MAKAVELII(needs to learn to get wit the challange) vs ying
 

Aight ew are re-doing this because bitch was haveing a fit.

Rulz:
10-15 lines
No crew, d/r, hate votes
U spit first
24 hours to reply


Now that I did tihs shit you better respond in the 24 hour time limit or your screwed.

really dawg aite then .didnt u already spit put that shit up..your the bitch havin a fit over a no show ..when u just set that shit up mayne..so your to pussy to flow first ok...

here ya go homie..post your shit already..u already have one for me rite..

Holy shit ya games near to defeat reppin no show votes/
fuked wit me now your deceast last name ying u must be fresh of dem boats/
my rhymes meet ya ear drums so pull out that pen an pad/
start writin hear it comes homie these other cats just as bad/
im lyrical versityle switchin my style u steppin to a mad man/
madly seekin for money fame power an respect/
bitch i no u next u aint got nogame bout to be slapped wit my teck
i created a hit list an ya names first to be crossed out/
ya flows gettin tossed out splitten ya wig u just got knocked out/
lyin on my bloc bloody wit a fuked up face kid/
my verses are payments ill plaster your ass to the pavement/
so save it ya spits aint close to average my games savage/
ill erase this problem an cash in causin mad havec/
your werent ready for me so i advise u to bounce/
im steady spitten out flows till my teeth fall out/

Man, in the open call I set rules, you wanted to do it, so follow the rules, go first. We are starting over again, got that, no nfair advantages, no hatin either, it was my mistake.

YEA I POSTED MAYNE.. JUST SPIT SUMTHIN SO I CAN GET ANOTHER BATTLE..I DOUBT U GOIN TO WIN.UNLESS THERES DIK RIDERS INTHIS SITE..WHICH I HAVENT SEEN..NO CREW VOTES..HOWMANY VOTES TILL U WIN 5..SPIT SUMTHIN

Fuck this fuck that, can't you write a rhyme without swear words comeing out of your ass//
Why are you trying to outsmart me with that little vocabulary, that shit's out og my lyrical class//
My ryhmes are stone and you punches are just like glass, ill smash through them while takeing a judo stick to your ass//
Don't try to intimidate with those words, trying to incriminate me makes it even worse//
I bet I could get a monkey smarter thne you to write over your verse//
Money, fame, power, respect, those are things you shouldent be thinking about right now//
Cuz Im right here running you raggid with a busted ass snow plow//
I bet your getting tiered of reading this by now, arnt you//
Would you like it better if I stopped, went to your house, opended you mouth and took a poo//
Oh and by the way, if your teeth feel out you couldent rhyme//
Wait a minute, you couldent rhyme in the first place, what am I talking about, your rhymes are just easy as minute-made-lemon-lime//
Basic shit is the way you might be going, trying to go that why might get your jollies goin//
Beleive my lyrics will shower over you just like the mississippi, flowin//
Next time you want to step up to an actual pro, remember they like to take their time with slow ass hoe's//
So remember, next time you want to actually battle, make you sure you don't appear to be yourself, a no show//

Aight chill out Elton John, I jsut spit, so lets get some votes in here.

Uppin
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WTF ELTON JOHN..WOW YOUR A FAG.

UPPIN FOR SUM VOTES..SO THIS BITCH HAS A LOSSIN RECORD.
UPPIN.REAL VOTES READ BOTH.. CUZ I NO IF U NO THE RAP GAME U NO WHO TO VOTE FOR.HONESTLY YING YA SHIT WAS ABUNCH OF JIBER JABER..BUT WELL SEE.
UPPIN

yo my vote goes to ying, he had better punches nice flo and a better mettie, oh and can yall go vote on my battle at

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...1986#post551986

since i voted on this battle

iight thx
holla,

-Purple Haze

Hmmm... seems to me that someone is jealous, besides right now you are just saying, "vote for me I am better". You a fucken big headed bitch.

Yeah 5 losses, 5 wins, yep, at least I have a record. Besides why don't you battle G UNIT like I did, or K-Crazy, the good people, man your the pussy.

ANy one want to vote on a decent battle...UPPIN
WE NEED SUM VOTES IN THIS BIZNATCH
UPPIN..COME ON PEEP..WHERE DEM VOTES AT.I JUST GOT ON THIS SITE A FEW DAYS AGO THATS WHY..SO STOP BITCHIN
UPPIN FOR SUMVOTES

Well then don't make fun of my record, so please just stop hatin, learn to realy appreciate the people who you battle, instead of just dissing on tme, unless they actually bitchin on you, lucky for you Im patient with dumbasses.

THERE YA GO HOMIE U KEEP TALKIN SHIT SHUTTHE FUK UP.. AN LET PEEPS VOTES MAYNE.. I DOUBT THEY EVEN THIS IS A BATTLE NOW..DAMN STOP BITCHIN MAYNE..HERES MY VERSE TO THOSE PEEPS WHO DONT NO FROM ALL THIS FREE POSTIN THIS CAT DOES.

