Un-Skrypted (2-0) vs. Vortex (2-0)
 

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Topic...
In the End

Weird topic, should be a good battle though.

P3 represent!

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Nathan Peake Died, Got Sent To Hell And. .


Death's soul stared me down, as blood poured from my face
Id reached the end of the line, hit Rock Bottom at great pace.
Theres a faint taste of Brimstone, Quiet pattern of rats scutter
this is the heart of death, no hope of Raising Hell. . like Satans Mother.
Just the echoes of lost souls trapped in an infinite nightmare
Insights clear. . i knew id died, but really - why am i here?
Im not from a christian background, never bowed to a cross
always been the type to slap the shit outta kids saying "Im God"
maybe i was a lost cause, but that still dosent explain to me
why now ive died, im sentenced to hell, away from my family.
A family who never cared, never showed me love growing up
yet dads not here - that means that Gods a prejudist fuck.
Im sorry i wasnt perfect, Mr. In-so-fucking-vincible
sorry i smoked in middle school and went against your principles.
But if getting into Heaven means being told what to do -
then im glad that you sent me to hell, faggot, fuck you!

If you had a choice, would you live however you wanted
or do what you were told to do - and never oppose shit?
Gods way is really his way, for believers with no beliefs
Id rather live One day as a Tiger than 1000 as a sheep.

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Ill write and post for this tonight... kinda a lame topic tho :(
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Aight here we go...

I Tried so hard... and gone so far..... but in the end..... it doesnt even matter

lol

GL fam

The blade of envy reflects hidden promise inside
The dissappointmens collide with the times that I've tried
I pride myself with depression, question ways of religion
Non-existant in faith, success was merely forbidden
A witting tool of a sin, within the death of a hope
Sure I could change, but feelings the same.... me and God are remote
I've coped with struggle enough, a rough life at a glance
But the past will change...lived a small life to plot the largest of plans
Advanced to stronger degrees, my knees clinsed with blood
Yet I struggled for ease, my counscious clinched my gut
But I tolerate pain, straining to move I grabbed the dream from the star
Fell from beauty in awe, then reflected the sight to see my hideous scars
Eyes darting around, I wait for the time that Heaven's silent asleep
Discreet deception to cheat, a man's rapture to reap as diobolical flees
I penetrated success, no room for remorse, with jealousy in my chest
The promise smiled with a jest, but hate consumed his resort until my envy digest
His breathe fell warm on my face, I traced his moments in life to mock his success
The man's parents were dead, received his money from will, and did as Bibles suggest
Now Im living with gold, jewells, and plenty of riches, existance obsessed
But no matter the day, in the end I know, Im merely walking with death

Votes?!

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I put it in the Slept On thread... hopefully they'll come one year.............
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Hello? *Echoes..*

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shit this was a fuckin hot battle
both came ill.......vortex's verse was sick i was feelin that alot
and un also came ill as fuck
both stories were good.......pretty much equal
flow was on point from both
vocab goes to Un

overall i have to go on the one i liked most and Vortex's edged it by the finest margin.....liked the story a bit more and also share similar view on the shit he said
vote=vortex

1-0 for vortex.......
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Un, I knew when I read your opening verse, that this would be dope, and it was. Good drop my friend.
Vote=Unskrypted

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Werd.

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i like un in this 1, i just was feelin his shit mo... the topics were done equal i think but just liked un's mo
hit up my battle even tho a2z didn't post... i jsut want some feedback on how ya think i did
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=55102

Vote kiddies. .

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Quit sleeping.

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dammit, ima lose cause of sleepers - lol.

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Or cause Im winning 2-1.... lol jp

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Voting ended yesterday anyways so I dont think mods accept late votes.. i dunno tho.

Deffinately too ill a battle to be slept on