Ra Ill (2-0) vs Nuclear Concepts (3-0)
 

Does italics count as highlighting?

just so some of these idiots can tell where the actual wordplay is?

and i'm going 10

ok im not wasting anytime to get another win .. even though you'll probably no show.

level 3.0

if you dont get the wordplay, ask before judging

He's ......

..as lame as the rest, leave ya brains on ya chest when i'm sprayin the gauge..
and don't you think its ironic your leavin with a record the same as ya age?!?
Choked with a wire, i'm winnin this shit, i'll leave you smoked in a fire
Said you were ill, but i'll slap you backwords ...we all know your a lliar
Get beaten and choked, ya breathin easing while i'm squeezin ya throat
I'll hang you from a school roof just to teach you the ropes!
..leave you sore from haiku's, AI? I storm through high crews..
I'd hand you an L ... but it looks like you already got 2 more than I do

So when..
..i'm aimin at ya arms with both of my 9's, then let this hoe taste it
i'll leave o's in ya chest, so from afar you really represent ya location


done with you.



Edited by Chrit to remove explanations

get rid of those explanations...

I'm just warning you cause there is only 3

(think about his location)
^^^

all those need to be gone

Checking In................................................ .................................................. .........................

...Ive been in the game longer then you
and I’ll go through-ya-object... / Couldn’t
think of anything fresh so he names
his self New-Clear-Concepts / You see
he only went 10 bars cuz he couldn’t
stand-a-chance / I’ll rip this poor boy so
hard that I’ll have his glands-in-my-hands /
You see your punches are played, And
your bout-to-get-slayed / If this is your
day job, Textceein, Then I doubt-you-
getting-paid / Watch me hit this bitch,
Your going on my rip list-like-this / Tried
to be dope, and diss my name well I’ll
get this bitch hit-with-fist / Whats your
Christmas wish, You want anal from
gay-men / I can tell by the way you
write you were raped in ya play-pen /

I can't edit my verse, or I would . Even though thats kinda gay, since most people won't know he's 21.

yo i was relly feelin ra ills verse son. MAd nice. This was a straight battles

punches-ra
multies-concepts
metas-concepts
wordplay-ra
structure-concepts
originality/creativity-ra
flow-ra
overall vote=ra

^bullshit. must not have gotten my punches .

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Concept came with a great begginer and closer..

He stayed on point for most of his verse, I give it a 6/10

Ra was okay, some okay punches..but nothing amazing

Ra deserves about a 4-5/10 this wasnt the best battle.

Vote goes to Concepts

Concept came with a great begginer and closer..

He stayed on point for most of his verse, I give it a 6/10

Ra was okay, some okay punches..but nothing amazing

Ra deserves about a 4-5/10 this wasnt the best battle.

Vote goes to Concepts

^I think theres a couple punches you missed too.

Damn I wish you fags wouldnt have taken away the explanations.

Not Much to Quote..In My Opinion Yall
However, Concepts Got This Battle..
Dope Opener, And At Times Fell Off..But Held On.

RA, Your Shit Just Wasnt Hard Hittin Meng..
Some Punches were cool, but that's about it..

Overall This Battle Was Wateva, But Hey..It Is What It Is...


Vote Concepts

dawg don't even worry bout that. It didn't go in the poll. I aint gotta enuff post(ps ps i am Criminal intent) so i did understand ya punches

i don't think you did, but okay .

well this was an ill battle from both of you I like ra ills verse but i was feeling nuclear concepts verse more.
I liked nuclear concepts
"Get beaten and choked, ya breathin easing while i'm squeezin ya throat
I'll hang you from a school roof just to teach you the ropes!"

That shit was the illest bar in my perspective but you had some other good personal punches that i liked


iight vote goes to Nuclear concepts

yeah that first vote was bullshit, this was obviously Nuclear. I Got all the L jokes LLiar n all that. I was on the verge of explaining them to other voters in my post but i know you got this already.

vote- Nuclear

word up, thanks . glad somebody finally got it

Yo aight both nice verses

but Concepts clearly took this wus better verse overall

Vote Concepts

I think I win 4-0, waddup. and still haven't tried a bit

Concepts....Handz Down.......Reason....Better Punches Wordplay Personals........Thats My Opinion....And It Is What It Is.........Vote=Nuclear Concepts................1

To me Nuclear took this one....Ra not bad man structure your stuff a little better....nuclear nice battle bro...it was slick the way u put that verse...............

and to end this session.....heres a piece of mine........


vote=Nuclear Concepts

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=57945

Closed we are starting a new league and new season so these matches dont really count for jack squat and your records wont be touched due to the out comes of these battles. Sign up for the new league and have fun. Thnx for everything in this season thou.