Vortex vs lilbrick005
 

10 Lines
Must Have 1000+ Posts To Vote
Pinkslip Match: If you lose, your IP banned, if i lose, im IP banned.
Lets Go!. .

Ripping this mime, for commiting the crime of spitting a rhyme
Because if your the man of the Hour . . im just Killing the Time.
spilling your lines. . this fake beating me?!. . Are you for real?!
cause this kids Fucking Bananas and still has zero Sex A - Peel
so now how's it feel to get shitted on with no round of applause?
id Introduce ya 2 George Lucas and u still wont have Met A Force!
that text of yours is pathetic, . . how much filler'd you pack in?
fuck Over Reacting. . Brick's straight Bitch and Ovary Acting!
i'll reload then cap him, expose this faggot for tryna flow with me
and leave him Seeing more I.V's than kids studying Roman Numeracy!

Goodbye.

Aight

Faggot your verse was way worse than kids battling with end fillers, this “Gay Faucker” went to “Meet the Parents” of his boyfriend as soon as he saw the movie with “Ben Stiller”
Your verse was struggling like “starving kids” trying to stay alive, I would “feed” off your verse but instead I will make it my “job” to turn your record into another “9 to 5”(9-5)
People the Phuture is about to be forgotten like non important people in the past, the RB sponsor hooked me up with free Prime kicks so I don’t dirty my feet when shove my foot up your ass
After Vortex is banned from this site him and his hand are gonna “engage” in a method called jacking, you are like soon to be “married couples” that are moving together, so you better start packing
I feel sorry for embarrassing you in front of all these people, but you challenged me to a battle, so im gonna send you “Back to the Phuture” like the Rap Battles version of the “Michael J. Fox” sequel.

P.S- i will call you "Jesus" before you die, except that wasn't your "Last Supper" that was your "Last Reply"......!!!!!!!!!!

We will miss you Vortex

OH yea,

Votes:
No crew
No dickriding
No hate(CarsonJet and Feeble Minded both have 1000+post and are prolly gonna vote against me)

Uppin for votes!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!

vote- lil brick.....i felt like he came harder and his punches and flow was better......vortex ur shyt was tight too but he edgeded u out on wordplay and punches........1

ps- return the favor......1

http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthr...&threadid=57587

^ Yeah yeah yeah, fuck off you ignorant little cunt.


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Uppin for Votes!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Vortex Breakdown:
spilling your lines. . this fake beating me?!. . Are you for real?!
Vortex You Used Fillers In Your Verse...That's A Big Mistake, Because It's One More Line For Brick To Beat You With...You Had Some Pretty Good Punches...
i'll reload then cap him, expose this faggot for tryna flow with me
and leave him Seeing more I.V's than kids studying Roman Numeracy!...But In The End
how much filler'd you pack in?
You Are The Only One That 'Packed' Fillers Into Your Verse...
(2 Out Of 5)

Lilbricks Breakdown:
Faggot your verse was way worse than kids battling with end fillers, this “Gay Faucker” went to “Meet the Parents” of his boyfriend as soon as he saw the movie with “Ben Stiller”

You had More Consistency of Multis, Present Of Elevation Above Vortex, And Vocabulary...Creativity Was Good Too...
(3.5 Out Of 5)

This Clearly Gos To Lilbrick...

DAMN EACH TIME LILBRICK SPITS HIS 1ST 2 LINES ITS A WRAP YO
BETTER ORIGIONALITY, HARDER PUNCHES & WORDPLAY
VOTE=LILBRICK

COULD U TAKE THE TIME TO HIT THIS UP WHEN U GET A CHANCE?
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=58849

Uppin for votes!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Uppin for votes!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

w0rd..................tight verse brick...............peace


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4 sum reason three people here cant read....it says over 1000 posts and three of yall have less than that....jus thought id point that out

yup same here...dont know if i have 100 posts yet so i wont vote till i see what i have.......>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>

aite i do...winner= lilbrick...

reason....damn vortex was tight but he didnt have the consistency lilbrick had...>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>.

lil brick killed it wit that jesus line...and the "back to the phuture" shit...tight....and most of his lines basically...

brick can u drop a vote here....

