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Mad Man 06-07-03 09:17 PM

Heavyweight Title:[Champ] Evolve (5-0) vs. Sand (4-1)
 
Check in's by Monday
Verses by Tuesday
Voting ends Thursday

No D.R. or hata votes
10-30 lines max
No bolding or quoting of lines to make them stick out

Kosta 06-08-03 09:09 PM

I am in....G'Luck
Evolve....You Herb
You....

Evolve 06-09-03 09:11 AM

Uh-OH... Im In... This Should Be A Doozy!!!

Kosta 06-10-03 06:04 PM

hi evolve...


We wonder where you got your new name from...
A big bang, college male orgy in the fraternity, thats gay son..
Like ... damn well nevermind i got sidetracked, shit son.
umm madman. you are who you assosciate with right..
add to rules 'dejure will not be voting on this one'...:)
now on with the battle, determinated no need to hold back...
i admit it. evolve is the truth. and you ain't even gotta
watch baseball, to see sandy KO facts...stupid hoe fag
make it a slow gag, spitting rich, you really shouldn't
your syles so plain, people are skydiving from it...
plummet to your fall, flail, end by landing on some trees,
you think your hot? you MUST be napping through reality...
ending up a casualty battling me, heard sage, inheriting scars
felt determined to keep the title, so you bought a fuckin' car
your stupid, riding coatails, you can't stand up to god...
nor me for the matter, consider this serving belated foo'
and always remember, a fucking failure created you....

DaMn....

If you ain't get the personals...
don't vote...pz

x-signals 06-10-03 07:30 PM

im sorry but i just wanna know one thing before i vote is this suppose to rhyme or is it one of those things that dont cause if it is i cant find the rhyme scheme can ya show me ?

Kosta 06-10-03 09:07 PM

the scheme is there...
read it...

Evolve 06-10-03 10:58 PM

good luck sand


man, this sucks!! i have to battle Sand... Damn!!!
i feel bad, I didnt want to have destroy my biggest fan!!//
listen Stan.. this is just for fun, i consider it to be a game
but your taking it too far when i look at your Title and see my Name//
i know im your idol, but thats just a shame.. its not right
the voters are Blind to his Writes, so he uses Evolve as a Spot Light//
dawg, this is not an Open Mic... you know you cant battle as well
cant Walk in my Shoes.. im too Big for Defeat, so i hand Sand L's//
*shhh.. in the backround Eva yells: "Leave My Man Alone!!!"*
High as hell, I Sling this Shot and Kill both these Birds with One Stone//
you should have never shown, didnt want to beat you.. they pushed me
now i have to Gay Bash.. why else would Eva be in love w/ a Pussy??//
i did a search and seen the pic you posted.. Sand.. why'd you do it??
im battling that Geek from "Cant Hardly Wait" w/ Jennifer Love Hewitt!!//
ahhh, screw it... who cares, skills dont depend on the look of your mug
cause God Loves Ugly.. so he must Adore you, looking as ugly as Slug//
your old record gets swept under the rug & your new one arises
everyone knew you would lose but you... Sand must Love Surprises!?!?//

when its all said and done, i really have to admire this kid on his persistance
its just to bad i had to send you back where you came From: Non-Existence
& from now on when it comes to battling me, keep your distance... loser
im always gonna be 3 Times better then you.. [1]Past, [2]Present & [3]Phuture//

***HIS TITLE USE TO SAY "AVE EVOL I" BUT HE CHANGED IT BECAUSE OF MY 2ND BAR** cough cough.. bitch.. cough cough lol

Kosta 06-11-03 04:18 AM

lol..WordZ..Votes?

TrIfLiN 06-11-03 10:18 AM

I dont know, Evolve Gets my Vote on This shit...
From Start to Finish, All lInes Was Dope..KInda of
Reminded me of me..lol
Nice Battle Yall..



Vote E..

