Violent~Wordz vs G UNIT BROOKLYN
 

I GUESS YOU'LL BE POSTING TONIGHT
8 LINES MAX.
THAT WOULD HAVE TOOK YOU LONG BUT YOU LEFT ALREADY
NO BITCHIN/NO CREW VOTES/NO DICK RYDIN
I HAVENT BATTLED SINCE DAMN SO IM KINDA WORN
YOU DROP 1ST

::Yall Vote Fairly:::

Dont Vote For That Person Just Cause He Voted For You
In His Battle::

::You See What Kwarteen Put LoL::
"I'll Return THe Fava" Its None Of That::In This Battle

Right @ Gunit ::

Dont VOte By Records :: Votes Must Be Explained ::

Clearly No 1 Line Votes Then Post The Links To Ya Battle ::

Asking Us to Vote

Im Out

yall vote on my shit and who does i'll return the favor igth peace~1~
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=53372

kwarenteen u suggesting if peeps vote on ur battle fo' u, ull return favour n vote for em?............................................... ...

I MAE THE CALL-OUT THREAD SAYING YOU DROP 1ST
YOU ACCEPTED SO
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My Verse::That'll Defeat This Vet:: Uh HuH
 

:::LoL::^^Look at your Record and Scared to Go First But Newayz::You A Vet to RIght?


--Rule 1.::::No Feed'n Off My Verse/No Countering
If To Feed You Lose:Simple As That::::

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::Ima Beat You:: so get Ready to be 25~2::




This nicca Claim-his-an-HeavyWeight...25-1? Thats Ya Record? Right...That’s like Beleiving you in G-unit...
You Fake..nothing Real in BK...you Just an Internet-Textcee..a Wanna Be Rapper who will Never Make-It...//

So Check-It..you fake E~net-Thug...i'll Snatch-ya-Mouse Pad..cause ya Life only Consist-of-Clicks...
You cant Resist-the-Sticks..you On wood..from ya D.R votes..and now This nigga thinking he can Win with an Wind-resistant-Dick...//(Can you Nope)

Take the Shot-gun-out-ya-Pic..putt’n this Nig.. In mo-heat..than Black-Fans..at a Nazi-Gig...(Gig = Show)
Tripple K's to your Dome..that'll Cross-n-Split ya Wig...it's the Law-of-Newton..the way Im Stuffin-this-Fig...//(Fig Newton)

I Merked-this-Prick...Hurt-ya-Spit...youll never be the Big-Pitcure in B.K..even if ya Stood-next-to-B.I.G..
You to Busy looking at all the Non-vets-you-Did..its Plane-to-me. That you gett’n Murked like JFK-Did...//

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4 Barz :: Post :: Within Right Now ::


(BK = Brooklyn) ~

BK's-Face + Punch = :beat:

voilent dawg you shouldnt play expers at mo play them when u get ur record up yeah?============================================= ============

but if he won this for example. hed be getting it up against some of the best, rather that than a bunch of 30 newbies?.
peace.

^HE'S RIGHT

you aint voilent, my dick could beat you & its longer than your record put together/
words with no action so you say you as violent as a snake claim your rhyme is slick..but its pure leather/
look you can’t match-me-lyrically cause Ill smack-you-literally leave your body floating in water like the statue-of-liberty/
your world will end severed both your arms now you got no girl friend, you like a bulimic patient the way you hurl n bend/
like shirts with collars, your not allowed in you hood, ill wreck-you-good 'behead' your ass if you mess in this 'neck-of-the-woods'/
Violent is miserable, he has to pay for joy, i 'checked' his rhyme, its not worth a dime..im a teller to make it void/
chop you like loin..you couldn’t touch my text even if you were my paper-boy/

hit my battle up wiv consiquence n i'll return the fava wen this done!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

damn dis battle was but g unit brooklyn wit dat statue of liberty line was so fuckin sick violent worz is nasty 2 though dawg he beat me hes good but my vote=g unit

o yea http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...42&pagenumber=3 holla back both of yall dont hate violent u already beat me we gotta get to battle again some time