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...15&pagenumber=1

thanks yo....

since the stipulation was only +1000 post people can vote and 3 of lilbricks votes were from people with under 1000 posts...
i set the poll back to 2-0 how it should be, now lets get some real voters in here that actually read both verses...

-Sureal

lets get soem vets up here.

vortex killed this kid. its easy to see,
he packed good punches
in a short bar style and neverhad played or
wack concepts. lil brick your an idiot if you think
that is a good verse. dont quote your shit, those steez
are like '00. and shorten your bars.
the opening ben stiller line made me want to kill you.

^get off his nuts for once....damn......if vortex drop one line....u wud still jock him....thats all u do....i won't even vote cuz i know the response it will get....but brick easily took this battle.....EASILY........i thought vortex's verse was straight....but brick ate him.....good by tex............1

If people seriously think he won, and he wins by votes - i'll leave.

2-0 i guess.

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This Is Fucking Pathetic,


Now The End Do You See Why We Said Fuck RB...

My Jesus Christ.


vortex took this with more complexity harder hitting punches,
and creative material

on the other hand

lilbrick005 had extreme played material
few punches
and just a bull shit verse.

either way....i don't think vortex should go strait up.......its competition...plus........thats one less cat i won't be able to mess wit...lol.........peril eyez......i still luv u....*smooches*

Peril Eyes stop hating 7 people say that i won (7 people in a row), you and Phrantik just hating on me cause you guys dont want your friend to leave. as i said NO HATE VOTES~!!!!!!!!!!!!

^ Ok, save the flirting for AIM ladies. .

If he wins, im leaving - we agreed on the rules and im a man of my word, id expect the same of him if he lost.

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COMPREHENSIVE BREAKDOWN. .

Vortex

Ripping this mime, for commiting the crime of spitting a rhyme
Because if your the man of the Hour . . im just Killing the Time.
(Decent Opener, 6/10)

spilling your lines. . this fake beating me?!. . Are you for real?!
cause this kids Fucking Bananas and still has zero Sex A - Peel
(Cool Wordplay, 7.5/10)

so now how's it feel to get shitted on with no round of applause?
id Introduce ya 2 George Lucas and u still wont have Met A Force!
(Good punch. . George Lucas = Star Wars director, correct? 8/10)

that text of yours is pathetic, . . how much filler'd you pack in?
fuck Over Reacting. . Brick's straight Bitch and Ovary Acting!
(Your worst line, still decent. . 5/10)

i'll reload then cap him, expose this faggot for tryna flow with me
and leave him Seeing more I.V's than kids studying Roman Numeracy!
(Good finisher, gave Ali a chuckle. . 8/10)

TOTAL: 34.5/50

Lil Brick 005

Faggot your verse was way worse than kids battling with end fillers, this “Gay Faucker” went to “Meet the Parents” of his boyfriend as soon as he saw the movie with “Ben Stiller”
(Kind of an old metaphor, effective, I suppose. . 5/10)

Your verse was struggling like “starving kids” trying to stay alive, I would “feed” off your verse but instead I will make it my “job” to turn your record into another “9 to 5”(9-5)
(Cool concept, flow wasn't too good. . 6/10)

People the Phuture is about to be forgotten like non important people in the past, the RB sponsor hooked me up with free Prime kicks so I don’t dirty my feet when shove my foot up your ass
(Hurt you badly. . Bad flow, bad concept. . 4/10)

After Vortex is banned from this site him and his hand are gonna “engage” in a method called jacking, you are like soon to be “married couples” that are moving together, so you better start packing
(Another lackluster line. . 4/10)

I feel sorry for embarrassing you in front of all these people, but you challenged me to a battle, so im gonna send you “Back to the Phuture” like the Rap Battles version of the “Michael J. Fox” sequel
(Personal was OK. . Flow, again, bad. . 6/10)

P.S- i will call you "Jesus" before you die, except that wasn't your "Last Supper" that was your "Last Reply"......!!!!!!!!!!
(I guess it was supposed to be a finisher. . Better flow, you could've made this killer, though. . 7/10)

Since Brick had six bars, I'll be generous and drop his lowest score, but he still comes up short (and he would even if we kept it). .

