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Whiterap19 vs. Noiz
Rules:
You spit first 15-30 lines max No Hate No Dick Rydin Good Luck :) |
OH SHIT! I THOUGHT IT WAS 15-30 BARS! FUCK I ALWAYS FUCK UP WITH THAT SHIT...I'll Edit It...Thats WHy it Took me A LONG AS TIME To Write
Came Weak Too Ahahahahaha I JUST EDITED THE ENTIRE VERSE WITH NO BOLD! AHAHAHA NO MORE COMPLAINTS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!! Elastic-Hands-Beatin-Ya-Hopes...Im Toxic-To-Verbals Like Plastic-Crayons Jammed In Ya-Throat// White Cant Channel-My-Shit...Ya Pressin-Too-Many-Buttons-At-Once, Like Your Ass Is Jammed-With-A-TV-Remote// When I Read ya Verse, I’ve Stopped-To-See-Ya-Copied Me...Reachin The Hypothesis You Tryna Act Complex, With All Them Apostrophes// I Am Only Killing This Morgue In Text, Fuck Techs-And-Shit, Like Forums-Hackers, I’m, Liable To Malfunction Any You Niggas With Texted-Scripts// You’re Done Man I’m Peelin-Ya-Mind...Ya Copy Out-Of-Date-Material Like Stealing And Old Issue Of The New-York-Times// It Backfires In-The-End, Because I Flip-The-Puns...Crush Long-Winded-Keys, Cause Im Known To Shift-Ya-Lungs// With Clips-And-Guns...Like Holdin Weight On The Ladder-Of-Success, Kid, You’ve Slipped-A-Rung// I’ll Rap Until You Are Completely-Wrapped-In-Plastic, Send You back To Plain (Plane)-Rhymes Because Your Fleet-Is-Dead...Kid Seize-The-Moment...I Got An Arsenal-Of-Sharpshooters That Will Seize-Ya-Head// Punches Devacination, I Throw Mass Punched-Up-Sermons, In Frustration In Multiple Nostalgic-Infatuation// White Couldnt Cum (Come) Ill If He Had Herpes While He Was In Masturbation// I Implode This Drone In Cryptic-Carange-Mode Until He Explodes// He Couldnt Rock-My-World if He Threw Stones At A Globe// Dynastics Of Strife, Cut-The-Shit?, In That Case White Might As Well Fart-On-A-Knife// Ya Couldnt Blow My Shit Up If Ya Filled My Ass With Dynamite!// (Ahahaha) Finisher Ya Textuals Not Blessed, Put Garden-Of-Eden (Eating) In Ya HEARTFUL-Chest// Like SLUGS Inverted With MAGGOTS I’m EATIN-HIS-FLESH// |
lol good shit I will post mine in a minute.******************************************* ************************************************** ******
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"In A Minute" Oh Shit.....
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lol no Im juss sayin I am goin to pick up my year book from school. I will be back on in a few minutes.
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Oh Alright Thats Straight Man
.................................................. ..... Do I Have TO Edit By The Way..i Dont Know WHat Lines/Bars Is..Ahahaha |
You Postin Or What Nigga?
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damn dawg thats alot of bold lol...... never........ seen .. ........ so much........ in my........... life
hahahahahaha good shit dawg |
Checkin in. Yea IM postin.
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i think both of you are gay and are fagits^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ ^i licked your penis
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yo nigga Who in tha hell are you callin us Gay When yo shit say "I licked your penis" YOU THA FAG BITCH
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Fuck Noiz!
Throw Yo Motha Fuckin Hand's Up
*AIght Look* I throw *Lyrical Blows* at this hoe, until I see blood running from his nose hole, and both of his elbowes. *Physically Brain Dead* and my Mental Capacity is holding on tight until this kids eye balls turn red.// This kid has some wins but he aint eva *ACTIVE*, he be a couch potato. Ima Flip Yo Script So Bad - Not Even QbSnyper or KnightShades bitch ass could save you . // This kids an Animal that hasen't busted out of the zoo, Ima send you so far back in time, RUN-DMC gonna know you.// I Flow too, unleashing power and forces to keep this kid lit. Notin But Shit!!! I step up and leave yo throat *Slit* I murder I will *Commit* Get a fire *Permit* And dump yo dead body in my *Pit*. *Whiterap19 addresse's members* "Noize is a no show, but fuck *It* - I'll *Spit*. If you wanna use bold, I got that on my screen too, Po-lice still taking pictures to Identify You.// See bro, I can throw punches like this site has never seen. Step up into this ring and I'll cut out yo Splean// So this is Rap Battles? Why don't none of your words rhyme, I feel like Im in *Church* singing a fuckin *Hyme*// You couldn't eva live my life. Fuck Slittin yo throat, *I'll shift yo Lungs wit My KNIFE*// Im a doctor wit out a liscense bout to go into surgery, this kid spits the same lines Iv'e heard before and it's *Lyrical Purgery* // You've heard of me, Instead I'll leave this *Thread* Leave you wit brain damage and a *Swelled-Head* Make you *Stop Dead* Lay you out on a *Truck Bed* Take out my glock, fill yo stomach wit *Lead* Write you some *Fresh* Lines and *Insert* them through the back of yo *Neck*// Stand Back and Scream, "MothaFucka Show Some Respect." You useing rhymes like Fart on a knife? What you getting at... Im finally getting to the point that this kid is whack. Trash in the bin, discraced enough to make *P.Diddy* drop the pen.// Like you got any friends,..? My Ladder to Succes - Was "Stealing" the keys to yo benz.// You is "Obsessed" wit the fact that Im betta than you is, Im a grown man don't speak in soft tones, Treat me like this and I'll crush yo bones!// *Switch Style To End* Check it, Aight bro lemme have my title back, that shit was on lease. NOIZE? (nosie) my ass *Than I better be signed to Disturbing The Peace* |
Sorry that I didn't pull out my dictionary for this battle. I thought maybe I would use some words that members understood. But ya know.