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ight, i like g unit brooklyn in this 1, his punches were a lil harder, but most of all his flowed a lot betta, i couldn't find a good consistant flow to violentz drop...
hit up my battle please, jus need 1 mo poll vote
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=53719

g- unit brooklyn all the way,
vote=g-unit brooklyn,
A, holla back look at my battles wit' tech 9 and the 1 say don't get merked

This nicca Claim-his-an-HeavyWeight...25-1? Thats Ya Record? Right...That’s like Beleiving you in G-unit...
You Fake..nothing Real in BK...you Just an Internet-Textcee..a Wanna Be Rapper who will Never Make-It...//
...Violent Wordz...That Kinda Killed It Right There...Bad Start, You Started Doing Better In The Last 4 Lines, But Not Enough To Compare To G Unit Brooklyn...His Shit Was A Little More Thorough, Except That First Line...

Vote=G Unit Brooklyn

wish u niggas wud break down votes rather than "g all the way" an' all that shite, fukin noobs. :)
*breaks down*
"This nicca Claim-his-an-HeavyWeight...25-1? Thats Ya Record? Right...That’s like Beleiving you in G-unit...
You Fake..nothing Real in BK...you Just an Internet-Textcee..a Wanna Be Rapper who will Never Make-It...//"
riht i think you overdone it here with 'your a wannabe' scene, its been done too often by too many mc's n is basically gettin a bore to read, try work up with your multis in the middle and end, not beginning. Also you want a nice snappy beginning, not something long and without much rhyming as it looses attention.

"So Check-It..you fake E~net-Thug...i'll Snatch-ya-Mouse Pad..cause ya Life only Consist-of-Clicks...
You cant Resist-the-Sticks..you On wood..from ya D.R votes..and now This nigga thinking he can Win with an Wind-resistant-Dick...//(Can you Nope)"
right this one, im afraid was a bit, well on the doaty side, it was meaningless, or maybe too many meanings, but wotever it was it didnt stick well, you want them to fuse together in the one idea atleast, or maybe 2, you had a bit too many...

"Take the Shot-gun-out-ya-Pic..putt’n this Nig.. In mo-heat..than Black-Fans..at a Nazi-Gig...(Gig = Show)
Tripple K's to your Dome..that'll Cross-n-Split ya Wig...it's the Law-of-Newton..the way Im Stuffin-this-Fig...//(Fig Newton)
I Merked-this-Prick...Hurt-ya-Spit...youll never be the Big-Pitcure in B.K..even if ya Stood-next-to-B.I.G..
You to Busy looking at all the Non-vets-you-Did..its Plane-to-me. That you gett’n Murked like JFK-Did...//"
these last 4 lines were wierd, specially 1st one, being that nazis were against jews, not blacks ;). The second line was aight, not bad meta in it, but you aint gettin any strong punches across. Last two lines were by far the best in your verse, had some punches, more to the point, and an ok finishing line, but you gotta at the end like do everything man, spot on flow, punches, multis, metas, rhyme, everything, you did multis, punches, rhyme, all not bad, but your flow was bit off and there was poor metas.

breaking down G's now, sorry for long post, but pointless going "Joe won cos he ruled this newb ass" etc.......

"you aint voilent, my dick could beat you & its longer than your record put together/
words with no action so you say you as violent as a snake claim your rhyme is slick..but its pure leather/"
now this is more like an opener, nice flow, punches dead on target, bit long i think for first lines, but still the rest made up for it.

"look you can’t match-me-lyrically cause Ill smack-you-literally leave your body floating in water like the statue-of-liberty/
your world will end severed both your arms now you got no girl friend, you like a bulimic patient the way you hurl n bend/"
first line here was ill, very tight, spot on everything. Second was alright, not very strong, but not bad at all still.....

"like shirts with collars, your not allowed in you hood, ill wreck-you-good 'behead' your ass if you mess in this 'neck-of-the-woods'/
Violent is miserable, he has to pay for joy, i 'checked' his rhyme, its not worth a dime..im a teller to make it void/
chop you like loin..you couldn’t touch my text even if you were my paper-boy/"
These were nice, last let it down though, finish with a stronger one, in close battles, the last line often gives you that extra edge needed to win. First two were nice though, could of used them and merked him over all.
Vote: G-Unit