B.R.E prezents:Mind drug.....a little on the poetic side let me know what youthink
 

the vision in my head was ethreal
so fake and real
luring me to provoke the unreal
it's making me hallucinate
like a drug or an addiction
that i hate
my brain is blurry causing pain that i anticipate
my thoughts begin to fade
trying to escape
like over my shoulder like a saint
causing nothing but pain
going insane
hard to tame this game that i play
memories suddenly happy but visionly scary
full of poetic theory
full of my lifes memory
wheres this talent i need to contain
wheres all the words that i can't explain
it makes me dizzy
my rhymes scattered there fizzy
constantly busy
inside my skull
waiting to release ready to pull
using a pen as an escaping tool
away from society
full of illusions variety
flowing away high above me
for all the world to see the true visions
all of my lifes execussions
blistered fingers turning lyrically abusive
never conclusive
my writings a sickness
my minds illness
my hands need to drain
my internal pain
leaving stains
across a paper
my own hands a thought raper
as if the grim reaper has taken my body and
left nothing but soul and words
it's absurd
how can a mind think so much
it's disturbed
my bodies concerned
cause still there is nothing that it's learned....

uppin don't sleep on this one

This was Nice....I really Liked it.........Uppin for my Fam

thank you Bash

this was good...

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i'm never gettin'
my meds' it seems...


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damn..

tight tight tight tight fam UPPIN!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Uppin for da Family

uhhh if i had three words to respond to this it would be
Mad Crazy Hot!!!!
this was ill
and nonetheless a bit of the poetry side, but combines both elements(rappin and Poetry) together to form an awesome drop...

uppin for Famz

Uppin

Not Bad
I weas feelin this a lil

thankz alot people

uppin this piece

Eviley...good shit right here...reppin for the Fam....I like this poet-rap...keep bangin

thanks fam......and for every compliment on here

yo, I was feelin' the poetic delivery to this.. 'cause if you had-a done it in bars it wouldn't've flowed at all.. all I gotta say is you're pro'lly hte most creative in BRE.. switchin' style on a constant an' shit.. I usually don't reply to your shit but trust I do read them..

Well, yea it was on the poetic tip. Didn't have any sort of flow to it. Imagery is good, and vocabulary was used nicely. Had a picture in my mind as well. Not bad girl, I hope Sand's treatin' you good, or I'll text-whip his ass . . . LOL

thank you weezy.......and wow Blunt-MC kinda of in shock that you would reply to my shit but thank you alot....i appreciate it...

UPPIN

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