Total: 28/50


Clean battle. . Vortex's structure basically won it for him. Brick, work on the flow, and you would've had a fair chance.. Unfortunately, it'll have to be on another site.


WINNER: Vortex

since this if for a pinkslip i will break it down better then i do most battles...

Ripping this mime, for commiting the crime of spitting a rhyme
Because if your the man of the Hour . . im just Killing the Time.
this was kind of played but you flipped it nice

spilling your lines. . this fake beating me?!. . Are you for real?!
cause this kids Fucking Bananas and still has zero Sex A - Peel
that was a nice line,

so now how's it feel to get shitted on with no round of applause?
id Introduce ya 2 George Lucas and u still wont have Met A Force!
ok line, nothign to great

that text of yours is pathetic, . . how much filler'd you pack in?
fuck Over Reacting. . Brick's straight Bitch and Ovary Acting!

very nice wordpaly

i'll reload then cap him, expose this faggot for tryna flow with me
and leave him Seeing more I.V's than kids studying Roman Numeracy!

LMAO i liked that line alot, your most orignal line in this whole battle

lilbrick005
Aight

Faggot your verse was way worse than kids battling with end fillers, this “Gay Faucker” went to “Meet the Parents” of his boyfriend as soon as he saw the movie with “Ben Stiller”
ok wordplay but nothing to great

Your verse was struggling like “starving kids” trying to stay alive, I would “feed” off your verse but instead I will make it my “job” to turn your record into another “9 to 5”(9-5)

nice personal, probabley your best line

People the Phuture is about to be forgotten like non important people in the past, the RB sponsor hooked me up with free Prime kicks so I don’t dirty my feet when shove my foot up your ass
nice concept and it was a personal but it seemed forced didnt really flow that good

After Vortex is banned from this site him and his hand are gonna “engage” in a method called jacking, you are like soon to be “married couples” that are moving together, so you better start packing
that line was gay

I feel sorry for embarrassing you in front of all these people, but you challenged me to a battle, so im gonna send you “Back to the Phuture” like the Rap Battles version of the “Michael J. Fox” sequel.

played

P.S- i will call you "Jesus" before you die, except that wasn't your "Last Supper" that was your "Last Reply"......!!!!!!!!!!

kind of played i heard it flipped in diffrent ways....

vote = voretex, i think he was more consistant through the whole battle, the other guy fell off at the end and his lines didnt hit as hard.....

I know i saw the rules 1000 posts only

but i wanna put my two cents in............im registered to poll vote but i will if u two allow it................

The Breakdown.......My way

Ripping this mime, for commiting the crime of spitting a rhyme
Because if your the man of the Hour . . im just Killing the Time.
^^....Sick..read between the lines.....8 out of 10

spilling your lines. . this fake beating me?!. . Are you for real?!
cause this kids Fucking Bananas and still has zero Sex A - Peel
^^....Slick..yeah slick punch.......7 out of 10

so now how's it feel to get shitted on with no round of applause?
id Introduce ya 2 George Lucas and u still wont have Met A Force
^^...so,so..........6 out of 10

that text of yours is pathetic, . . how much filler'd you pack in?
fuck Over Reacting. . Brick's straight Bitch and Ovary Acting!
^^....last line was good.....7 out of 10

i'll reload then cap him, expose this faggot for tryna flow with me
and leave him Seeing more I.V's than kids studying Roman Numeracy!
^^ pure originality....10 out of 10

Next Verse

Faggot your verse was way worse than kids battling with end fillers, this “Gay Faucker” went to “Meet the Parents” of his boyfriend as soon as he saw the movie with “Ben Stiller”
^^........was not feelin that at all........5 out of 10

Your verse was struggling like “starving kids” trying to stay alive, I would “feed” off your verse but instead I will make it my “job” to turn your record into another “9 to 5”(9-5)
^^.........you have to spit fast to pull this off....7 out of 10

People the Phuture is about to be forgotten like non important people in the past, the RB sponsor hooked me up with free Prime kicks so I don’t dirty my feet when shove my foot up your ass
^^....good last line bad set up though....6 out of 10

After Vortex is banned from this site him and his hand are gonna “engage” in a method called jacking, you are like soon to be “married couples” that are moving together, so you better start packing
^^.....so,so .......7 out of 10

I feel sorry for embarrassing you in front of all these people, but you challenged me to a battle, so im gonna send you “Back to the Phuture” like the Rap Battles version of the “Michael J. Fox” sequel.
^^ very loooong and bad ending...5 out of 10....

total count.......
VorteX=38

LilBrick=30

Vortex gets my vote.......i can poll vote..... tell me if u two want me too.........If not i had to let my opinion out here.....