Holy shit ya games near to defeat reppin no show votes/
fuked wit me now your deceast last name ying u must be fresh of dem boats/
my rhymes meet ya ear drums so pull out that pen an pad/
start writin hear it comes homie these other cats just as bad/
im lyrical versityle switchin my style u steppin to a mad man/
madly seekin for money fame power an respect/
bitch i no u next u aint got nogame bout to be slapped wit my teck
i created a hit list an ya names first to be crossed out/
ya flows gettin tossed out splitten ya wig u just got knocked out/
lyin on my bloc bloody wit a fuked up face kid/
my verses are payments ill plaster your ass to the pavement/
so save it ya spits aint close to average my games savage/
ill erase this problem an cash in causin mad havec/
your werent ready for me so i advise u to bounce/
im steady spitten out flows till my teeth fall out/

this is a close one
Yings verse was a long one
tryin to defend himself which
doesn't really count as punches
so im gonna have to give this one
to makavel because not only did
he come hard for a newbie but he
had a couple of good multies, this
is a pretty close battle and ying
when u battle don't defend urself
because a lot a people hate feeders, trust
me, i tried that before
vote=Makavel 2
Peace

both were bad....makavelli's was worse...made no sense.....
ying..contradicts himself right off the bat...i dun get it...
both of ya gotta elevate...no hate..i give this vote to ying...
slightly betta sense an maybe a lil harder punches....
ELEVATE....

vote- ying......he had betta flow and punches vote ying...

btw drop a vote on this me vs violentwords

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=57587

Dude your the one freeposting.

Ace-Thanks for the feedback, I am trying to learn not to defend, it really doesent work, but thanks for the feedback none the less.

aite ..fo sho..uppin for sum votes..thanks for the bak to whom it may concern..
Uppin hfdhfdhfdshsdhdshhdfshsdfhdsfhsdfhsdfhdsfhhrsddh

aite here it is:

flow- ying
vocab- makavelii
wordplay- ying
punches- ying
makaveli had a few multis

it was pretty close but yea.. vote- ying

damn ying u takin all dem votes.coo battle tho i give u props..its close to over tho..i doubt i can get 4 votes strate..even tho i thought my shit was better..maybe a round 2..sumtime..u down?

UPPIN FOR SUM FUKIN VOTES..4 STRATE TO BE EXACT

Yeah man, for a noob your shit is pretty good, I mean even I wasent that good when I got here, no hard feelings. Yeah, maybe in the future we can battle again, maybe ill get to be your only loss for like 30 battles.

Uppin for those votes, 1 vote actually.

OMGGGGGGGGGGGGGG MANNN YING YO SHIT SUCKED MUTHAFUCKINN ASSSS I NEVA SEEN ANYTHIN THAT WEAK NOT EVEN COMIN FROM WILL SMITH FUCKKK MANNN SAVE THAT RHYME MAYBE YOU COULD SEE IT TO A DISNEY MOVIE OR SUMTHIN LMAOOOOO YO MAKEVELI TOOK DIS ONE EVEN THO HE DIDNT COME THAT HARD, BUT FUCKK YING WIT YO VERSE SHIT U JUS LOST THA BATTLE ALL BY YOURSELFFF!!!

CALL ME A NOOB AGAIN AN ILL BRAKE YA FUKIN FACE....

uppin for sum votes..1111111111111111111111111111111111111111111 11111111111111111111111111111111111111111111111111 1

Noob, noob, noob, and noob again, wow my face really hurts, don't get mad just ask me to stop saying it.

AmericanDream 0-2 is all I got to say.

foreal amircan dreamz in the only one that can see that yings flow was a fukin hater message..the wackest thing ive heard.i dont no how im down in this battle,,..
UPPIN FOR SUM VOTES..AMERICAN DREAMS GET 80 POSTS IN SO U CANT VOTE.

YOO FO REAL THOOO MA RECORD MAY BE 0-2 BUT DATS CUZ THERE IS A LOTTA HATERS UP ON DIS SITE U HEARD AND PLUS IN ONE OF MA BATTLES HOMEBOY ASKED FO VOTES STRAIGHT UP SO DAT SHIT PROLLY WONT COUNT~~

Well isant that two bad, I don't whine about shit that I lost, stop free posting in here and try to win something for once, thanks.

Uppin
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I FEEL YA MAYNE THIS BATTLES STILL ON//UPPIN FOR SUM VOTES 4 STRATE TO BE EXACT..DAMN SUM U CATS DONT LIKE TO VOTE..

UPPIN FOREAL IM UPPIN............................

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UPPIN

Alright people it really isant that hard to press a button or two, get this over wit.

Uppin for votes.

Ying, I cant hit this up..........Maka is in my crew.............................................. .................................................. .................................................. .................................................. ......

im not in ya crew yet i need 3 wins on my sheet an sum more posts...but soon proly by the end of today...uppin for sum votes after u vote hear hit up me vs.persian playa..thanks..-one

yo maka you done your battles lets battle aight............................................. .................................................. ..................

naw i aint done yet... i need sum votes homie.. i aint tryin to lose to this ying fool his shit was wak..dont worry well battle..
i need su mvotes tho....UPPIN

lol, ying dawg.
Deff. improved from wen we first battled
I'd be interested in a re-match
Anyways

Reason: Much Shorter, Funnier verse all in all, keep elevating dawg. "fuck you fuck this" lol, nice vers man.

VOTE: YING