Tha_sandman vs kerr dezzy
 

10-20 lines
no dr crew or hate votes,
no biting recycling or edieing tha battle verse
5 ta win no ko,
you spit first ill spit a half hour after you post

where you at nigga. are you beatin off to that hentai shit again(lol) i thought i told you about that.J/K
but for real lets juss get this over with cuz at the end of this battle one of us it goona be having nightmares and it aint me, cuz im tha sandman..

dawg in bitchslapped it said you were spittin 1st
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reread what you posted in there you said you would............................................. ..................

my bad i read it wrong ill be postin in a lil bit still gotta rite it................................................ ...................................

no i said fo you to first

here's what ya said

who wants it, set it up 10 lines,no editin ill spit furst,
i'll send link if ya want me 2

Nuff of dat he said she said bullshit
if u gonna spit SPIT
if u not then leave dis site or keep praticin
tha bigger man go first and dat gives you points for ya votes.
i wanna c sumin
cmon

aiight
holla
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kerrdezzy, my verse is like a whirlwind, cuz my rhymes get you dizzy,
all you punches are juss like your girls "they miss me", you cant hit me,
in tha time you pop 9 shots i can pull 50*, even when im high or tipsy,(drunk)

elements elite**, shit ill shove all their teeth down their throat fid my feet,
youll be shittin out teeth for weeks, while im up at tha top reachin my peak,
wait, stop, dont speak, its midnight nigga so this verse is puttin you to sleep***,

its like a drive by where you run out of bullet and get a flat,
you better run becuz my mack is goona end up splittin ya back in half,
here we go lets do tha math, my rhymes plus my gunz = kerrdezzy in a bloodbath,
i might turn into a salad bar and start slicin these vegtible herbs in half,

you may be still matic**** but my guns is automatic, and Quiet it sounds like stattic,
wanna see a demonstratin, ok you asked for it, lets see how well you can catch a bullet,




Explinations
* fifty cent got shot 9 times
**Elements Elite is his crew
***my name is tha sandman, Tha sandman puts people to sleep
****his avy is nas stillmatic

spelling errors i messed up
second line second word is supposed to be "YOUR" not "YOU"
line 4 error third word from the end is "WID" not "FID"

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i'll make this nig dissapear like a fat kid who got a hand on the fig newtons,
better yet i'll cause you mass confusion by mircuosly winnin this battle(not) like houdini won bets with phycics blew away by this opitc allusion,
i bet when ya wrote that there ya forgot to cross ya t's n do ya i's,
this site be half free n half slaves of mine... something like the missouri compromise,
you ain't lyrically inclined cuz i got ya misoraly tranqulized,( missouri-misory)
this cat is middle weigth but should be a newb cuz yet to find his 1st pub,
he had a graduation after he became n battle me like his dick finally spued,
when he posted his shit rhymes around midnight it was too dark fo him to find a logical peace of his mind,
wit that spit i shove them back ya ass higha than pike's peak which is too high for you to climb n revise those lines,
before this battle began i had visions that this cat wanted beef,
thought i'd be decent enough so i whippe out a can of whoop ass in yo face so i wouldn't hafta hear you shreak,
cock back n release is what i did but didn't know h'ed be like the beastie boys n become a freak,
i bury you on the beach so The Sandman belongs to rest n peice while he sinks

good verse. uppin for some votes ill vote on other ppls battle if they vote here, juss post a link and ill hit it up tomorrow when i get home if it aint closed.

I gotta say, dis one was tough. You both had punches that were equal and some creative rhymes
Sorry but I had a hard time reading KerrDezzy's stuff out loud.
jus din sound rite

Vote=Tha_Sandman

Peace

uppin for some votes ill vote on other ppls battle if they vote here, juss post a link and ill hit it up tomorrow when i get home if it aint closed.

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aight Kerrdizzy took this one with out a prob everything was better im not a big one for long lines but its yo style cool.... Peace

Ok i'm a break it down like this........................

Punches=KD
Flow=TS
Wordplay=TS
Creativity=KD
Multi's=Kd
Meta's=KD
Overall=KD

I have to say KD. . but I hate that long bar crap. Shorten it and the flow would be a LOT better.

Vote- KD

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uppin fo mo poll votes
3-1 in the polls
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agreed

just read it mo people, i keep a couple rhymes into 1 line to keep the flow goin if ya looked at it deeper..................................thanks fo the votes
1 mo poll vote n this shit is locked

Vote on this shit and i'll come back with an honest vote:

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=55642

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My vote is for Tha SandMan

KerrDezzy verse was kinda hard to read and I couldnt figure out how he wanted to say things.

On the other hand:

Tha Sandman had some good punches and was better structured w/ a couple of flaws.

Fav line:
in tha time you pop 9 shots i can pull 50

My vote=Tha Sandman

No hard feelins
aiight
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this site be half free n half slaves of mine... something like the missouri compromise"
That line by Kerr earned my vote....that shit was sick dogg...keep elevatin!!1