Evolve 06-11-03 10:46 AM

lol... good look Trife... 1-0

& Sand no beef dawg... just for fun

Chrit 06-11-03 12:05 PM

Evolve took this one...
LMFAO at x-signals not seeing sand's ryhme scheme

but evolve took this with better punches and personals....


vote- evolve

x-signals 06-11-03 12:08 PM

lol yeah i see it now but its long as fuck lmao look


add to rules 'dejure will not be voting on this one'...
now on with the battle, determinated no need to hold back...
i admit it. evolve is the truth. and you ain't even gotta
watch baseball, to see sandy KO facts...stupid hoe fag


i see it now i just think that those are just hella stretched lines and it made the flow horriable

but his punchs were actually doper than evole's i'll hit this up later gotta break it down

Kosta 06-11-03 02:01 PM

DaMniT nO!
0-2...VoTeZ?!

Ohh X. Thanks
For Seeing It.
Those Lines Are
Not Hella' Streched.
It Is The Next Line...
That Is The Scheme...


^ThaTz WoRdZ^

x-signals 06-11-03 02:51 PM

well okay i think i spent an hour tryna find out ya scheme lol but after i did i thought it made ya verse more complex and intresteding to read plus ya punchs were on the top anyways i dunno everyone has there own opinion but i think sand got this comparin the 2 best lines of each verse

[b]ending up a casualty battling me, heard sage, inheriting scars
felt determined to keep the title, so you bought a fuckin' car[/b


lmao damn that was heat ^^^

i gave ya verse a 7.6/10


and evole

you came regular with the same basic structre but nothin bad but just plain

like here

dawg, this is not an Open Mic... you know you cant battle as well
cant Walk in my Shoes.. im too Big for Defeat, so i hand Sand L's//

big nono we all know defeat and L lines are played

i gave ya verse a 6.9/10

vote sand

Evolve 06-11-03 03:28 PM

2-1

Kosta 06-11-03 03:45 PM

NO NO NO!!! I CHANGED IT BEFORE YOUR VERSE
HERB MOTHER FUCKER!!! LOL.......

It's All Fun And Games....:)


2-1.....

Dez 06-11-03 04:14 PM

Quote:
Originally posted by Evolve
good luck sand


man, this sucks!! i have to battle Sand... Damn!!!
i feel bad, I didnt want to have destroy my biggest fan!!//
listen Stan.. this is just for fun, i consider it to be a game
but your taking it too far when i look at your Title and see my Name//
i know im your idol, but thats just a shame.. its not right
the voters are Blind to his Writes, so he uses Evolve as a Spot Light//
dawg, this is not an Open Mic... you know you cant battle as well
cant Walk in my Shoes.. im too Big for Defeat, so i hand Sand L's//
*shhh.. in the backround Eva yells: "Leave My Man Alone!!!"*
High as hell, I Sling this Shot and Kill both these Birds with One Stone//
you should have never shown, didnt want to beat you.. they pushed me
now i have to Gay Bash.. why else would Eva be in love w/ a Pussy??//
i did a search and seen the pic you posted.. Sand.. why'd you do it??
im battling that Geek from "Cant Hardly Wait" w/ Jennifer Love Hewitt!!//
ahhh, screw it... who cares, skills dont depend on the look of your mug
cause God Loves Ugly.. so he must Adore you, looking as ugly as Slug//
your old record gets swept under the rug & your new one arises
everyone knew you would lose but you... Sand must Love Surprises!?!?//

when its all said and done, i really have to admire this kid on his persistance
its just to bad i had to send you back where you came From: Non-Existence
& from now on when it comes to battling me, keep your distance... loser
im always gonna be 3 Times better then you.. [1]Past, [2]Present & [3]Phuture//

***HIS TITLE USE TO SAY "AVE EVOL I" BUT HE CHANGED IT BECAUSE OF MY 2ND BAR** cough cough.. bitch.. cough cough lol


lol....evovled rocked it..his whole verse from start to end....Sand was alright but he lacked personals..
i did a search and seen the pic you posted.. Sand.. why'd you do it??
im battling that Geek from "Cant Hardly Wait" w/ Jennifer Love Hewitt!!//

