that ya peepz don’t DELIVER-YA-CASKET//10
I could CARE-LESS-WHERE-U-REST//
TEAR-TEFS-IN-YA-CHEST… its been fortold in ancient skriptures, I APPEAR-BEST-WHEN-U-TEST//11
So yall no by now… RB I spit nuthin BUT-MADNESS//
Tha tek can easily transform ya frame into a PUTT-PRACTICE//12
Call me URBAN ARSONIST…. I FIRE-HOODS-UP//
Bring ya crew, we can duel, ill put a WHOLE IN ONE of ya peeps better than TIGER-WOODS-DOES//13



MY SPIT (FEEBLE MINDED....) REMEMBER TO POLL UR VOTES...
yo

in order to ~kill a vet~ this bitch would have to blow up animal hos-pit-als/
and steal a 'pet', so someone would be your 'dawg'.. fallin like caved in walls/
i dont have to type big to be noticed...bitches feel it just cuz i wrote it/
your flows the re-motest, quote this, you still aint hit puberty, voice only changed from 'deep' throatin/
send a 'homesick' letter...because you always 'miss' votes/
ya verse is 'sinking' lower and lower...go and buy 'floats'/
you a newbie, and cats can tell, only way your heard coast to coast is if you dial bell/ bell atlantic= altalantic is coast to coast..
only way ya rhymes will sell, is if ya get that dick out ya mouth so ya lips wont swell!/
"smash my computer"....you fucking biter, ive heard that line twice/
attach ya hand to my dick to beat me, and ur flow might rhyme nice/
dumbass, butterfly aint backstroke...i musta bent up that knife/
high price or low price..still more than your ice/
only way ya blows are vigorous is if you take my hand and use it/
my flow is rigorous, triggering blows, use this keyboard, i bash and abuse it/
you rest in the casket, i resurrect ya body to re-blast it/
my 'religion' is tight rhymes...this bitch is caught 'fasting'/
who's next to test text, this bitch 'wraps' carelessly like fed-ex/
gets annexed, the next to be vexed, left wit broke necks/
when i tote best, even with teefs in my chest, its like im wearin the vest/
you cant 'cop' my rhymes...sentenced to 'arrest', get the fukin jury, you still won't attest/
im sick of fighting amateurs that think they can blow out my candle lit-/
but taking down 'shelfs' is the only way this cat can dis'mantle'-shit/
destroy and mash ya brain so you can graduate from sped-academy/
you talk 'shit', only when ya 'fladgellate', otherwise only act mad at me/
its so sad to see, me ravaging this little bitch so savagely/
he be glad to flee in a moment once i rap so lavishly/


explanations...
the line about dismantle shit...a shelf is a mantle...
deep throatin get it..voice gets deeper at puberty...
you miss home when ya homesick...
farting is fladgellating, or somethin close to that...


if you dont understand please dont vote tho...........




VOTE UP....THIS WAS A GOOD BATTLE,....
BUT IVE SEEN THAT LINE ABOUT ARSONIST BURNIN HOODS O THIS SITE B4...

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DAMN!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

THIS BATTLE WAS REAL CLOSE ANT TIGHT....

BREAKDOWN..

FLOW-FEEBLE
PUNCHES-FEEBLE
WORDPLAY-RONIN
IT WAS CLOSE..BUT I GOTTA GO W/ FEEBLE ON THIS

thanks...i wouldnt have put it was tight if i didnt think it was....<<<<<<<<<thanks for voting period though.....some more votes????????????????stilll need more peeps to vote on this....

Alright... well this battle wasnt as close as I thought it woulda been... or as close as you said it would be.... but Feeble took dis wit just the way his CREATION disses got at ya... I honestly thought the other dudes rhyme was just borin........ I dont know if I can poll vote on this cuz im at my bro's house but Ill try and hopefully the thread will still be open and I will POLL at my HOUSE.....LaTeR
vote = Feeble
stay up playaz

............................. well folks it says that I cant......... sorry..........
....... will try to poll later............... take it easy .................>>>>>>>

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thanks for voting! later....

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Ok readin both verses i thought that feeble came harder ina ll areas except flow - he had harder punches,more personals,more meta's,better wordplay but ronin had a better flow so,

Poll Vote = Feeble minded

Yo return tha favor by votin fairly on ma battle with kawtik peeps.

Peace

again like tha rest of tha peoples opinons, both
battles were tight. Ronin had sum nice wordplay in
tha mix, but overal my man Feeble got this, not by
much but he got this.........

Vote - Feeble Minded

somethin wit tha polls fucked up so i cant vote
sorry man............................................... .......... -one

thanks for voting all who can lol it would be 4-0 me.....but its not lol yall cant vote............but thanks ne way@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@UPPIN STILL...

i think feeble ripped this one. ey feeble check out my battle against rythemic tendencies and vote for the best verse aight!!!

poll vote- feeble

Whooooo-weeee haha, this battle was tight, to the kid who said it wasn't.. well, it was. heh. Alright I'm gunna give the break down of what I thought..
*clears throat*

Ronin came hard, I mean if this shit was audio I woulda loved it, cause everytime I read battles I always think that I am reading them wrong, but Ronin had some decent wordplay, his rhymes were multis but it still seemed simple at times, but so did feeble mind, I think feeble took this with lines like:

and
^I just liked how that sounded, it had a really great flow. it was dope.

Ronnin came really nice though, not someone I would battle anytime soon, but I mean, it's not liek this was a blow out, good job.
Peace

thanks.....thats what im best at, multi-rhyming...
a lot of people love punches though, so i try my best to add those in....
thanks for voting , to bad for me you can poll...

i gotta go wiv feeble on this one beta flow n punches but close tight battle! i'll poll that if ya vote on my battle wiv either mc porno or jay da ripper! the min u vote i'll poll this!

i did...you said "the minute"...its up...been two minutes lol...please poll....more votes,,,,,,,dghfhjdfguldflgjsdflghgluhfkldfghuseri lfhsdfilgvbndfisgudfug

I know man I'm at liek 32 posts, I was like ARG! fuckin poll votes. Blah. haha Good job though, the punchyes didn't seem forced, you said you try to add them in, and usually when people do that they seem forced. good job though, it was all real smooth

polled that now feeble will u poll dat vote on my battle cos u 4got 2 dawg n i just need that 1 vote, thanx!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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This Battle Was Fucking Awsome..best I've Read In A Long Time..But FEEBLE Took This Cause His Wordplay WAS SICK...Ill battle Though...Ima Have To Go WIth Feeble Though Other Guy had Good Punches TOo..Damn Wordplay Laughing My Ass Off...

Vote=Feeble
Me Vs Envey
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=54474