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Hard Hittin Flow - Like No Other........
yall know that noone comes close to my flow
yall may got better lines on me, but yall know u cant compete with my style aight, this was made with 2 ppl in mind West, and other one i cant mention.... enjoy [p.s. it starts a lil slow, please read it all] __________________________________________________ _ Expressin Emotion to a Certain Somebody I....... hate what u stand-fo'. u used to be my right hand man doe I love when i lie to you, but now i grind u like sand-stone I love wearin this mask where you think im ur boy "were u just talkin bout me?" "quit bein so paranoid" take a steroid so u can flex to my pythons fights on, so you best sleep with the lights on i got my sights locked on, to blow ur brain-out refrain-now, stay-down, called then sprayed-out bring pain-BLAOW when these slugs bang-out sustain-doubt, but dont say i lost when shells slang-out ur not my mayne-now, on my list of shame-now played-out, like cards when u get layed-down pal *POW* who got slayed-now life taken-POW whos fakin-now with ur legs breakin-pal when the 12 gauge sprays-ya down at the bottom of a lake-pal im ok-now i can maintain-now in a grave-now, the friendship we once had cant stay-now Expressin Emotion its flowin from broken senses Barrel smokin cuz u chokin because of this Freestylin, im not even stoppin to think i hate the fact we share the same air we breathe i hope u sleep and ur heart stops fuckin pumpin now dont u wish u didnt make sumthin outta nuthin 4-10's thumpin when we got .45 shells in-um we sent-um, u need a hand i lent-um u sent me bars and i bent-um victims, u been-one, i been their for u and den-sum u cant win-um, hearts on ur sleave cuz i pinned-um u been-dum u wanted sum i even lent u my big-gun __________________________________________________ __ aight, that was key styled, and i ran out of werds i didnt look up from the key board but like 2ce in 5 minutes so theres prolly some spelling errors.... |
I was def. digging this
Gangsta shit right here 8/10 |
thanx dog, i just in the mood to write u know, i diggin the pic, dude sittin there with 2 desert eagles aimed, thats the shit
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Godd stuff,Who u talkin bout in tha ryhme though ? Got me intreaged.
Peace |
i said u were one of them
but theres another who contributed more....... u only got involved in a lil itty bit of it |
who the other guy
give us a clue |
naw dog, cant do all that, chances are u dunno him anyway lol
but it is good huh? shit, im just experimenting with flow, usaly id be more violent or soft, but im just tryna go till i run out of werds lately if u want tips on how to write like this listen to Twista or Tech N9ne, and str8 creative wit it, listen to Krayzie Bone solo songs..... or Bizzy Bone |
this was nice favourite bit in da middle...
I love wearin this mask where you think im ur boy "were u just talkin bout me?" "quit bein so paranoid" take a steroid so u can flex to my pythons fights on, so you best sleep with the lights on i got my sights locked on, to blow ur brain-out refrain-now, stay-down, called then sprayed-out bring pain-BLAOW when these slugs bang-out sustain-doubt, but dont say i lost when shells slang-out just rolled off da tongue easy...nice stuff |
yea, best part is, i just wrote i didnt really have to stop, i did once cuz i didnt like
then strangle ur mom wit ur blood stand-towel ^^ wack, like i said i just keyed it... anyway, thanx for the feedback |
wait, u thought that i wass gunna let this fall? hahahahaha hell no
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..Kapone you ripped a tight keystyle right there
Definitly on point, Middle was dope! Stay up dawg, keep being dope lol.. |
yo nice shit man, i was feelin it and it was tight dawg, keep dat shit up................................................ .......
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thanx yall
im just experamentin uppin |
this was mad ill, i liked the flow(duhhh it is the part of the title) so thats already at the top,
i was feelin the lines and everything was mad hott, 9/10 still missing some element to it but still a hot piece. can you check out my new open mic-The Skitzo:me vs. me |
to.the.top
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aight, one more fuckin time bofore i get pissed off
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ima get fuckin pissed if i dont get some replys
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was an ok read...
Flow was ok, not amazing like you claiming...but more on point than alot ive seen around here.... |
aight, match it
thats all i say.... match it |
liked the flow......
flowed like a charm man |
nice.. this was what I was say'n yesterday yo... your flow was alot smoother in this one.. had some descent lines an' shit, you can tell it would actually sound god unlike most the shit on this site... only a few can actuall bomb on a track, anyone can write crap.. lol.. good shit dun.
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aight, cuz thats my lifes mission to appeal to blunt MC
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lol.... real funny yo..
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nice peice man .... this would make a nice audio... style reminded me of joe budden .. i was feelin these lines the most at the bottom of a lake-pal im ok-now i can maintain-now
in a grave-now, the friendship we once had cant stay-now overall tight drop... keep at it .. `1 |
thanx dog uppin
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yea playa........shit was madd sicc..........stay up....peace -1- |
goin superman
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Nice spit...i like the flow also..keep elivating
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Nice spit...i like the flow also..keep elivating
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Man, I`m Sorry But This . . . Was Weak .
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Don't use fake words to rhyme, know what I mean? Quote:
Nope . .. Just Isnt Workin.. Quote:
yeah .. you need work . . . not feeling this the least.. |
yea thats great, you are now herb of the week
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Ha, hes the herb of the week that pink slipped
oyou lmao |
to.the.top
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^HELLO
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i love kapone:) he's my boy.
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