Thank u.....

and before you call me a dickrider, just thought i would let you know that i was one of the only people on this site that said voretex shouldnt get his mod spot back, and he was also pissed off at me for spamming links to rap battles at another board he posts on........

Vote - lil brick

Kick Vex off the site already. .

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Since you guys like to breakdown so much let me breakdown these guys that just voted for vortex

Phrantik-dickrider to the fullest

Peril Eyez- i can tell he's a dickrider because he said my material was played and no one on rap battles has used my concepts before EXCEPT ME

Lyricali-so now how's it feel to get shitted on with no round of applause?
id Introduce ya 2 George Lucas and u still wont have Met A Force!
(Good punch. . George Lucas = Star Wars director, correct? 8/10)
^ this guy doesn't even understand the meta thats why he asked if george lucas was the star wars director...i gotta laugh cause you know nuttin and you gave it an 8 and it was his worse line (applause and force dont even rhyme)

C-section-P.S- i will call you "Jesus" before you die, except that wasn't your "Last Supper" that was your "Last Reply"......!!!!!!!!!!

kind of played i heard it flipped in diffrent ways....
^ that wasn't part of my verse and there is NO PLACE ON THE INTERNET YOU HEARD THAT LINE...i battle on rapflava,rap legends, and other threads and NO ONE HAS USED ANYTHING OF THAT SORT. so i know you are lying.

Bribeone-i'll reload then cap him, expose this faggot for tryna flow with me
and leave him Seeing more I.V's than kids studying Roman Numeracy!
^^ pure originality....10 out of 10

You gave that a 10...hahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahaha i wont even comment on you.

If you look at the voters they are straight dickriders, but if that's how Vortex gets his wins, do what you gotta do. EVERYONE ON RB knows that i won this battle and not only won but one with ease!!!!!!!(you dickriders want to get me off because i am competition but FUCK YALL)

^ Wouldnt competetion be BETTER for the site?

Just a thought. .


Vex is gone now anyways, so it dosent matter. You really showed him what a vet is that time my man. .

Where did Vortex go. did he leave?............................................ .................................................

^ Yes, that was the rules of the match, the loser leaves the site.
He left earlier when it was 5-0 your way, you got the votes, you won - He lost so he has to leave the site.

Have fun posting here, vet.

Im Not dickriding shit.....notice i didnt poll vote....... im just giving my opinion.....What my opinion doesnt go with yours..so it doesnt count is that how that works?.........oh wait this does....

Posted by Camarac



^ ^ but let me guess that does.....

Im not hatin on anybody here im not Dick riding anybody here..I just happened to come across this battle and i wanted to put my 2 Fucking cents in.......who the fuck are u to laugh at my opinion..
I liked it ...gave it a 10 so what......

How do you know all of this?
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Bribe - get at me on aim: illerthanyall, i want to speak to you.


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Bribeone1 i aint gonna even reply to you. you obviously dont know anything about rhyming, you didn't even give me and 8 on any of my punches *which were better than his* and you give him a 10 on a punch that had filler packed in it.

I got at him on AIM and asked him, thats how i know.

Well done kid.

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Then maybe i dont know shit bout rhyming.......but hey u are allowed to have an opinion so let that be it............

^ Okay I dont have 1000 post but phuck it im voting anyway..

This is obserd, Vortex took this battle hands down..

Rap is about flow! And please tell me where you saw any flow in your verse lilbrick...

Vortex was original, FLOWED! and was overall better...
I wont let Vortex leave over some Dick Rhyder Votes for LilFag here

Vote: Vortex!