RBTL Championship: [Champ]Phrantik (3-0) vs. 13th Disciple (3-0)
 

Check in's by Monday
Verses by Tuesday
Voting ends Thursday

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Topic...
Rags to riches

Checkin In Now.......The Belt WIll Be Mine...................................
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Mad Man: Well at least he's confident...Maybe a little too confident

phrantic gonna losse

Mad Man: Glad to hear that, now I know that your vote will not count.

i don't know if phrantik is even gonna check in...........but if he does or doesn't i'm still gonna drop mine right now......hold on....

Rags To Riches


Life of a certain single mother


at the age of eleven raped by her stepfather her own mother
kicked her out on the streets/pleading for help to relatives but
getting denied for months she steadily weeps

livin in boxes eating like canines selling her ass before her
stomach starts to protrude/surrounded by drunken men and
prostitutes askin God why her dad chose her vagina to intrude

solitude in her mind alone and abandoned wishin in a way her
and the baby would die/but afraid to go to the clinic about a
burning itch she started feelin after being raped by the last guy

she wonders why a day feels like a week a week lik a month a
month feels like eternal continuous pain/watchin other little girls
playing enjoyin thier lives realizin that hers would never be the
same

introduced to cocaine and crack was told this white lady would
take all her troubles away/couple of hits from the pipe she awoke
wit a woman eating her out whisperin..'no.....stop.....i'm not gay'

the word 'play' was takin out of her mind and replaced wit anger
confusion and torment/squattin down in the woods to take a piss
wanting to ask somebody what those sores meant

can an angel be sent to protect and deliver her from the hands
of drunken and perverted men/or would she wake up in a motel
wit bruises and cuts her rectum internally bleeding again

dreamin of ten when at that age her real father was alive and she
was surrounded in riches/only a couple of months her mother
grieved now she finds herself pregnant and surrounded by
bitches

twenty two stitches she had to get on her breast after a drunk
wanted to roleplay acted the part of Ike/but for the first time she
found herself in a hospital for the first time she was actually
gettin treated right

she stayed for more than a couple of nights undergoing mulitple
and numerous tests/the doctor walked in and said i'm sorry theres an infection we're gonna have to take and remove one of
ur breasts

didn't have time to catch her breath cuz the doc followed up and
said i need to tell u more/u been infected wit Hiv Gonnoreah
Syphilis and Herpes is the reason for them sores

theres one more thing u should know ur baby will be born crippled
and blind that is if he'll ever be born at all/the reason for that is
either u got kicked in the stomach or u took a five story high fall

she bore it all and as the doctor left she laid in the bed and
slowly started closing her eyes/tryin not to dwell on the rapings
abuses diseases negative news and the guys in between her
thighs

to her surprise she felt a sudden peace overwhelm her as though
there was a presence in her room/then she heard a familiar voice
saying daughter u been livin in RAGS now its time for the RICHES
the RICHES will be quicker than soon

about a quarter to noon the nurse entered her room ready to
change her and scan for her vitals/she didn't know what to call
the girl cuz the girl didn't remember her name so Jane Doe wuz
her given title

she brought her some Midol and tried to wake her but the girl
layed in bed and wouldn't make a peep/realizing whats going on
the nurse screamed CODE BLUE understanding she already
reached the point of an eternal deep sleep

many weeks passes the girl and her baby was buried together
both of them still remained unknown/but secretely only the nurse
knew who she was......cuz the nurse was the one who put her
out on her own.....


.....from RAGS to RICHES.....for at times........death.....is better than life....................let us pray.........................





















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-check- was outta town so
i should post tommorrow or tuesday.
works is a bitch.

That was a great verse 13, this is gonna be a great battle.

DAMN THAS GUN B HARD TO BEAT....I THINK U MIGHT WIN BUT LES C TIK'S ..

Rags to Riches…Nobody changes.