^^the best part in this battle

Evolve 06-11-03 04:35 PM

im gonna clean this up...

i did... its 3-1 me... you had a pretty nice verse Sand... Good Luck

Kosta 06-11-03 04:36 PM

lol...thx evolve...hit me on yahoo
homo...DoSaGeiSeGaSoD....WerDz

**EDIT: I DONT HAVE YAHOO NO MORE... EMAIL ME
RICHNICE3000@HOTMAIL** EvOlVe

Mystery~murdera 06-11-03 05:22 PM

this was easy for me, evolve just had too many personals and harder punches. His shit was like the tide, cuz it was just eatin away at the sand. <--- shoulda saved that. n/e ways sand u my boy but he got u on this one. Evolves flow, wording, and personals were beautiful.

vote - evolve.

Mystery~murdera 06-11-03 05:24 PM

oh yea ps this was sic

Quote:
& from now on when it comes to battling me, keep your distance... loser
im always gonna be 3 Times better then you.. [1]Past, [2]Present & [3]Phuture//
lol, creative.

Kosta 06-11-03 05:24 PM

4-1....OuCh!

Chrit 06-11-03 05:46 PM

little freepost here guys...

I have a proposed rule change for next week....

It would only allow voters with 250 or more posts to vote on championship battles... it would eliminate the new kids from swaying the votes. (peep the x-signals bout)


Tell me what you think...

7curse 06-11-03 06:24 PM

yo...this whole damn thang had evolve written on it. i was laughin tha whole time.. raw shyt evolve.

vote=+=evolve

Mystery~murdera 06-12-03 05:57 PM

yo evolve do me a fava dawg, explain the ugly as slug line... lol, cuz it seem u was just rhymin... who/what is slug?

Evolve 06-12-03 08:03 PM

Slug is from the group called Atmospher... there record is God Loves Ugly... i think... he has a pic of him in his avatar

G.Hod 06-12-03 08:18 PM

LOL, Evolve's my partner and Sand's family.. But, I have to make a choice, and I'll go with Evolve.

I don't want to frown upon Sand's verse, it was really good with an original rhyme scheme and style.. But Evolve's punches seemed wittier and more personal.

H I G H L I G H T S

Sand: "now on with the battle, determinated no need to hold back...
i admit it. evolve is the truth. and you ain't even gotta
watch baseball, to see sandy KO facts" hahaha, christ, a dope line.

Evolve: "*shhh.. in the backround Eva yells: "Leave My Man Alone!!!"*
High as hell, I Sling this Shot and Kill both these Birds with One Stone//
you should have never shown, didnt want to beat you.. they pushed me
now i have to Gay Bash.. why else would Eva be in love w/ a Pussy??//
i did a search and seen the pic you posted.. Sand.. why'd you do it??
im battling that Geek from "Cant Hardly Wait" w/ Jennifer Love Hewitt!!//" hahahaha, christ, personals galore.. The champ did his research!

Sand gave the best fight of the contenders for the title yet, but, fell short.. Respect to both, Piece.

VOTE: Evolve

Evolve 06-13-03 09:14 AM

Appreciated Lyricali

I guess its a wrap... nice battle Sand... Thought you had a nice verse... Peace

Kosta 06-13-03 02:58 PM

Good Battle...pZ...

Evolve Wins 7-0 *HW CHAMP!*
Sand Loses 4-2

Mad Man 06-13-03 08:55 PM

This is Chrit's Job, it is no longer mine. Just FYI, oh and Sand, read your PM's

Chrit 06-13-03 09:52 PM

shit will be updated and matchups made on Sun...

sorry about the day late but there is some serious shit going on

Mad Man 06-13-03 10:12 PM

Your telling me. Last time I checked I have two people that have faith in me...
Sureal & Sand.
The Cheese Stands Alone :(


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