Upp'nnnn |
I gotta say whiterap took this
Because Flow=W punches=W Multis=W Dont need anything else, cos those are what win battles A verse noiz but Whites was better props to both Vote=Whiterap Check this plz http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=56861 |
Poll Vote Man...Dont Forget
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Thanx alot man. Good shit from you too.
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i gotta give my vote to whiterap his shit just flowed better and noiz when you drop dont bold everything it makes all of it hard to read lol but overall whiterap took this with consistency and better punches -1-
vote= whiterap |
wow good battle but i gotta give it to whiterap19
he took this by wordplay alone man nice battle thought noiz i am hitten our battle up now ok checkit Flow=W punches=W Multis=W |
'Our' Battle...What???
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Ahahahaha...LMAO SO HARD I USED SO MUCH BOLD IN THAT I JUST REALIZED IT I SHOULD HAVE JUST KEPT THE WHOLE SHIT BOLD SON...LMFAO STILL
Upping. |
C'mon ya'll. Dont sleep on this shit. Upp'n this up.
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Yo Whiterap Would You Care if In Different Battles I Try And Adopt That Style For A Battle Or Two? Shit Was Hot....
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Man...I'm gonna have to go against the grain here on this one...WhiteRap was nice...the first couple of bars were dope as fuck, but to me...he started to fall off...I didn't really like his rhyme scheme...it sounded like he was keying for an audio the way it was typed out...both had some saucy ass material...but Noiz had some dope ass punches and his flow was on point....this is bout the best battle I seen on this board...
Vote: Noiz Check my shit against Feeble Minded and my Tag Battle against Nuclear Weaponz and Dizzy D...its a wrap... Feeble Minded: http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=57205 Tag Match: http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=56933 |
Thanx man. I understand yo oppinion.
Me 2-0 on the poll. Uppp'nnnnn on this shit. Don't forget to poll vote. |
Upping For Votes...Thanks For The Vote Splitt
Drop A Link And I'm Sure me And White Will Both Try And Hit The Battle Up |
vot noiz
what is this the whiterap parade noiz ate the guy with his multis alone i didnt see many punchs in this battle anyways but the flow from noiz was dope vote noiz |
Aight bro. Thanx still upp'n this sit. Lets get some poll vote on dis shit.
Up'nnnnnnnnnnnn Like my boy Noiz said. Leave a link and we'll hit um up fo u. |
i'm goin with white on this one. i just couldn't feel the other gguys verse. the thing that killed it for him is when he said, "i'm killin this morgue" noiz had some good punches but just feelin whites more. good shit from both.....
ok for some reason it wont let me poll vote. so +1 white if that helps |
Upping For Votes
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You're All Dick Ryders. - Noiz
^TRUE INDEED FROM MY PERSPECTIVE NOIZ WAS MORE ORIGIONAL WITH LESS FILLER & HE STUCK TO RHYMING & I LIKED THE CONSISTENCY & PUNCHES WHITERAP KEPT FALLIN OFF AT CERTAIN POINTS, RHYME WAS OK BUT I JUST WASNT FEELIN ALL THE 4 & 5 LINERS ALSO YOUR PUNCHES WERENT THAT STRONG VOTE=NOIZ COULD U TAKE THE TIME TO HIT THIS UP WHEN U GET A CHANCE? http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=58849 |
Ill be honest. white u my dawg bu im gonna go with niz. those fillers in the middle white was really whack emergency style. both were good drops but im gonna go with noiz. honest^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ ^^^^^^^^^^
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damn..whiterap came fuckin pretty hard at first..then like
its been said before..just straight fell off like fuckin crazy.. man you 24-1 i'd expect sum ill metas but the shit kinda hit wit basic lines..whereas noiz who didn't come as hard as you did in shit that you had in the begginin came wit sum hard consistency to beat..and sum ill metas were in there too Props to both none the less....... - one Vote - Noiz |
Damn I thought both were very good, but honestly I have to go wit white cause I was feelin his more I had to read them both a dew time before I could make my decision,
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aiight...first let me say good battle...and also.....all that boldin and quotin and colorin of the text....WACK!!!......but noiz did come nice......he had more better wordplay then he actually did punches directed to white..........white had nice flow and wordplay also....but his punches came harder and connected feel me?.......i know it sucks to think different then what other people see...but it is the way that it is.......we win some we lose some.....but u keep fightin.......either way...my vote goes to white....but like i said in the beginnin......hell of a battle....1
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took the words outta my mizouth.........hit up my battle vs violent words..........1 |
yo i got tha same problem as Mos...the shit aint lettin
me poll...sorry dawg........................................ - one |
I gotta go with Noiz on this one because Whiterap no hate or anything but your structure was more kindergarden. but it was a good battle!!!! but i am gonna have to go with Noiz on the punches and structure
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