Unfinished Bisuness - Through The Eyes Of Bin Laden
 

Okay this shit we dont condone or nethin we jus need to tell it through the eyes of a terrorist (we aint terrorists )

Hook (WOOSH)
Now before yo all start makin me sound evil see it through my eyes/
All of the guns given to us, trying to lift the opprestion but really it was america who tell the lies/
so with those sam weapons & useing americas richest mans software to cut off all our ties/
11 o'clock on tuesday september the 11 2001 New York sadness & dust/
next day 12 of september 2001 already the news papers make it sound like old metal with rust/
look @ terrorism in the dictionary : yse of violence & itimidation, especially for political purpose/
ye thats me doing it for politcal reasons but thing is i didnt use the army surplus/

MRB
It’s been a good year on from the plan of domination/
Which started off with joy, then ended in mission termination/
You see this is a civil war coz im against some others of my dictionary term/
But when those two have got a bigger arsenal, all I can do is sit and learn/
They’ve led more people astray than poor extremist me/
And although terrors not been applied it will be, ull see/
Lets get back to me the bearded one, I try to justify my actions/
But to read my proof ud have to split the Koran up into tiny fractions/
Forget all the love, in the Islamic brotherhood/
Decimate all the non believers like a good Muslim should/
The key to the world is in the wrong hands and its running out- Tick Tock/
So ill have to use some common wire, to fumble and break loose the lock/
My faiths all good but down trodden faces will soon turn a lot more funny shade of sour/
My own brothers must fall themselves if im indeed to gain power/
For now though ill keep them steady, they’ll come runing at my beckon call/
Yes looking through the eyes of Osama I seem to see it all/


Hook (WOOSH)
Now before yo all start makin me sound evil see it through my eyes/
All of the guns given to us, trying to lift the opprestion but really it was america who tell the lies/
so with those sam weapons & useing americas richest mans software to cut off all our ties/
11 o'clock on tuesday september the 11 2001 New York sadness & dust/
next day 12 of september 2001 already the news papers make it sound like old metal with rust/
look @ terrorism in the dictionary : yse of violence & itimidation, especially for political purpose/
ye thats me doing it for politcal reasons but thing is i didnt use the army surplus/


Woosh
I train my minoins to do my dirty work i used there biggest biueness agaisnt them/
a bigger version of 1994 bomb n a boom goes the world trade centre again/
this time im not using a bomb im using a plane, though its not me driving/
i said id be there but unknown to my minoins im gonna be skiving/
what ive done is for us muslims who need freedom from appresion from the west/
the western civilisation has become supreme & appresion down with them time for the new best/
im all alone in these caves its just me n these goats /
my hormones start pumping, i crave sexual expeince, so i make them lick my scroat/
This joint goes out to all the terriorist all across the world all join forces/
IRA, Taliban, any muslim extremeist, start a comotion once we start we cant be stoped like a pack of horses/
Cmon merge togeather I started us of by sending those towers crashing/
I let the apcolypse go the 5 horsemen of death, the power now hell is lashing/

Hook (WOOSH)
Now before yo all start makin me sound evil see it through my eyes/
All of the guns given to us, trying to lift the opprestion but really it was america who tell the lies/
so with those sam weapons & useing americas richest mans software to cut off all our ties/
11 o'clock on tuesday september the 11 2001 New York sadness & dust/
next day 12 of september 2001 already the news papers make it sound like old metal with rust/
look @ terrorism in the dictionary : yse of violence & itimidation, especially for political purpose/
ye thats me doing it for politcal reasons but thing is i didnt use the army surplus/

:whacky:

yo give us feedback dudes

Wasnt really eelin this AT ALL!!!!

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lmao your a punk!
fo real
kid this maybe not the dopest but its an ill concept
imma check yo rhymes u sorry arshole!

Dude Ha Ha Ha
go ahead read my Ryhmes

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yo sum of your rhymes are xtremely good i admit, yo 1st piece of the cranium, otherwise yo using shitty shitey pointless multis that dont say shit this is a topical piece with thought yourz is just random rhyming


anyway enuff of the beef are piece
wot u think?

I ju swasnt feeling the whole topic of it
other than that it rymed and coulda been good but
Jus didnt feel the topic

YO Grym dude furry muff u saying are piece is wack but u gotta me more detailed and have reasons go ahead and state them

K fair enuff Grym

anyone else?

I didnt say it was wack either yo
read

This is what i hated about it
the whole america lies shit
Hook (WOOSH)
Now before yo all start makin me sound evil see it through my eyes/
All of the guns given to us, trying to lift the opprestion but really it was america who tell the lies/
so with those sam weapons & useing americas richest mans software to cut off all our ties/
11 o'clock on tuesday september the 11 2001 New York sadness & dust/
next day 12 of september 2001 already the news papers make it sound like old metal with rust/
look @ terrorism in the dictionary : yse of violence & itimidation, especially for political purpose/
ye thats me doing it for politcal reasons but thing is i didnt use the army surplus/

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Yo hes playing Bin Laden were speaking as if tho we are terrorists, its not we agree the whole piece is meant 2 be how we disagree with Osama's views and it doesnt make sense check my "actions,fractions" couplet

Well i didnt get it
You neeed to rewrite it
Other than that i said it was descent

OMG sleepers wake up and people start returning favours

up,up and away!

OMG GIZ US SOME DAMM FEEDBACK PEOPLE I HAVE GIVEN U ENUFF!

please

It was alright. I didnt like the hook at all, it flowed horrible, sounded sorta like a short talking verse, didnt like it. The verses were aight. You rhymed words that shouldn't have been rhymes like domination and termination - those words dont rhyme, jus because the ation part does. I think it could have been wrote better, just my honest opinion. keep em comin tho, elevate.

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k dawg, yo right about my first couplet i jus realised how much off that is, thankz

dawg i wasnt feeling this at all...i read half of it and stopped


the hook is too long and wordy for anyone to really want to sit down and read

the hook was garbage and pretty much took down the whole goodness of the piece, it had an ill concept, but it wasn't pulled off greatly

okay ye the hook was long but put that away what u think of the verse u even sed u stoped half way through so how can u tell u prolly jus read half of the verse so read it all !!!!

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The 2 verses m8 :-)

the hook was long but if u digest the words correctly ull find its well written by the man Woosh

yo i thought you guys had a good concept goin but you should've put a bit more effort into it .. the hook wasnt really catchy or nothin and the rhyme scheme was somewhat simple but all in all you guys had a few decent lines ... elevate `1

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clog up any of our threads again, we will merk u and put a dent in that clean battle record!

dunno bout the topic man, beet out of taste, that mutha fucka should be dead, the piece was not bad but in terms of skillz n shit

yeah what affiliate said

fair enuff, but we aint condoneing wot bin laden did we hate him the whole concept was to show thta bush and blair were terrorists to but bin laden cant justify wot he did

Okay this is the shit I hate.How come the same motherfuckas keep posting in the thread.They already gave their opinion what is the point of them keep coming back.Anyway this shit is wack as hell.You didnt set up your lines write.It was just horrible.the worst shit ever.!!Damn this shit hurted my eyes to read that is how bad it was.....Atl east you tried a new topic,but it didnt work.


From 1to 10,with 10 being the worst and 1 being the best I will give this a 100......bitch.

^ right i see ye ne way upping