Who do you think you are?
Wearing a body that isn’t yours
Running around, like typical whores
You look so different
Bust increases while shirts shrink
You show it off, not having to think

and nobody changes.
Rags to riches.
Remain the same
Despite your wishes
So don’t even try
You’ll just be let down
Always the same
But wearing a frown

Who do you think you are?
A new name, that doesn’t fit
playing tag with the law.. they're it!
You live in a shadow
Away from family and friends
But you’ll end up in cuffs by the end.

and nobody changes.
Rags to riches.
Remain the same
Despite your wishes
So don’t even try
You’ll just be let down
Always the same
But wearing a frown

Who do you think you are?
money can’t affect the way you act
escape the past but it will come back
You won the lottery
And will remain trailer trash
Try to save it but spend it on hash

and nobody changes.
Rags to riches.
Remain the same
Despite your wishes
So don’t even try
You’ll just be let down
Always the same
But wearing a frown

Who do you think I am?
A baby bird that needs to spread his wings
Move up and on to better things
But nobody changes
Its been said again and again
I just have to wait for the game to begin

And ill never change
Rags to riches
Ill be the same
Despite my wishes
So I wont even try
Ill just be let down
Exactly the same
But wearing a frown

I'm going to be honest, Tik you tryed really hard with that, but I didn't like it at all. I truly think that 13 took this battle, it was close, but I felt....I don't know....Cheated out of a typical Phrantik ending. Maybe you set yourself up with all your dope verses. but Ima go 13 with this one.

Vote=13th Disciple

hey baby, that was deep and i respect u for bringin that to the open, holla at yo gurl, u know where im at

yeah 13 got this one no doubt, they were both real deep and both real good but 13 u brought tears to the eyes so you go my vote

fuck. 0-2.

good battle g...........i honestly expected more from u....but all in
all it was pretty nice........................lets come wit the votes........1

same.......tik..............sorrry to say this but u mite loose yo title belt to 13th.....he took this one.........yo verse i know u could n should've dun it a lot better..........u coudl have taken this if u had a different approach to this.........

i choose not to depress readers so i chose a deeper
meaning which was hidden identity.
it was my approach, therefore i couldnt have done better.
stop sayin i could do things i tried to do, but couldnt.
this topic wasnt a good one for me, sorry to let my ryders down.

yo....off the subject right quick....why is trill saying he merked me in r.b.t.l?....when i NEVER lost a topical battle?.....whateva.......anotha busta................back to the votes..1

everyone has pretty much explained this...

good drops from both but 13 took this one....

cant wait to see a rematch to this for the belt....

vote- 13th Disciple

yo.....over a hundred something views and like 17 posts?......can we get some votes up in this beyaatch?!...................................1

phrantik your dick is nice.
can i ride it more?

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umm i was expectin phrantik to come out good... but i didn't see what i was expectin, the way he had it kinda threw me off guard
i like 13th disciple by the way he did it, i was feelin him consistantly like i do to all of his topic battles

didn't have time to catch her breath cuz the doc followed up and
said i need to tell u more/u been infected wit Hiv Gonnoreah
Syphilis and Herpes is the reason for them sores

theres one more thing u should know ur baby will be born crippled
and blind that is if he'll ever be born at all/the reason for that is
either u got kicked in the stomach or u took a five story high fall



deeeeeeep shit there...13... the way u do this shit... it makes me think how ya life is.... you make it sound like u walked in those shoes

nice verse 13th . . .





























. . . you flaming fag :)

vote 13th i think he approached this topic better n shit........ he came sicker............ i expected much more from tik........... 13th all round better
good battle yall


vote 13th

my god....13th verse almost made me cry....it really hit home......although it really wasnt fair seeing 13ths verse first...too much to try and topple....

vote=13

Ding Ding........Introducing The New Champion Of The World...............13th DISCIPLE!!!!!!!.............'basically i just wanna thank the lord cuz without him this would've of never been possible......and like to thank my opponent for not puttin up a fight and makin the W come easy....lol.........and basically my strategy wuz just to come out bobbin and weevin....while throwin sick punches to the dome........thank u for the challenge....'

good shit 13th
that shit was crazt tight

vote=13th

Definity 13th Disciple got dis shit. Man this was a good battle but Phrantik looks like ya lost your title dawg. But yo both were aight but 13's was fuckin off da hook. His shit was fuckin crazy
Props dawg!!!

Vote=13th Disicple